ARSHI SS: MY MOM's Boyfriend cr chap 2 pg 37 07/09

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Koeli

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Posted: 13 years ago

MY STORIES ARE NOW *COPYRIGHTED (*cr)I hold the soul ownership of my stories.Please dont copy any concept or scenes without taking my permission otherwise i will report your thread.FB buddies please stop posting my stories directly. If you wish to post it then post my FB link page.If i see anybody coping my concept or stories i will stop posting any story.I strictly mean it.

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Chap 2You?

TEASER
Khushi: I cant believe it mom
Mom: Oh baby dont be so stuck up. Even i have life
Khushi: Mom i agree but...
Mom: Arnav is a darling
Khushi: Mom he is younger than your daughter for good sake
Mom: But he is very matured, khushi
Khushi: grr.
Mom: calm down baby. I have called him in tonight's dinner
Khushi: What? No mom please
Mom: Khushi, he is my boyfriend and if you can call wage the why cant i call him?
Khushi: Mom, wage is not my...
Mom: I know I know, he is not your boy friend. But why not khushi? you guys are with each other for such a long time now.
Khushi: Mom there is a word call just friends in the dictionary which i am sorry to say doesnot exists in yours.
Mom: good only. Atleast better than you. I know how to enjoy life not like you.
Khushi: I know "enjoyment" means to you mom. I mean come on he is a kid.
Mom: Well, reserve your opinion about him for some more hours.
Khushi: I dont want to meet him. grr
Mom: Why not?
Khushi: This is the 13th time you are making me meet your freaking boyfriends in just 6 months.
Mom: but this time i am serious.
Khushi rolled her eyes and walked inside her bedroom muttering her frustration.
"I cant believe this Mom is going aroung with a 20years old boy. Hey Devi Maiya give her some brains"

yap yet another WIERD "Controvercial" concept for you guys.I will continue this only if i get good encouragement otherwise i will scrap it.

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Koeli

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Japonica
Fantastic, i love your courage. If Harrison Ford and Rupert Murdoch and Woody Allen, to name a few among the legion of old men all over the world who can go for a woman young enought to be their granddaughters (ok, their daughters), why not Khushi's mom in your story?

But it might be a bit more realistic if you made him in his mid to late 20s as I can't imagine a 20 year old going for a 40+ woman, which is what the mom must be at least.

But carry on, I would like to know what happens.

Or is the mom bringing in these guys in the hope they go for her daughter?

Originally posted by: KSG_luv
OH LORD HAVE MERCY!! The title reminded me of the movie Minies First Time STARRING nikki reed!! HOLYSHIZ I THINK TODAY ALL OF YOUR WORK IS MAKING ME SAWYER THAT!! CZ IT'S AWWEEESSSOOOMMMEEE!! 😆 AMAZING CONCEPT MAN!! WHAT THE HE'LL IS WRONG WITH ARNAV MAN!! going out with an oldie!! 😆 Well if not the daughter then the mother would do! 🤣

Originally posted by: Farwa_Ibrahim
Hey hey hey my eyes popped out felt my head spining MY MOM'S BOYFRND did my eyes read it right i rubbed my eyes leaving my mob on bed then again grabbed it n clicked it ... read it n again after reading wht u said off cource its something AHEM AHEM but again its happening now a days isnt it anyways so i asked myself would u like to read it NO was the 1st reply i again looked at screen frowning again asked my heart u want? This time a lil excitement may b mingled with a bit fear wht if its too hot to bear for me i asked third time n this time suddenly the name provide it from nowhere Yes it will b fun so after so much blah blah saying simple answer yes but one request pls if u can keep it a bit sweet romantic no rudeness just request The last line was meant to b in this way plz make it sweet romantic ... No rudeness(from my side) a simple request... But i know sometimes its just demand of story my believe of writing is tht it goes on itself no doubt the writer is writing it using his or her brain but the flow of story cant b bended on own choice it went on flowing in its own accord may b m wrong but its just my feelings... Oopsss i carried away again anyways pls update n thnx for pm

Originally posted by: MyPrinceBarun
omg...wn i read d title i ws like "whrs my specs.." i read it agn n realised i read it corrct thn i thought may b khushi will be mothr of a small child n arnav somehw will b her bf.. but WHN I READ D TEASER I WAS LIKE
WHAT THE!!!!!!
utni hi shock hui hu jitni aj arnav ko mandir me dekh k hui thi.. ;D
tumhara hi dimag ese naye naye ajube jese ideas la sakta h by god... well done . .

Originally posted by: monkeydog18
Holy f**k

Please tell me the mother and arnav havent slept together?! Throwing up

Originally posted by: arushi_fan
😲
😕
ummm
😒

Originally posted by: chandana.s
😲 When i read the title i was like What the 🤢 ...But i clamed myself thinging Khushi might be married and got divorce n now She has b.f n the title might be from her kid's point of view ( I know u might be thinking before opening the post i thaught all this stuff ) 😛 😆
Seriously only u can write this kind of things 😆

Looking forward...Continue sooon 😊

Originally posted by: sweet_butterfly
haila... i think i might need to change my specs... am i reading correct or hallucinating?????????????/😲

Originally posted by: kajolkonna
What the!!! 😲
my head is spining after reading ur title.

Originally posted by: aeyshaalim
what the
thts the was my reaction on the title
looking forward to it

Originally posted by: CutieSanaya
Whoooaaa!!! R u serious...u sure u wanna ryt dis kind of story on IF..
I guess dat vil lead to problm...bt i hv no issues...wanna read new zoner stories..nd dis z one of it...
Al D Bst!!

Originally posted by: Akorshi
areey baaprey...
khushi ki mom ki bf arnav...
direct heart attack...🤢
hw.ummm...i really don't understand...

Originally posted by: 207shikha
udi baba...!! her mom's BF...?? LOL 😆
hats off to your innovations man seriously..!!
you have got such a creative mind.. each time you write a FF it's
concept is completely different in all it's aspects.! really loved the teaser.!
you MUST continue this one...i'll be waiting for it's 1st chap.! 😉

Originally posted by: ak_maggi
🤣 appy oly u can think of something like this he he...
wite d first chapter soon... this wil be fun...😊

Originally posted by: MissElektra101
Young dude, CORRECTION.

Young, HOT, dude + middle - aged woman who has a daughter = W*F?

As whacked up as it sounds, i like it!!

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Nadia

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Posted: 13 years ago

your title scared me yar

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Koeli

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: naddiya26
your title scared me yar

lolz 😆

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riushibabo

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Posted: 13 years ago

continue soon

😆 it sounds something vry vry different

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kajolkonna

@kajolkonna

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Posted: 13 years ago

What the!!! 😲
my head is spining after reading ur title.
Update soon.
Sound totally wierd but interesting and unique. 😃 😆

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PRI

@ambishika

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Posted: 13 years ago

god ...arnav khhsuio mom bf...

cont soon...

waiting for part 1

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Fuj

@-ElmoFuj-

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Posted: 13 years ago

ROFL!

Arnav younger than khushi and the boyfriend of khushi's mom?? Its kind of disturbing at first but im sure its going to be goood when you put up the parts! Update soon 😃