IPKKND SS:Suhaag Raat Or Is It

-chamkilli- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey it is me Neha yes I too am writing well am trying to wish me luck
this will be a OS maybe a SS if I am in an evil mode and would like to drag then
enough of my bak bak let me give u a preview of the first chapter
hopefully will post it Tom if I get some responses and it is my first time so bear w/ me


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Arnav slowly got off from his bed.While keeping his eyes only and only on his angelic bride dressed up for him and only him.He goes near the window where she ran off to.To get away from the sheer sweet torture.Putting his anger and brewing desires to the side for a moment. He then took one baby step at a time more like tip totoeing.Secrectly going behind her Pari like form. Then dheere dheere se with his rough manly hands taking off her expensive and heavy ghoongat off from her delicate head.After lifting it off from her head ,he just simply threw it to the side not caring about anything else besides to get his love of his Life to be marked as his in every single way known to man

Should I continue or is this crappy if yes then I will forget about posting chapter one
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claireDD thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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res

yaaayy me first...
ahh i love my timing..
so this is ur first one..
what a start...👏😉
hell yeah..you shud continue this one..
n make sure dat u pm me when u update..

🤗🤗
Edited by claireDD - 13 years ago
-happilyunknown thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yes i am second! I think :D

You should def continue!! It is the SR and i don't have the strength to see one more unfinished SR! :D

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awsome OS...Coutinue Soon...😊

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