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hello evry1!
im sry i was away 4 sumtym...due 2 sum personal reasons...
neways...i had a few days off on d occasion of Eid n i decyded 2 ryt dis jus 4 tympass! in a way 2 contribute sumthing 2 d forum...
me n my frnds always thot dat 2wards d end navya had bcum really monotonous...
lesser anant-navya scenes...lesser xitement...dere wer many things wich cud hav been shown but sadly d cv's disappointed us...
so...i rote dis keeping in mind hw v wud hav lyked d story line 2 go...
v havnt made many changes...
jus a few things wich v wanted d cv's 2 sho...
its an rs...
but its really long...so...will update in parts...
dat is...if u guys lyk it n u all giv it a thumbs up...
nw...dose expecting romance, im sry but u all hav 2 njoy disappointment 4 nw...
infact d starting is quite painful only wid misunderstandings...romance will cum later on...
actually v felt dat if anant n navya had 2 go thru misunderstandings, den it shud hav been shown in a diffrent way...
v wanted sum passion n intense scenes...
v hav added a new character as well...it wud bring sum newness n also helps in a way in clearing things...
u guys will also get 2 c a completely new shade of Anant later on wen he confronts Navya...
d name of d rs justifies d beginning wher navya is hurt n pained...
i wud lyk u all 2 giv me honest n correct feedback...
if i feel dat u guys dint lyk it...i wnt continue...
so here it is...
d 1st part...
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Sau Dard Hai - Part 1
Navya was going through a very rough time. It was noon and she was sitting alone in her room feeling...lonely. Thinking back she was trying to analise where did she go wrong. What made Baba and Buadadi hate her to this extent that they are scheming ways to throw her out of this home and separate her from her husband Anant. Anant...she thought...his name aroused so many different feelings in her. "Aakhir aisi kya galti kardi maine Anant jo tumne bhi mujh par vishwaas nahi kiya...Ek tumhari hi wajah se toh mai yaha aayi...tumahare liye maine apna ghar, apna parivaar, sab chod diya...tumhaare bharose to maine iss ghar me kadam rakhne ki himmat ki...aur tumne hi?!...Tum hi to mere sab kuch ho...tum ho to mai hoon...tum nahi to mai bhi nahi..." She could feel tears in her eyes when Anant suddenly entered the room. Navya was surprised. "Anant...tum aaj jaldi aa gaye?" she asked him. He didnt meet her gaze. "Haan..." and without another word he went inside the washroom. Her eyes were getting moist again. This was how he had been communicating with her for the past one month. "Aisa kab tak chalega Anant?...kab tak?" she sighed, controlling her tears.
"Debraani ji! Dhyaan se!" Rama shouted pulling her hand. "Kya kar rahi hai aap?...kat gaya na hath! laayiye...idhar aayiye..." They were in the kitchen and Rama was searching for the first aid box. She got it in a minute and started bandaging her palm. She was fussing over her while Navya was lost in her thoughts. "Anant...ek ussi ka to dhyaan rehta hai mere mann me...par kya usse mera dhyaan hai...?"...
"Debraani ji...aap sunn rahi hai na?"
"Haan?!...haan bhabhi...thanks...choti si chot hai theek ho jayegi. Chaliye...mai shaam ki aarti ki taiyaari kar ke aati hoon..." she was about to leave when Rama said "Hum jaante hai ki aapka dhyaan kaha hai...aap fikar mat kijiye...Devar ji aapko zaroor samjhenge..." Navya was touched. "Ek aapke hi wajah se to mujhme thori himmat baaki hai...aap nahi hoti toh..."
"Haan Haan hum jaante hai...hum hai hi kamaal ke!" she laughed.
Navya smiled, hugged her and left.
After the evening Aarti Navya entered the room and saw Anant on the bed. He was working on his laptop and didn't glance up. Navya pulled out her clothes from the almirah, sat on the opposite side and began arranging them. From the corner of his eye Anant saw Navya's hand and the bandage across her palm. His hearbeat rose and a number of questions began swirling in his brain. "Uske haath ko kya hua?...kaise hua?...Usse zyada zor se to nhi lagi?"...but inspite of all his worries he just couldn't ask her anything. Navya noticed Anant seeing her wound but he hadn't said anything about it."Kya sach me tumhe meri bilkul parwaah nahi hai Anant?" she mentally questioned him.
"Haan...ab bhi mujhe tumhaari fikr hai Navya...par pichle kuch dino me tumse jo kuch bhi ho rha hai...ghar waalo ko kitni pareshaani ho rhi hai...mai sab kuch dekh ke bhi andekha kaise kar sakta hoon...?" he thought to himself. "Tumhaari laaparwaahi ki wajah se vo letter time pe nahi mila jiski wajah se humari publication house ko kitna nuksaan hua. Baba, Papa, Bhaiya ko kya kya sun na pada"
"Maine kitni baar tumse kaha tha ki maine letter misplace nahi kiya...mera bharosa karo Anant" she was pleading him in her mind...
Just then Sugandha came into the room and went straight to Anant and said "Beta khaana lag gaya hai...chal khaa le..."
"Maaji aapne bataya kyu nahi? mai help kar deti..." said Navya nervously.
"Ghar me baaki log hai..." She looked at Anant. "Beta tu jaldi aana..." and with that she left the room. Anant didn't like the way Maa treated Navya..."Par Maa ka gussa bewajah bhi to nahi hai" With a heavy heart he went downstairs.
Navya was hurt beyond words and felt miserable at her condition. She wanted Anant to shout at her like he usually did...but this kind of silent treatment was killing her. Upon that his family.
How will she ever succeed in getting back there trust? And how was she supposed to do it without Anant by her side?
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INDEX
Part 2 - Pg 10
Part 3 - Pg 15
Part 4 - pg 23
Part 5 - Pg 37
Part 6 - Pg 37
im sry i was away 4 sumtym...due 2 sum personal reasons...
neways...i had a few days off on d occasion of Eid n i decyded 2 ryt dis jus 4 tympass! in a way 2 contribute sumthing 2 d forum...
me n my frnds always thot dat 2wards d end navya had bcum really monotonous...
lesser anant-navya scenes...lesser xitement...dere wer many things wich cud hav been shown but sadly d cv's disappointed us...
so...i rote dis keeping in mind hw v wud hav lyked d story line 2 go...
v havnt made many changes...
jus a few things wich v wanted d cv's 2 sho...
its an rs...
but its really long...so...will update in parts...
dat is...if u guys lyk it n u all giv it a thumbs up...
nw...dose expecting romance, im sry but u all hav 2 njoy disappointment 4 nw...
infact d starting is quite painful only wid misunderstandings...romance will cum later on...
actually v felt dat if anant n navya had 2 go thru misunderstandings, den it shud hav been shown in a diffrent way...
v wanted sum passion n intense scenes...
v hav added a new character as well...it wud bring sum newness n also helps in a way in clearing things...
u guys will also get 2 c a completely new shade of Anant later on wen he confronts Navya...
d name of d rs justifies d beginning wher navya is hurt n pained...
i wud lyk u all 2 giv me honest n correct feedback...
if i feel dat u guys dint lyk it...i wnt continue...
so here it is...
d 1st part...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Sau Dard Hai - Part 1
Navya was going through a very rough time. It was noon and she was sitting alone in her room feeling...lonely. Thinking back she was trying to analise where did she go wrong. What made Baba and Buadadi hate her to this extent that they are scheming ways to throw her out of this home and separate her from her husband Anant. Anant...she thought...his name aroused so many different feelings in her. "Aakhir aisi kya galti kardi maine Anant jo tumne bhi mujh par vishwaas nahi kiya...Ek tumhari hi wajah se toh mai yaha aayi...tumahare liye maine apna ghar, apna parivaar, sab chod diya...tumhaare bharose to maine iss ghar me kadam rakhne ki himmat ki...aur tumne hi?!...Tum hi to mere sab kuch ho...tum ho to mai hoon...tum nahi to mai bhi nahi..." She could feel tears in her eyes when Anant suddenly entered the room. Navya was surprised. "Anant...tum aaj jaldi aa gaye?" she asked him. He didnt meet her gaze. "Haan..." and without another word he went inside the washroom. Her eyes were getting moist again. This was how he had been communicating with her for the past one month. "Aisa kab tak chalega Anant?...kab tak?" she sighed, controlling her tears.
"Debraani ji! Dhyaan se!" Rama shouted pulling her hand. "Kya kar rahi hai aap?...kat gaya na hath! laayiye...idhar aayiye..." They were in the kitchen and Rama was searching for the first aid box. She got it in a minute and started bandaging her palm. She was fussing over her while Navya was lost in her thoughts. "Anant...ek ussi ka to dhyaan rehta hai mere mann me...par kya usse mera dhyaan hai...?"...
"Debraani ji...aap sunn rahi hai na?"
"Haan?!...haan bhabhi...thanks...choti si chot hai theek ho jayegi. Chaliye...mai shaam ki aarti ki taiyaari kar ke aati hoon..." she was about to leave when Rama said "Hum jaante hai ki aapka dhyaan kaha hai...aap fikar mat kijiye...Devar ji aapko zaroor samjhenge..." Navya was touched. "Ek aapke hi wajah se to mujhme thori himmat baaki hai...aap nahi hoti toh..."
"Haan Haan hum jaante hai...hum hai hi kamaal ke!" she laughed.
Navya smiled, hugged her and left.
After the evening Aarti Navya entered the room and saw Anant on the bed. He was working on his laptop and didn't glance up. Navya pulled out her clothes from the almirah, sat on the opposite side and began arranging them. From the corner of his eye Anant saw Navya's hand and the bandage across her palm. His hearbeat rose and a number of questions began swirling in his brain. "Uske haath ko kya hua?...kaise hua?...Usse zyada zor se to nhi lagi?"...but inspite of all his worries he just couldn't ask her anything. Navya noticed Anant seeing her wound but he hadn't said anything about it."Kya sach me tumhe meri bilkul parwaah nahi hai Anant?" she mentally questioned him.
"Haan...ab bhi mujhe tumhaari fikr hai Navya...par pichle kuch dino me tumse jo kuch bhi ho rha hai...ghar waalo ko kitni pareshaani ho rhi hai...mai sab kuch dekh ke bhi andekha kaise kar sakta hoon...?" he thought to himself. "Tumhaari laaparwaahi ki wajah se vo letter time pe nahi mila jiski wajah se humari publication house ko kitna nuksaan hua. Baba, Papa, Bhaiya ko kya kya sun na pada"
"Maine kitni baar tumse kaha tha ki maine letter misplace nahi kiya...mera bharosa karo Anant" she was pleading him in her mind...
Just then Sugandha came into the room and went straight to Anant and said "Beta khaana lag gaya hai...chal khaa le..."
"Maaji aapne bataya kyu nahi? mai help kar deti..." said Navya nervously.
"Ghar me baaki log hai..." She looked at Anant. "Beta tu jaldi aana..." and with that she left the room. Anant didn't like the way Maa treated Navya..."Par Maa ka gussa bewajah bhi to nahi hai" With a heavy heart he went downstairs.
Navya was hurt beyond words and felt miserable at her condition. She wanted Anant to shout at her like he usually did...but this kind of silent treatment was killing her. Upon that his family.
How will she ever succeed in getting back there trust? And how was she supposed to do it without Anant by her side?
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
INDEX
Part 2 - Pg 10
Part 3 - Pg 15
Part 4 - pg 23
Part 5 - Pg 37
Part 6 - Pg 37
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