Poem - Aaj

Hi guys, I just thought of writing a poem for Jai and Bani. It is quite sad
like the show right now. Please excuse its poor quality because I don't
know Hindi too well and this is the first time I am writing poetry in Hindi.
I have also never fallen in love so I hope the feeling put across is right.
The poem is in free verse form. Please comment.

Aaj kya hua, wo honatha
Aaj kya nahi hua, wo mein chathatha
Aaj ehsaas hai ki tumne kya saha
Aaj pata hai ki main kitna bura tha

Aaj tum naaraz ho
Kal mein naraaz tha
Kab yeh nafrat pyar ko badaljayega
Intezaar hai, Intezaar

Dard dena kitna asaan
Aur sehena kita mushkil
Koi shikayad nahi hai
Kyunki yehi tha manzil

Kab tum maaf karogi,
Kya tum maaf karogi,
Sirf yeh hai mere khayaal
Mujko phasaaya hai yeh pyaar ka jaal

Kal tum rothethe
Aaj mein rotha hoon
Zindagi ne bura kiya hai
Yeh sochkar mein sotha hoon

Very beautifully written!!

Jai needs to rehearse this to Bani!

Really, awesome job!

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woww!!! that was beautiful, hun 😛 it fits jai and bani so well 👏 👏

that was a gr8 poem 👏 👏 👏
fits jai and bani perfectly!!

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10/10 👏 for u...

thanks guys, I have heard lots of people are gonna crush on the lawyer
instead of Jai; not me! I ham a die hard Jai fan.