Unpredictable life : swaron os

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey i am aditi.. i was having a lot of free time.. so just thought to write a swaron os.. its nothing good as the writers of d3 forum.. sorry if anyone gets bored... and all comments and likes are welcomed..😊
UNPREDICTABLE LIFE
Sharon today after days events is sitting on her bed with a picture of all her friends..(all weaklings and dazzlings)
sharon's pov
i dont know what's happening is right or wrong... this face off.. or footloose... for the first time in my life i dont care about a dance competition..all i know is my friends dont trust me.. and swayam.. i dont know whether he trusts me or not... he also thinks i am responsible for his team.. if not why is he not here to console me...!! why swayam?? why?? i know he came but i pushed him away... but he knows me... he should know that i need him whether i push him away or not!! earlier also he used to come anyway whether i said anything to him...
meanwhile swayam comes through the window and stares at sharon who is lost in her thoughts and didn't even noticed swayam..
swayam pov..
i dont understand why is sharon pushing me away... in the projector room i mind said she needs to be alone.. but my dil said she needs me.. like i was not able to accept the changed sharon how she'll accept the changed swayam... after a lot of thinking i just thought to talk to her once...
so i slowly called her... and as expected she bursted on me... asking what i am doing here!! and that i should be with my friends.. and all that crap again... while i was just looking in her eyes.. which were saying all together a different thing... saying i knew you'll come... saying.. or rather pleading to trust her... i just cant believe sharon rai prakash pleading me to believe her... dont she know that i trust her.. i know her... maybe not .. but when she held my collar... i came back from my thoughts.. and was standing there blank as i was so lost in her pain that i even forgot what she was saying... and why the hell she held my collar... but now my mind registerd her words which exactly said " why are you here swayam?? you shouldn't be here with a bitch like me!!" and all i could see how a tear was threatening to escape from the corner of eyes... which were saying "thank god you are here swayam.. and do i also consider her a bitch ??" i dont know how to make her believe that she is the most beautiful person i've ever known in and out.. how to reach out to her... and a tear escaped my eye...

sharon's pov..
i stopped abruptly when i saw a tear escaping his eyes.. i was holding his collar till now.. he just cupped my face and looking in my eyes he came closer .. and whispered in my ear " even if i would have been a bitch.. he would love to be my dog" and then softly just added " even if" and i just started laughing.. and now i knew.. he trusted me... i just have to see it in his eyes... and he'll be there with me.. even i'll do most absurd thing ever... seeing me laugh he bend down on his knees and helding out a hand asked " will you dance with me sharon?? " i just shook my head clearing my thoughts and while giving my hand to him just said " you are so unpredictable swayam shekhawat but i am happy" and we just danced to rythm of our heartbeats ...





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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice one...wish these things happens in the show*sigh*
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good one aditi...I loved it when Swayam understood the underlying meaning of her lines. Now that is Swayam. Also Sharon being apprehensive whether Swayam should be with her or not, oh she is so confused. But Swayam being a man of his words, proves her by being unpredictable asking her to dance to free her away from her disturbing thoughts. I loved it Aditi😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really good writing...i liked it.👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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A nice OS Aditi 👍🏼
Loved how you gave this in both Swayam and Sharon's POV. you did good justice to both their emotions and their thought process on the faceoff nicely done. The ending with our unpredictable Swayam asking his Sharon for dance was a nice touch.
Overall a good read, do write more.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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this is simply beautiful...

you have explained each of their POV very finely...

sharon pain is deep...wish cvs still show that...

swayam pov...this is how i expect him to act somewhat...like him wanting to know the reason behind sharon's behavior...and he gets his answer vthout him doing anything intense...nice👏

loved the part where swayam was totally lost into her eyes...relating to her pain and in this process he got unconscious and didnt knew that sharon is speaking to him...very touching

loved how he calmed sharon with that bitch thing...perfect

nice OS...plzz do write more
Edited by luvSwaron4ever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shaani2209

Nice one...wish these things happens in the show*sigh*


oh me too... even if not exactly.. but something sweet n simple... just like swaron..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rutu

Good one aditi...I loved it when Swayam understood the underlying meaning of her lines. Now that is Swayam. Also Sharon being apprehensive whether Swayam should be with her or not, oh she is so confused. But Swayam being a man of his words, proves her by being unpredictable asking her to dance to free her away from her disturbing thoughts. I loved it Aditi😳



actually to tell you the truth.. i wanted to write the confession... but when i started writing this was the result.. and am glad you all liked it... i think dance is the passion which connects them and can deviate their mind from most serious matters...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: chandrimab05

really good writing...i liked it.👏


hey thanx..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sudha-SK

A nice OS Aditi 👍🏼

Loved how you gave this in both Swayam and Sharon's POV. you did good justice to both their emotions and their thought process on the faceoff nicely done. The ending with our unpredictable Swayam asking his Sharon for dance was a nice touch.
Overall a good read, do write more.


thanx... and you liked it... its even more overwhelming... because you are one of the finest writers i have seen here on d3 forum... actually i mostly come online via mobile... and to comment and like through it is quite difficult... i do like all your work...

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