KR OS-JeenaSirfTereLiye pt3-pg28

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hello peeps...

main phir aa gayi...

kya karu internal tests ke khatam hone ki khushi itni hai ki control hi nahi hota

upar se yeh dimaag studies pe concentrate karne se zyada toh concepts dhund nikaalta hai *pout*

so here I am with another new OS

this one is on Kriyaansh...

but with a twist😉

ab woh kya hai woh updates padhne ke baad hi pata chalega...

yeah u heard me right...

update nahi updates...

OS hai but in max 2 max 3 parts

actually m not left with that much energy to complete it in one part itself...

n the story is a bit lengthy😉

toh u have one more addition to my silly works...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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index



Part1: scroll down

Part2: page18

Part3: page28
Edited by -shenz- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART1:



narrator's POV:

a bright sunny day was blessing all the people but sum1 was nervous just wanted the day to cum to an end and get over with this day so that he cud step into the other... to confess the feeling making him go all crazy about the newly developed feelings for a girl whom he had met a few days back...

yes he was in love...


Rey's POV:

I so wish tum yahan hoti... toh abhi tumse apne dil ki baat keh deta... I donno why but now I can't stay away from u, not even for a few hours... bas tum jaldi se wapis aa jao phir tumhe kabhi apne se dur nahi jane dunga... I promise bas ek baar tum mujhe yeh batado ki tum bhi mujhse pyaar karti ho...

flashback:

a girl dressed in a simple top paired with a long skirt was sitting at the bench in a park with a few papers kept besides her. she was lost sumwhere... she just kept on starring at the beautiful bungalow in front of her with a blank expression.




she was not interested in the bungalow but had sum thing else in her mind that was troubling her.

a guy came n sat next to her which went unnoticed by her. he placed his hands on her shoulder and said, "hey u okay?"

she firstly was shocked then just looked up at him and gave a nod. she sum where felt relieved. the things going in her mind troubling her were now at a stop.

she decided to leave. she gathered all her belongings and got up when the guy caught her hand and said "I am Reyaansh Singhania. can we be frnz?"

she was puzzled, who offers frnship at such a short time span of meet...

"dont get me wrong. u seem to be disturbed n who else than a frnd can help u better at such a state. n I wud be honored to have u as a frnd." he said forwarding his hand

"I am honored too... thanks for understanding Reyaansh" Kria shook hands with him

"hey my frnz call me Rey... Miss?" Rey said

"Kria... n my frnz call me Kria"😆 finally she had a smile on her face

****
2yrs later


"Rey pls stop it na!!! I have a lot of work... N u r being a barrier to my concentration MR. Reyaansh Singhania..." Kria said while chasing Rey

"u know I luv it when u call e that sply in that JKR tone of urs.." Rey tried to dodge her..

" Rey I am serious this time, please lemme work.. u know how important it is to me" She sat back on the couch n tears started forming in her eyes.

"hey Kria m really sorry I didn't mean that.. U know na!!! m a big time stupid.. what do say... jhalla hu main bilkul" to which she giggled

"but I promise I'll help u in whatever manner I can" saying so he gathered her in his arms.

for the first time he felt sumthing strange, a feeling that tickled him. he wanted to have her in his arms forever. but he kept aside all his thoughts saying it to be weird

****

that was for the first time he felt sumthing spl

pata nahi kab kaise aur kyu I had fallen for u... ab toh bas tumhare aane ka intezaar hai...

I wish I wud not have agreed to u when u said that u wanted to go to Dehradun. mujhse itni durr, but I had to.. after all it was the only reason for ur tears... toh u gotta clear all those works...

I hope u wud have at least shared ur problem with me, may be I cud have helped u... kuch aur na sahi as a frnd ki tarah hi...

the entire day he kept on day-dreaming about Kria.

****

the next day he quickly got ready and hurried to her place. he took his bike n rode it with full speed ignoring all kind of distractions around.

finally I reached her her building. I parked my bike and went to her apartment.

I was about to knock when I saw the lock hanging at the door.
now what's this? yeh ab tak nahi but mujhe toh kaha tha subah 6 baje pahunch jayegi... is she alright? GOD!!! ab kya karu??

to avoid all the bad thoughts that were now ruling my mind I dialed her number...

but it was switched off..



Finally completed with this...
ignore typos...
I know cliffy... but kya karu? adaat se majbur... kafi time baad de rahi hu cliffy
so m ready juttas n chappals...

PMs on their way

do lemme know how was it... with ur long comments...

Love
shenz😉
Edited by -shenz- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loving it...

witing for the next prt...

wann see what happens...

and wan to more abt kriyansh past...
Edited by kriyansh24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kriyansh24

u chnged names y??????????//

tere liye a bit change

well 1st part mein aur bhi baaki hai so will do the rest later n PM u guys
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Another OS...nice
Amazing start
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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shenz wow kya concept hai me to abhi se in love with it...ausum start loved it...
continue soon n i need a pm...
Edited by sachiarsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice concept..!
Pm me wen ever u update next...!
Update soon ...!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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mujhe aaj kal koi pm nahi karta
😭
specially itna accha os likh kar...
😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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shenz awsumm start i luv it😃

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