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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: rajulpandey
Loved it.

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--Suhani--

@--Suhani--

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Hey guys i want to change a little part...and that is preet hadn't proposed tani yet...but khushi knew they both like each other... and at the last day of collage tani had asked him if loved some one how would he tell her...

khushi- accha to aap hum se mil ne aaye hai(oh so u have came to meet me)

arnav-yeah

KNOCK!!!KNOCK!!!

khushi-(panicked) hey bhagwan kon hai(oh god who is it)

arnav- khushi dont worry jake dejho(khushi dont worry go and see)

khushi- lekin (but)

arnav- khushi go

khushi opens the door and she felt relived it was bhola bhaiya

khushi- ji bhola bhaiya(yes bhola bhaiya)

bhola bhaiya- khushi ji, heer ji aur unke ghar wale aa gaye hai or aap tani ji ko bula ke layen ge (khushi ji, heer ji and her family had came and cane u plz call tani ji )

khushi- (excited) heer di...thik hai bhola bhaiya mein tani ko bula ke lavn ge

bhola bhaiya left...

khushi- arnav ji chaleya(come on arnav ji)

both went to call tani but she was not in the room...

so both went down...

When they went downstairs everyone was sitting in living room...khushi ran and hugged her heer di

(this was heer and she was wearing this...she is a very shy and quite girl. Her family means everything to her, and she loves Prem and considers Prem her love and her life. and loves both her sisters and can do any thing for them)

khushi- i missed u di...

heer- i missed u too

prem- arre bhai sirf apni bhen si hi melongi ya phir apne jiju se milongi...(r u only going to meet ypur di or r u going to meet me too)

(He is a son that every parent wants. He is respectful, hard-working and a successful businessman. he is also a great brother and jiju and loves khushi, tani, preet, and harman very much...and loves heer and shares every thing with her)

khushi- jiju aap bhi na

and hugged him too...

arnav didn't mind it...actully he liked prem he seem to be nice guys...

khushi then went and hugged her gayatri maa and babuji and then hugged harman and preet...

(this is preet and he was wearing this... He is a Happy-go-lucky guy who loves to play jokes, hang around but at the same time, is very caring towards his family especially Prem. Preet is fun loving, heart of the family and is in love with tani...)

(he is harman and is wearing this...he is also caring and loves his brothers)

Tani- guys yeh arnav ji hai or arnav ji yeh hai heer di, prem jiju, preet, harman, maa, and babuji...(Guys this is arnav ji and arnav ji this is heer di, prem jiju, preet, harman, maa, and babuji) (tani and khushi also calls them maa and babuji because khushi's parents were their best friends)

evrry one is meet arnav and they all like him and arnav also likes them...

Then everyone went to sleep...

Next Morning...(8.00am)

heer comes to khushi room to wake her up

(heer was wearing this)

heer- khushi uth ja(wake up khushi)

khushi- ha di do minute(2 minutes di)

heer nai ek bhi minute nai...jaldi se ready ho ja arjun bhai bhi aa rahe hai or aaj to tere engagement bhi hai na to bohot sari decorations karni hai...(no not even a minute...go get ready fast...arjun bhai is also coming and today is also your engagement so we have to do many preprations)

khushi wake up and came out ready...

(khushi was wearing this)

khushi- chale di?(lets go di)

heer- ha chale...tani aur maya ko bhi to utha na hai na(yeah come we have to even wake up maya and tani)

heer went to maya's room to wake her up and khushi went to tani's room to wake her up...

In maya's room...

heer- maya utho to...(maya wake up)

maya- heer di bas do minute(2 minute di)

heer- ji nahi jaldi utho aur ready ho jav(no wake up quickly and get ready)

maya- di aap bhi na

maya went and came out ready

(maya was wearing this)

maya- chale di(lets go di)

heer- ha chale(ok lets go)

they came to ta tani's room...and tani had just came out ready...

(tani was wearing this)

Just then there was a door bell on main door so four of them went in living room and payal and anjli were also coming there

(payal was wearing this)

(anjli was wearing this)

It was arjun, their brother...heer, khushi and tani went and hugged him...until the everyone had arrived...

They came in living room and arjun meet everyone and he saw anjli...he was lost in her eveys and both had a eye lock but they came back to reality...

(He is really protoctive and caring brother...and he is a great bussiness man...)

At evening...

heer and tani brought khushi downstairs and arnav and everyone else was already waiting there ...

arnav was staring at khushi, prem was looking at heer, preet at tani, harman at Maya, arjun at anjli, and aakash at payal...

(khushi's dress)

(tani)

(heer)

(maya)

(anjli)

(payal)

khushi came and sat next to arnav

arnav(whispered)- aachi lag rai ho(u r looking good)

khushi blushed...

all lights went off and a girl and boy came on stage and lights were on them...they were preet and tani...

Tani's Pov...

"hello everyone! i'm preet"

"and i'm tani"

He continued, "We are here today as the emcees for arnav and khushi's sangeet

"As a part of tonight's hangama, there's going to be a ladka vs. ladki competition." I interjected.

"And whoever dances the best, gets the prize." He finished.

We turned off the microphones, and as we were leaving the stage, he whispered into my ear-Jawab ka intezar karna."

First, as a special treat, preet and I danced to Thug Le. Then, we began the competition. There were 5 of us girls and 6 guys, but luckily one of the boys decided to be the score keeper, so we had an even number, and we got a few Auntys and Uncles to be the judges. The plan, we explained to the crowd, was that first a girl would dance, then a guy, and whoever of those two danced better, would take the point for their team. So far, it was tied. preet and I were the last two to dance. I danced to Desi Girl, and as a response, he danced to Desi Boyz. The judges said that they couldn't choose between the two of us and that they would just consider us tied, and we both grudgingly accepted it. Just then, preet walked towards the stage with his guitar, all eyes on him.

"This is a special song in honor of khushi and arnav. Kisi ne mujhse poocha ke agar main kisi se pyar karta to main kya karta."

I gasped, knowing that this is what he meant by his answer, and when I heard the first few lines of the song, I began to tremble a little and my heart pounded.

"pyaar ho gaya tumse...khwab dekhe...sapne dekhe...paas aa jao mere...manzur karlo yeh mohhobat"

He singed looking at me...i was lost in his eyes, then suddenly every one clapped and praised his singing...

n.k- hey dude who is this special song for...

preet- vo kya hai na Kisi ne mujhse poocha ke agar main kisi se pyar karta to main kya karta.(actully the thing is someone asked me that if i loved someone what would i do)

he said looking at me...i blushed...but what i didn't notice was khushi di and arnav jiju were noticing this all...

n.k- wow dude...

will continue later...and will add some pic later...

Edited by nis_n - 13 years ago