Unpredictable life : swaron os - Page 2

Originally posted by: luvSwaron4ever

this is simply beautiful...

you have explained each of their POV very finely...

sharon pain is deep...wish cvs still show that...

swayam pov...this is how i expect him to act somewhat...like him wanting to know the reason behind sharon's behavior...and he gets his answer vthout him doing anything intense...nice👏

loved the part where swayam was totally lost into her eyes...relating to her pain and in this process he got unconscious and didnt knew that sharon is speaking to him...very touching

loved how he calmed sharon with that bitch thing...perfect

nice OS...plzz do write more

wow.. i think this is the longest comment i've got...
about more i dont know.. depend on my mood...

nice aditi...loved it.keep writing...waiting for ur next stuff...👏

Originally posted by: tashu20

nice os...😊

thanx dear..

Originally posted by: tejukor

nice aditi...loved it.keep writing...waiting for ur next stuff...👏

hehe.. looks like mostly are waiting for my next work... am really glad you liked it..

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Awwiee that was soo cute!! 😳
they are hell adorable mahn!! 😃
keep writing such stuff aditi! 👍🏼
nd pm me wenever u write sumthing on swaron! 😊

thanx dear...
pray for me getting bored... and you'll surely have loads of stuff to read...
actually i was earlier a dmg fan... so my friend list is full of people who are dmg fans.. so i didn't send pm to anyone... but next time i'll surely do...

Originally posted by: gupta.aditi20

thanx dear...
pray for me getting bored... and you'll surely have loads of stuff to read...
actually i was earlier a dmg fan... so my friend list is full of people who are dmg fans.. so i didn't send pm to anyone... but next time i'll surely do...

No problem! 😊
nd i vil def pray for dat! 😆