poetry title......?????

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey guys .recently i have created this poem for my school magzine but i am faliur to get any title for it .it is not yet complete but still please suggest a title for it.and please tell if it looks complete so i my continue it or else i'll stop here.


daughters are pride,
daughters are love,
daughters are as soft and as light as a dove
daughters r the way to the heart where they stay,
fromchildhood as the years go by
we see them grow and play,
daughters are the bondsof the relationship they hold
they face every danger with bravery and bold.
she is a daughter
she is a wife
she is a mother and our pride
she is a light in the darkness
she is an inspiration
she is a barrier to the dangers
she is the GODS greatest creation
an idol of dedication
an example of devotion
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow gr8 poem.well actually i dunno wt 2 suggest mayb d title cud b sumthin on daughters or women in general.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i agree with u but i am still not able to decide any title from it.so guys help me 😕 😕
Edited by smritisonkar - 19 years ago
praveenam thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i have absolutely no idea over here... so sorry smriti
i m not a poetic kinda person
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Posted: 19 years ago
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never mind.
but still keep trying


and plzzzzzzzz guys comment on the poem.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey Smriti i think the title "SHE..." would be apt...
Really nice poem !!! .
how about the following lines tooo


SHE IS A GIFT OF NATURE
THE STENGHT OF OUR FUTURE
THE ROOT OF OUR CULTURE
THE GIVER OF LIFE'S TREASURE...LIFE,HOPE ,LOVE

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Posted: 19 years ago
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thank yaar.
i'll add these lines to my poem at the end as i will behave like a great conclusion .u have solved 90%of my problem thanks shelly
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Posted: 19 years ago
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u r welcome...the pleasure is all mine ...Smriti...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey amamzin poem yaa......... 👏
even i love poetry and do write a lot.....about a title...i think shelly has alredy given u enuff of them.....keep it up!!! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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but please suggest some yaar
and comment more on it

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