Teri Ore ||Kriyaansh Wedding SS|| honeymoon pg 73 - Page 38

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Chapter 8 (Honeymoon):

Mrs Singhania: kria'rey'niche aao
Kria: aa rahin hoon ma'
Rey: yeh ghar wale har time disturb karte hai..
Kria: don't say like that'.thats the fun thing'
They go downstairs.
Mrs. Singhania: kria or rey yeh lo'tumhara wedding gift..
Both opens the envelop.
Rey: whattt??... tickets to mauritus??
Mrs. Singhania: tumhara honeymoon tickets'
Rey: omggg mom' I loveee sooo much'
He runs off to hug her'kria too goes to Mrs. Singhania..
Both hugs her..
Mrs. Singhania: aab packing start karo aaj raat 9 baje ka flight hai'
Rey: common kria
Raina: mom dekha bhai ko humse dur jaane ka kitni jaldi hai'
Mrs. Singhania: haan haan sab dekh rahin hoon
Kria: aise nahin hai ma'
Mrs. Singhania: I know beta just kidding..

Kria:
bye ma'will miss you guys a lot..

Mrs. Singhania: same here beta' humare chinta bilkul mat karna'just enjoy yourselves.
Rey: don't worry mom nahin karenge..he laughs cheekily'
Mrs. Singhania: janti hoon
Rey: ok ok bye mom'

Rey:
finally arrived'

Rey: ahhh'.he grabs kria by her waist and pulls her closer'.now no disturbance'
Kria: rey aap bhi nah'
Bring bring
Rey: oh nooo yahan bhi..
Kria smiles cheekily..
Kria: hello'mom
Smriti: haan kria'sahi slamat poch gayi?
Kria: haan mom no problem at all'
Smriti: ok then mein rakhti hoon'
Rey: aab so jao jaldi kria'kale k surprise hai..
Kria: surprise?
Rey: haan..

The next day'

Kria sees a packet on the dressing table'she opens it'and there is a SARI..
Kria: wow'.
Rey comes from the back'and whispers into kria's ear'"achi lagi"
Kria: bohot'


Rey: so get changed
Kria: abhi..
Rey: aur kabhi'?...get changed we gonna go some where '
Kria: kahan?
Rey: surprise hai'
They arrive at the place'with kria eyes closed..
Rey: kria now open you eyes'


Kria: omgg'..this is sooo beautiful'

Rey: tumse zyada nahin'.
Kria blushes'
Kria: I love the surprise'
As kria enters the room'. Rose petal falls on her'
Kria spins around and rey admires her from distance'then he slowly comes to her'and picks her up and slowly spins'both kria and rey laughs'
This song plays in the background'
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3vJ1xR0L9SM[/YOUTUBE]

Rey slowly puts kria on the bed'and he comes closer to kria'slowly runs his finger down kria's body'until he reaches her face'.he cups her face and pulls it closer'kria closes her eyes' now he could feel her soft lips'he slowly kisses kria's bottom lip'and they start to kiss slowly'and stops'kria looks at rey'and she shyly gets up and goes outside.

Rey: kria!!! He follows her'
Rey gets hold of kria's pallu'slowly twists it' suddenly kria falls on the pool'
Kria: rey??
Rey too jumps in the pool'
And they have their beautiful night ever in their whole life'.

The next morning..

Kria: rey utho..
Rey doesn't reply'
Kria: rey'sara din soneke liye kya aya hai yahan?
No response..
Kria: rey..aap thik toh ho..
She puts her hand on rey's forehead'
Kria: reyy??? Aap ko toh bukhar hai..
She quickly lifts his head on puts it on her lap'
Kria: rey?...
Rey felt a cold drop of water on his forehead'
Rey: kria'tum roh rahi ho?
Kria: nahin..bas aise hi'but rey aap thik toh ho..?
Rey: haan haan kria'kal pool mein tha nah..isliye'thodi se bukhar'
Kria: yeh thodi si hai??...mein ma ko phone karti hoon
Rey: no'khamakha mom ko kyun disturb karna'it will go..
Kria: disturb? I just want to ask any remedies..
Rey: just tum paas raho'yeh hai best remedy..
Kria: rey aap kp Mazak sooch rahi hai'mein yahan kitni tension mein hoon
Rey: sorry meri ma'acha karo phone'
Kria: ma mein kria bol rahi hoon
Mrs. Singhania: haan kria bolo kaise ho tum log..
Kria: mein thik hoon lekin rey'she bursts out crying..
Mrs. Singhania: rey??...kya hua??
Kria: ma rey ko zor se bukhar hai..
Mrs. Singhania: ohhh baas itna hi..?
Kria: lekin ma...
Mrs. Singhania: don't worry beta bas haldi ki dood pilao thik ho jayega...tum roh mat'itni si baat mein rona dhona'
Kria: who maa mein..
Mrs. Singhania: acha beta mein aab rakhti hoon'thik se khyal rakhna
Kria: ok ma'
Rey: aab chen mila?
Kria: haan
Rey quickly hugs kria'
Rey: itna pyar karti ho mujhse?
Kria: bohot..
Rey: mein bhi'

Guyz this is the end of my Kriyaansh Wedding SS...thanks to all who followed it till the end...luv u loadzzz...🤗...

Edited by Tabzy - 13 years ago
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Finally u updated

Loved the update
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res res

unres..

such an awesome ending, loved the SS 😃

Edited by Asha_ArSha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...
loved it...
thnx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was awesome ...loved it very much
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finally u updated
nice ending
awsome update
thankx 4 d pm
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Amazingg updte
luvd it ❤️
vil mis this SS 😭
luv it soo mchh 🤗

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