Aankhon ki gustaakhiyaan pt5 pg66 17/12 - Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the concept starting with the ending...
continue soon :)
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Part 1: Mere Khwabon main jo aaye (The one who comes in my dreams!)


6 days to the wedding.


"Eeek.. what is this?" Payal screamed, as she opened a bag and took out a transparent lacy red lingerie. The girls gathered around her giggled.

Preetika touched Payal's shoulder and said, "Payal, this is for your suhaag raat." Payal blushed and everyone else giggled.

"Yes, Buaji, we will sleep soon. Don't worry". Khushi screamed as she closed the door with one hand, a tray with a plate of jalebis and glasses of mango juice in the other. She turned around and looked at the six girls sitting on the floor. Gifts and open gift wrappers were strewn all over the floor. It was Payal's bachelorette party and Payal was sitting on the floor among giggling girls opening gifts.

"Girls, girls, please, keep it down. Buaji and Amma are complaining that you are making too much noise.". Khushi said as she sat down and placed the tray on the floor.

Khushi hugged Payal and said, smiling, "Jiji, are you having fun?"

Payal smiled. "Khushi, you didn't have to do this."

"Jiji, a few days later you will leave this house, leave all of us. We just wanted to.." Her eyes filled up with tears and Payal hugged her again.

"Khushi, that reminds me", Preetika said with a naughty smile on her face. "Now that Payal is getting married, it will be your turn soon." Khushi pulled away from Payal, her eyes open wide and stared at Preetika.

"I am not getting married." Khushi said annoyed.

"Yeah, Preeto." Payal giggled. "I doubt we can find anyone who can handle her craziness!"

"Payal", Sanaya said, "You know that's not true. All the guys in the neighborhood want to get married to Khushi."

"Yup, but I don't want to get married to any of them!" Khushi said, folding her arms, an arrogant smirk on her face.

"Really?" Preeto asked, a smile on her face. "Then? Who will you get married to?"

"Hmm.." Khushi stood up on her feet and walked to the window. She looked at the full moon that lit up the night sky. She smiled, watching the twinkling stars. "I will marry someone who loves me more than anyone else on this earth. Loves me madly, passionately. Someone who takes care of my needs without me having to say it. Someone who would go to any lengths to make me happy. Someone who '"

"Khushi.. Khushi.. " Preeto giggled. "Woah, that's a lot of requirements.."

Khushi turned around with a wide grin on her face. "Oh, I am not done. He should have Shahrukh's charm", she said dreamy-eyed, "Salman's poise", she shook her hips, "Imran's attitude", she said fluttering her eyelids, "Farhan's smile", she gave a naughty smile, "and Hrithik's body!" she said, dreamy-eyed, with a deep sigh.

Everyone burst into laughter and Khushi looked at them, annoyed, before collapsing down on the floor.

She smiled, and said, "No, seriously. I want him to be a nice person, kind with words.. ".

"What the f..., HP!" Arnav screamed. "Why is my coffee cold?"

"always cheerful.."

Arnav stared at HP, his eyes fuming with anger.

"respect elders.."

"Nani, how many times have I told you I don't want to discuss about marriage. I don't want to get married and that's final!"

"respect women.."

"Di, I have fun with women.. I don't marry them!"

"and .." "Khushi", Preetika grabbed Khushi's arms and shook her. "Enough. Enough. At this rate you will never get married. Where will we find you a guy like this?" Everyone giggled. Khushi smiled and thought to herself. I will find him, and soon!

Arnav turned around, his back facing Nani and Di. "I said once and I am saying again, I don't want to get married, not now, not ever. I am happy the way I am."

Anjali placed her hand on Arnav's shoulder. He turned around to look at her. "Chotte, what kind of girl do you like? At least tell us that! Maybe if we find you a girl like that, maybe you will want to get married to her."

Arnav raised his eyebrows. "Really? Hmm.. let me think."

"Stylish. Sexy. Gorgeous." He smiled.

Khushi swayed her hips as she walked from side to side, imitating Payal's future mother-in-law.

"Definitely not orthodox and religious."

"Hai Devi Maiyya!" Khushi screamed, as she hit her head against the bedpost.

"Refined. Cultured. Ladylike."

"Khushi, eat slowly." Payal screamed, as Khushi stuffed her mouth with jalebies.

"and.." "Enough, Chotte." Nani said, sternly. "You are getting married to a girl we choose and that's it. We will find you a girl by the end of this week and you will get married to her. That is my promise to you!"

Nani turned around and started walking away. Arnav glared at her, as she stopped and turned around to face him, with a mocking smile on her face. "Who do you think you got your stubborn genes from!" Anjali giggled. Arnav fumed. Nani turned around and walked away.

Precap

"Chotte, girls don't fall from the sky." Arnav started to say something, when he heard a scream. He looked up to see a girl fall sideways from the top of the stairs. He opened his arms, instinctively and caught her as she fell. They looked into each other's eyes. Nani and Anjali stared at Arnav, with Khushi in his arms and then looked at each other and smiled. "Maybe they do, Nani." Anjali giggled.


Arnav and Khushi are a lot like they are in the show, but the only difference is that they both are very flirtatious.. they use their charm to get what they want.. trust me, there is a lot of naughtiness coming up.. sigh! isn't this just what you wanted to make up for the rona dhona coming up in the show! πŸ˜†


and btw, the above part was supposed to be very filmy.. hope you enjoyed it.. please do leave your comments!

Edited by boreddamsel - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey nice one...πŸ˜‰
just waiting for the next part ...update soon...
and thanks for the pm...πŸ€—
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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW
WELL THESE TWO ARE SO NOT DESCRIBING EACH OTHER ARE THEY
JUST THE OPPOSITE OF EACH OTHER YET THEY WILL END UP WITH EACH OTHER
THIS IS SO GONNA BE FUN
LOOKING FORWARD TO THIS SINCE THE SHOW IS TOO DEPRESSING AT THE MOMENT
THANK YOU FOR CHEERING US UP YOU ARE THE BEST
CHEERS FOR PM

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Posted: 13 years ago
Luved it but wanted to ask is there going to be an epilogue cuz the last chapi is already written...so was wondering cuz I would luv one
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Posted: 13 years ago
I love the title of the chapter a lot coz DDLJ is my all time fav movie. U portrayed the difference between arnav and khushi and thier ideas of a perfect partner very well. I could totally imagine seeing it on screen
Awesome part, looking frwd to more
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely start...
Its very filmy kind...Loved how u showed how both r soo different from what they want in there life partners...
Fabulous precap... πŸ˜›
Cant wait...Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aw that was short but sweet thanksp
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Posted: 13 years ago
Love the update =) =)

Continue soon =) =)

Like this concept =) =) WAiting for the next part =) =)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Eagerly waiting for the next part..awesome..thnx for the pm

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