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"Struggle",which is the theme,Illa Bedi has made the base of "HD",is itself very weak.Because Indira's struggle with life could have been projected at different directions without trying to attempt to create a gulf between her and Rishi.And if the writer wanted to show Indira's struggle for getting back her love,the writer could have created a rift in between Indira and Rishi immediately after the trial track.There was absolutely no reason to show Indira and Rishi's marriage,that too in bits-and-pieces;there was no need to bring this present track either,and there was no need either to think on the absurd notion of Rishi and Shewta marriage.All these abrupt chain-of-action in the story shows it clearly that,the writer has never been clear enough with her idea about the story;she has been penning her thoughts with the pulse of the hour.In short,the story has also been written in bits-and-pieces,which has resulted in this puzzle,whose pieces are missing.
But what is being done,cannot be undone;yet there might be a chance to revive the story into the right direction only if the writer accumulates her thoughts and imagination together and refreshes herself about how she started with the story.As audience we can suggest her that she should not play around with the lead characters,as they are the ones,who have kept the story integrity.If 'struggle' is what runs in the story,than from this point some realistic aspects of life has to be focused on.For instance,Indira,along with Rishi can face the ups and downs of life;lets just say,Rishi makes Indira go through the treatment,and she survives the tumor.Then,for a while both Indira and Rishi cherish the moment of becoming parents.And then again the darker side of life overshadows their peace as their child can be drawn as a mentally challenged kid,or the child is a dyslexic.This could be a great challenge for the writer,as well as the characters,Indira and Rishi to fight as parents.
Friends,it might look silly that I've come up with two posts in the same day,but I'm doing this out of desperation to let our opinions reach the creator of "HD",so that we can save ourselves and the show from fading away.As the heading suggests,please put in your valuable suggestions regarding the theme of the story,which can be given different directions.It might make a difference.
But what is being done,cannot be undone;yet there might be a chance to revive the story into the right direction only if the writer accumulates her thoughts and imagination together and refreshes herself about how she started with the story.As audience we can suggest her that she should not play around with the lead characters,as they are the ones,who have kept the story integrity.If 'struggle' is what runs in the story,than from this point some realistic aspects of life has to be focused on.For instance,Indira,along with Rishi can face the ups and downs of life;lets just say,Rishi makes Indira go through the treatment,and she survives the tumor.Then,for a while both Indira and Rishi cherish the moment of becoming parents.And then again the darker side of life overshadows their peace as their child can be drawn as a mentally challenged kid,or the child is a dyslexic.This could be a great challenge for the writer,as well as the characters,Indira and Rishi to fight as parents.
Friends,it might look silly that I've come up with two posts in the same day,but I'm doing this out of desperation to let our opinions reach the creator of "HD",so that we can save ourselves and the show from fading away.As the heading suggests,please put in your valuable suggestions regarding the theme of the story,which can be given different directions.It might make a difference.
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