KR OS...:||Kriya Aur Reyansh||:

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Posted: 12 years ago
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After 9 month...kriya came back to St. Louis and found that her love is not her anymore...and her friends hates her...when they saw her they accused her but rey didn't say thing...nor he stop them...he stands on the far corner with taani...when all are accusing kriya kriya didn't paid any attention to then coz her eyes only stuck on one person...and try to find some emotion on her face...and she found nothing...and it hurts her to the core...and then she leaves from there...
After that day...they didn't saw her again...


Kriya left from St. Louis without anyemotion...and then she reached beach...in bright sunlight...no one is present there...rarely one or two person...


she goes towsrds the sea...and sits on the sand...
a wave came and make her legs wet,,,,

Pani da rang vekh kay
Pani da rang vekh kay
Pani da rang vekh ke


she look at the waves

Ankhiyan jo hanju rul day
Ankhiyan jo hanju rul day
Ankhiyan jo hanju rul de-

tears started flowing from her eyes...

Mahiya na aaya meraa
Mahiya na aayaa
Mahiya naa aaya meraa
Maahiya na aaya
Ranjhna na aaya mera
Mahiya naa aaya
Mahiya naa aaya mera
Ranjhna na aaya

kriya look towards the window of her roon with a little hope that might he came...and asked her reason of her departure but he didn't came...

Ankhaan daa noor vekh ke
Ankhaan daa noor vekh ke
Ankhiyan jo anju rul de
Ankhiyan jo anju rul de
Ankhiyan jo anju rul de

kriya watching their pics and their smiles and happiness in their eyes in the pic...and tears started flowing from her eyes...

Kamli ho gayi tere bina...
Aaja ranjhan mere
Kamli ho gayi tere bina
Aaja ranjhan mere
Barish barkha sab kuch beh gayee
Aaya ni jind mere
Barish barkha sab kuch beh gayee
Aaya ne jind mere

Its been a one year she locked herself in her home...and and with each passing day...her hope is died

Aankhaan da noor vekh ke
Aankhaan da... noor vekh ke
Ankhiyan jo anju rul de
Ankhiyan jo anju rul de
Ankhiyan jo anju rul de

She waching their pics...its her daily routine...

Kothay uttay behkay ankhiyan milaunday
Na jaana hume tu kabhi chhod
Tere utte mar di
Pyaar tenu kar di
Milega tujhe na koi aur

She daily dreaming of their happy life...but to her bad luck its only a dream it will not turns into reality...and she knows it...

Tu bhi aa sabko chhod kay
Tu bhi aa sabko chhod kay
Meri ankhiyan jo anju rul day
Ankhiyan jo anju rul day

she remember when she came back to mumbai...leaving her mom forever...with little hope that he come back to her

Paani da rang vekh ke
Paani da rang vekh ke
Paani da rang vekh ke

now she realized her mistake...and she decided that she will not cry for him for them anymore...but she will also not go back to his mom...and that day she leaves mumbai forever no one knows where she goes...


One day
kriya mom came back to mumbai to take her daughter back...but she found the door locked...then she asked to the neighbours but no one knows where she goes...
Her last option was St. louis...
She reached st. louis then she directly goes towards the Dance hall...where she found rey dancing with some girl very close...first she thoughts that the girl was kriya but denied her thought stating...her daughter is not cheap like that girl...then she enter the hall and holds rey collor...
Rey is shocked after saw kriya's mom...

Smriti :meri beti kahan hai...
Rey :what do u mean aapki beti hai aapko pata hona chaiye...aur waise bhi main nhi jaanta wo backstabber kahan hai...and next second a hard slap lands on his face...
Smriti slap him hard

Smriti :how dare you call my daughter backstabber...
Rey :aapki beti hai backstabber...usne mujhe apni team ko sirf dhokha hi diya hai...
Smriti :usne kisi ko bhi dhokha nhi diya hai...wo bechari ne toh tum sab k liye apne sapne kurbaan kiye aur tum use backstabber keh rhe ho...main shi thi tum kabhi kriya k layak na the na ho na hi hoge...aur wo tumhare liye apna sab kuch chod k mumbai aagyi...
Rey :aap kehna kya chahti hai saaf saaf batayie...
(then she narrates her full story...and rey gets numbs after hearing her...and tears started flowing from gangs's eyes who stands on the door)
Smriti :main bas god se yahi pray karti hoon wo tum logo se na mili ho...gar usne ye baat sunli hogi...toh wo sehan nhi kar payegi tut jayegi merei bachi...(after that she leave from there gave a disgusting look to all of them)

After smriti leaves rey sarted crying...his friends try to control him but he's no where to stop...after some tym he stop crying...and leave from there without saying any word...that was the last day...they last saw him...

He leaves mumbai,his friends his house...and start doing search of kriya...


After 5 years
In Swaron House
Swaron are happily married with 4 year old son rishi...
At night tym...
In swaron room...
Trio are sitting on the bed...engrossed in their works...swayam in laptop...sharon in magzine..and rishi watching some old album...

Rishi :mom dad ye uncle aunty kon hai..inhe humne kabhi nhi dekha aur ye humale ghal bhi nhi aaye...(he point towards the pic of kriyansh)
Swayam take his in his lap...
Swayam : beta ye hai KRIYA AUR REYANSH...kriya meri best friend ayr rey aapki mom ka best friend...
Rishi :ab ye kaha par hai...
Swayam :pata nhi beta ye kahan par hai...bas itna pata hai...dono jahan par bhi hai...ek dusre se bohot pyaar karte hai...aur abhi bhi ek dusre k pyaark liye tadap rhe hai...I hope bhagwan ji undono ko milade...
Rishi :dad toh fir humna roz god se pray karenge aur fir wo dono ko miladenge haina...
Sharon :ha beta hum roz god se pray karenge...aur god humari baar zaroor sunege...

the end...or the beginning


ok now reviews tym...
tell me howz it...
all jhutta chappal galis...are most welcome...
with ur comments...




Edited by Kriti_rox - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
Plz add this account for my works on kriyansh
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
res


unres


yippie im d first one


after such a long tym


wohooo me toh hoppy happy

achha main yahn kyun hun...????

yaad kar na K kyun hai tu yahan pe


Yaad nahi aa rahai di


aap hi bolo na kyun hun..


are bolo bhi chup kyun baithi ho aur ise padhi jaa rahi ho


comeone di bolo bhi main yahan kyun hun


mujhe sacchi mein yaad nahi aa raha


mat bolo main jaa rahi hun


jaaun na...?


aan...?


theek hai im going


bub-bye di


lubh u









































































































































































aiyo neeche kyun aayi...


bola na bye...


chalo last tym bol rahi hun bye..!!!























































































































oh gosh tumhe sach mein laga main comment nahi karungi

naah aisa ho sakta hai kya...?

no naa

then...?

lo padho meri bakwaas

aiyoo ye kya kiya tumne...???

main tumhe chodungi nahi

kriya waapis aayi

taa-rey in a relation

lousians accusing kriya

and rey not uttering a single word

how on earth it is possible...?

tum jhut bol rahi ho na di

aisa toh maine kabhi bhi nahi socha tha

ye kya kardiya aapne

he was standing emotionless

aur us taani ke saath khada tha

us taani d naani ki toh

main use bomb se uda dungi

aise


nahi-2 galti toh rey ki bhi hai na

main dono ko bomb se uda dungi

aise


sahi mein di i feel lyk killing taani and rey too for being such a jerk

p.s. ye sab rey ke liye. kriye ke rey ke liye nahi opps rey nahi linecutter/chabilaal

oh gosh me gone mad today

ek para ke liye itna saara


Awsm song

haaw kriya left her mom for her friends and rey and they

they dont desrve her friendship

Smriti ne rey ko chaata maara

kudos to u smriti

lyf mein ek toh achha kaam kiya

hope rey ka dimaag theekaane par aa gaya ho.

else ntn can happen or change him 😆

Aww swaron ke beta

awsm...!!!

2nd part

mujhe kal tak chahiye


else... 😆


p.p.s ye sirf ek aisa comment hai jo itna lamba hai


else these type of comments are specially for my neeti di 😳
Edited by abhiyakreya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
Wonderful Os Kriti..
Loved it..
Plz do write aseconed part of this...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
Nice OS 😃...
End pe Kriyansh ki koi khabar hi de deti 😛.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
it was awesome OS...very emotional
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
hey vry nic OS
Emotional one


kaash Kriyaansh mil jaate but anywayzzz
gr8 work

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Posted: 12 years ago
#8
Awesum os...
Plsh do write the second part... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
kriti unres kardiya

mujhe iska continuation chahiye

dats it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
Very nyc update..!!!

loved it 😊

continue sooonnn

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