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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

u know as a rule I never read teasers...never..u know why...just because this is what happens

tumhari theri hansi...humara katal
intezaar mein le logi meri jaan



really di, u never read any teaser then why this time?????
hehehehe... well update to monday mein hi karungi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
inersting teaser...

loved it very much...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...

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Posted: 12 years ago
chalo geet ki intezaari ab khatam hone wali hai
maan is back
waiting for full part
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for the nxt update dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome teaser...
waiting 4 d update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi thanks 4 da pm n lovely teaser! update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superbb teaser nehu can't wait update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago




Thank you so much for the love…. Loved to reading your feedback……

Muah….. love you all…



part-31



Dadi-annie, learn something from geet….don't know, what will she do after her marriage? Dekhiye she is making Bottle Gourd Fudge….


Annie-Bottle gourd…. Ewww….. waise bhi dadi…. Servants to honge na waha… then worry for what…


Dadi-servants to yaha bhi hai…. But geet is doing work na…. then why can't you?


Geet-dadi maa, don't scold her…. I'll teach her….


Annie- ye huyi na baat….. achha geet, when you will finish with this then pls help me for my outfit which I am going to wear at night…..


Geet-of course….. dadi maa, taste this…. She put the mixture in a bowl and gave it to dadi for the taste….


Dadi-it's perfect….. annie, try this… I am sure you'll like it…. Annie made face then taste a little bit… she liked it….. it's nice…. Annie replied…. (well, I really don't like bottle gourd fudge… even I didn't like any kind of sweets….. )


Dadi-geet, kept it in a big plate after then it will be in shape…. Dadi helped her little bit and annie gave the burger to nakul…. He hesitate a little bit but after then took it because dadi told him… they finished the work in kitchen and geet & annie went in her room…. Annie showed her dresses to geet,

Geet-wait a min…. I'll show you my dress….


Annie-ok….. geet went in her room and took the dress….. geet showed her dress to geet…

Annie-wow, it's so pretty…. I am confused between these two…. Geet helped her in choosing the dress and then matching jewelry…

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Maan-guys, finish your packing… we have to leave in half an hour….

Ash & Rey- okay bhai….

Maan-adi, check the flight details… dekho kahi flight late to nahi because of this weather….

Adi-ok sir.. just a min…. adi called to Airlines…. And checked about the flight and timing….. sir, everything is on time… we have to leave now….

Maan-hmm…!!..

they all check out from the hotel and headed towards the Airport…. Maan really wanted to be at home today but unfortunately stuck with work…. But he didn't forget that today is janmashtami…. How can he forget that, maan used to kept fast on janmashtami with his mother & dadi…. Dadi denied him every time but he was stubborn…. Once maan met with an accident and after that his mother used to keep fast for his safety and in return maan kept fast….. maan used to be Krishna kanhaiya in his childhood and used to took part in school plays…. They took their seats in the flight and settled theirselves….. maan closed his eyes and missed his mom like a hell today….


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On the other hand in DELHI…… geet, annie are getting ready…… it's janmashtami and they will go to temple where they will perform today……. They have so many hours but still they are getting ready…. Means taking out their dresses and jewelries where ved was bugging their head with his questions about janmashtami , like what is this fest? What will they do this day? , what will they do in temple? Etc… etc….. and annie and geet patiently replying him………

Vedanta-mama,…..

Geet-………… no reply………


Ved went near her and pulled her dupatta for gaining her attention….. actually from past an hour he was bugging her head with silly questions and now she was tired of giving answers and she was busy in her wardrobe…. That's why she doesn't replying him……


Ved-mama….. listen…..


Geet-haanbeta..bolo….still looking in her cupboard searching something……


Ved-mama, papa kab aayenge? I am missing him…. he made crying baby face… geet suddenly looked down at his face, she knew that he is missing maan like hell eventually she too missing him like hell but couldn't tell to anyone…… geet went on her knees and kissed on his cheek wetting it….. he immediately wiped his cheek with the sleeves and made cranky face….


Ved-mama, you always made my cheek wet….. and papa too….. she smiled at his antics, annie went in dadi's room for asking something……………


Geet-ale… mera bacha….. promise… I won't do wet your cheek again…. Pakka wala promise….. she held her throat, ved was melting but still showing his fake anger……..


Ved-no, you always promise me and then again make my cheek wet…..it's so yuck….


Geet-achha baba…. Nahi krungi… she said while pulling his cheeks……


Ved-aww mama….. it hurts…… papa always do this to me…..


Geet-achha baba…. Aagey se nahi karungi……. Pakka…… pakka wala promise……


Ved- mama, u didn't reply…. Papa kab aayenge?


Geet-beta, mama also missing papa this much spreading her hands……… ved was feeling sad…… papa business trip par gaye hai na…. work important hota hai na….. ved nodded….. she smiled at his understandings….. ved always understands their situations…. Never asked much questions….. he is a kid but still has some maturity…..

Jab mama ki papa se baat hogi na to mama papa se kahegi ki ved is missing him…. pls come soon…. Ok….. geet said to him…..

ved smiled and gave a kissy to geet's cheek while she kissed him on his forehead this time……….


At night 9 pm….


Nakul…… nakul…. Dadi was calling him continuously…. Poor nakul was running here and there….. hall to kitchen and kitchen to hall……

Nakul-ji… dadi maa…..


Dadi-nakul, is everything ready?


Nakul- ji dadi maa….. I have done all the arrangements and here is the puja thal….. he gave to dadi… and left from there…..


Geet….. where are you? Annie came in her room calling her….


I am here… don't scream…. Geet replied to her back…


You are not ready till yet? What were you doing all this while…..? annie asked to geet looking at her… geet was struggling with the dori of her blouse…..


See, this stupid string is not gonna tie from me… please help na…. she made irritated face, it was half an hour she was struggling with the dori because she was wearing backless blouse but it was covered with lots of strings….. annie tied them….. Vedanta came running in geet's room…..


Ved- mama….. bua…. See how am I looking? He showed himself turning right and left….. see, dadi tied this mukut on my head…..


Geet- bilkul mera chhotu kanhaiya…. She put the kajal behind his ear and again wetted his cheek but this time he also weted her cheek from his full mouth wet kiss …. She giggled and annie also demands the kiss…..


After 1 n 1/2 hour thet reached to the Krishna temple which is very famous in Delhi….. there was Krishna jhaanki going on and some functions etc…. ladies and pundits are singing Krishna songs while some girls are performing……… they sat on their place and engrossed in the jhanki….


it's time for the last song of the jhanki then they will do the preparations of Krishna birth…. Ved was in the form of chhotu Krishna…. This time small children will perform then elders will perform and will show krisna's naughtiness….


Vednata and some other children perform .. all clapped on their performance….. it was around 11:20 pm geet, annie and arjun starts their performance…… lights fell on arjun while on the other hand maan came out from the flight, stepped on the land of Delhi…..


Woh Hai Rangeela

Geet and annie walks round arjun while maan put on his glasses…..

Chail Chabeela

Woh Hai Natkhat

Arjun pinched annie and geet and made straight face like he didn't do any naughty while on the airport maan walked with his signature steps…. Walking like a lion came out from his den with the attitude…. Stanching the breaths of other girls who were drooling over him……..

Woh Jamunatat

Phere Lagaye Murli Bajaye

In the temple arjun and geet, annie and some more girls running here and there…… arjun stood in mid playing his murli along with ved….. while on the airport, maan talking on the phone… media stopped there seeing MSK there along with Reyhansh Singhania….. maan was surrounded by media people whom he hates to the core but can't do much because they are celebrity…..

Gopiyon Ke Sang Raas Rachaaye

Murli Bajaiyaa Raas Rachaiyaa

Shyam Salona Hai

Arjun was dancing with girls in the temple while on the airport, Reyhansh was eyeing on girls but Maan was kept his face straight which makes him more eatable… but Maan was also doing his rasleela with his damn killing hot looks which takes away every girl's breath……

Jo Hai Albela Madnainowala

Jiski Deewani Brij Ki Har Bala

Woh Kisna Hai... (4)

Kisna Hai

Maan stopped on his track and looked around and found so many girl drooling over him, seems like Krishna is really on this earth surrounded by gopies….. maan smirk on their condition and put on his glasses back on his eyes, pitying on their condition…….

( Jo Hai Albela... Ki Har Bala )

Woh Kisna Hai... (4)

( Pyar Mein Doobi, Pyar Mein Khoyi

Pyar Ki Dhun Mein Jaagi Na Soyi )... (2)

Duniya Se Hai Woh Anjaani

Sab Kehte Hai Prem Deewani

Kisna Se Milti Hai Bhool Ke Har Bandhan

Kisna Ki Hi Mala Japti Hai Woh Jogan

Geet was dancing with annie and arjun but swayed herself in maan's world… found maan near her and smiling at her….. she has million watt smile on her face seeing maan is there….. she more engrossed in the dance found maan near her and starts danced with him….. she was like radha who is deewani in kanha's love….. was dancing like a mad girl who is insanely love with her kanha…. Found herself alone with maan and dancing around him while maan was looking at her enjoying her dance………………

On the other hand maan came out from the airport along with rey and ash…..

Nainon Mein Sanson Mein Mann Mein Kisna

Har Pal Hai Jeevan Mein Jiske Kisna

maan stood in mid in the garden , geet was oving herself round and round aan lost in him , telling him how much she loves him……

Woh Radha Hai

Woh Radha Hai, Woh Radha Hai

Radha Hai

Maan was sitting in his car and thinking about geet… he hardly met with her 2-3 times, no…. no only saw her 2-3 times but it seems like ages he has not seen her…. That's true maan doesn't know her much but it's like he know her from ages and missing her like hell….. that's true he didn't make obvious that he is missing geet but that's also true that he missed her……

While in temple everyone stopped seeing geet engrossed in the dance…. All stopped there but geet was engrossed in her world with maan…. She doesn't herself why she is dancing like a maniac but all are enjoying also…..

Madhur Madhur Sa Roop Hai Jiska

Shwet Shwet Rang Jiska

Sundar Tan Man Sundar Chitwan

Sundar Hai Ang Jiska

Maan on it's way of KM while he saw Krishna temple on his way….. he told his driver to stopped right there….. ash was jumping in joy seeing temple… she has never been in temple… she really wanted to see the temple and today is fest also…. She took out her handycam from her bag….. maan doesn't know he is pulling like a magnet towards the temple…. He always came here on janmashtami with dadi and annie…. But today he came here alone somewhere he knows that dadi n annie will be here….. but geet? He doubted that……. he removes his shows following reyhansh and ashlesha……. Ashlesha was super excited for going inside the temple….. yeah, she lives in Europe but she is still Indian, and respected Indian rituals……

Pyar Hai Sgar Se Bhi Gehra

Kisna Ke Sang Jiska

While geet was dancing and other also dancing along with her snatching the matki from each other….. geet was dancing alone feeling maan around her…..

Woh Radha Hai... (3)

Radha Hai

Geet stopped right there feeling maan's presence near her….

Hawa aisi chali ki mujhe unke aane ka pata de gayi,

Her heartbeats raised feeling like maan is near her…

Kabhi dhadkanein tej huyi, kabhi saanse thamne lagi,




she looked here & there looking for maan while maan climbing the stairs , rey n ash following him while ash capturing everything in her Handycam…. Geet was feeling breathless but she was inhaling his aroa through her nostrils…. …. She was totally in maan's world that she couldn't remember anything around her……

Iss hawa me thi unki hi moh maya,

Inn saanso par tha unka hi saanya,

( Jo Hai Albela... Brij Ki Har Bala )

Woh Kisna Hai... (4)

Mere dil ki dhadkano ne unko mehsoos kiya,

Aisa laga mano mujhe meri zindagi mil gayi,

Maan reached there , found geet looking at him…. it was like kanha found his radha…. Both are feeling each other aroma, like it's their breath…..

Unko dekha to saansein tej ho gayi,


Unknowingly maan's steps ahead towards geet while geet taking her steps towards maan….

It was like both was under any drug and forgot everything around them….. only feeling each other, looking in each other eyes…… it was like Krishna ji by himself wanted that Maan & Geet will meet today….

( Nainon Mein Sanson... Mein Jiske Kisna )

Woh Radha Hai... (3)

Radha Hai

As soon as both reached near each other…. All were looking them, while as was making video…. Geet was like under any sedative, she raised her hand for feeling maan, making sure if maan is there or not…..


Unko chhua to mai madhosh ho gayi,


maan was blown away with her beauty…. She was looking like a real radha…. A beauty queen…. Dressed in beautiful lehanga…… as soon as geet touched his cheek with her hand, maan felt like his whole body jolted with her touch, was like shiver ran through the veins….. geet was feeling like her knees melting, feeling weakness…. Her body giving up….. she was fasting and over that she was dancing like a maniac…. Suddenly a fear ran through her veins , fear of losing hi , fear of if he disappear again for here……Before she collapse on the floor, maan's arms held her in his embrace taking her close to his heart…. Fearing to loose her…. Everyone panicked seeing her in this state….


Paas gayi to unki aagosh mein choor ho gayi……


Taking her in his embrace while she was smiling in her faint state too, feeling maan's presence near her……she doesn't know it's her illusion or reality…..


Precap

Oops Maan and Geet lands up in one room….


pls check out this thread...

MG FF Writer's Interview:-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3165188/mg-ff-writers-interview-interview-pg-77

Now tell me hows it??

Waiting for ur response,

you will get Ashlesha and Reyhansh's pic in next update... if you want then...

If you like it then pls hit the like button and leave your comments……

Love ya all

neha


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Posted: 12 years ago
update maan in india geet dancing ved cute finally mneet met geet faint



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Posted: 12 years ago


wow lovely update dear..u lovely described janmashtami9 with my maaneet, wow really im touched dear...i love all te scenes..atlast radha got her kaniyaa, geet got her maan..i love te update so much dear...

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