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Posted: 13 years ago
confusing teaser😕😕













update soon plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
yuyyy 18 page ho gya chalo ab update do
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Posted: 13 years ago
ye kya tha mujha kuch samajmai nai aaya, why cops r dere? Hope everythings is fin
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey thanku every one for fuilfiling my demand nd special thanks 2 alex714 nd kuhu_Arsha you both hav played a big role in completing my demand so as promised here is next chapter...
Once again thanku 2 everyone else fr ur likes nd comments... par abhi bhi u hav 2 work more fr likes nd comments chalo koi baat nahi lalach buri bala hai so lets nt get so greedy...😉

nd one more thing dis ff hav been shifted 2 fanfic forum its no more in d3 forum waise toh main sab ko pm karungi but still for convenience i hav added link of dis ff in D3 fanfic gallery on Page-40 u can check it from der also...
nd now 2 ur questions...answer is guyzz u hav 2 read d update below so not wasting more time i vil update...


chapter-9


Two months later...


shakti: "Here I cum my motherland India & my love, I can'nt wait 2 see u"😊(she boarded her flight frm NY 2 India)
While sitting in d plane she was smiling,dreaming 😍nd thinking abt one nd only her stupid, idiot lover boy...
She still remembered how much furious she was at him after naming neeti's baby boy...


FLASHBACK
She first got a shock 😲of her life dat how d hell did he get 2 knw abt d name which she wanted 2 keep fr neeti's baby, since d time neeti nd nitin broke d good news...

she had not even shared her thoughts abt d name even wid neeti, she just took d promise,name was a secret shared only by SHAKTI and her DEAR DIARY
(yes
mishtiarsha u r right, kudos 2 u fr d right guess😊)
Yes a diary she wrote every special thought in a diary,but it was not any ordinary diary she never ever wrote her diary on any normal paper diary book, she had written it in her PC nd stored it on a pen drive for d purpose of protecting it fr her mad family... nd she had hided it on d top shelf of her wardrobe, As she was cuming 2 NY she didnt brought dat pen drive wid her coz its storage memory was full and also she had her lappy by her side so she didn't felt d need of it but nw she regretted fr not bringing it up wid her...😔


But ven Amar named d baby 'Naman', which was d same name she had written in her diary
, then like a lightening sumthing struck her mind which made her very very angry😡... it was clear dat he had already read it as he was staying in her room but hw d hell he unlocked d password...

She was so pissed off wid d thought of him reading her personal thoughts dat 2 widout her permission...After she signed off from d chat she got worried🤔coz dat means he has also gone through all d embarrassing😳 stuff which a girl wud write in a diary abt her love life abt her fantasies & her imaginations...❤️
Dat night only she called her family nd clearly instructed dem 2 get Amar out of d house immediately...All tried really hard 2 convince her bt of no use, dey even asked Amar abt wat d matter is but he also didn't uttered a word...
Amar did as he was ordered 2 do by his lady love, He packed his bags 2 go back 2 Dharmesh's house but 2 his luck Dharmesh was on an outdoor shoot, nd after dat he wud b heading straight 2 his hometown so dat means d house was locked fr another one month...
Now he was practically roaming wid his luggage in car & he wud freshen up at sets...😛
Everybody frm shakti's family & der D3 frnds asked him 2 move wid dem bt he simply refused😒 & started living a gloomy, dull life... as shakti was nt even ready 2 hear his voice he wud literally call her at least 20 times a day bt she won't any of his calls not even reply back 2 one msg out of 100's of text he wud send her...😭

it had been a week after dat incident she was very restless😕 frm inside as every nw nd den sum1 frm der acquaintance or frm her family wud request her 2 change her decision dey also hav told her hw he had been living in his car, dis made her feel more pathetic bt her ego wud not let her 2 give up dis easily...😈

she was sleeping 🥱after a hectic day she had been rehearsing fr whole day just 2 divert her mind but it seems dat everyone is against her nd conspiring 2 not 2 let her relax n sleep peacefully...
someone was continuously ringing door bell from past 10 minutes , but she was so feeling so lazy nd sleepy🥱 even 2 open d door plus it was past midnight who will be here 2 visit her at dis time...but ven it seems dat d person on door is very desperate dat he or she can even break d door 2 get in, shakti gathered some courage nd opened d door in full swing nd after making sure dat it is reality😵 not her dream she immediately banged door on his face...😡
her sleep has been flushed away now she is in her angry or super angry mode... so she yelled on top of her lungs😡:" WHAT THE HELL are u doing here kunwar?? I don't want 2 see ur face get out of here right now.."

He pleaded.."Shaks please open d door sweetheart.. I know I am at fault but I can explain everything, please open d damn door..."🤔

dey both ver now shouting from either side of door, hearing all d noises her neighbors &security of building gathered around her apartment...
security guard was throwing him out nd pushing him away dey thought dat he might sum tress passer or sum stalker so dey even started calling for cops,

shakti was listening 2 everything frm inside first she enjoyed 🥳dat how security was teaching him a lesson but ven she heard dem of calling fr cops it frightened her...😒
she also imagined him in police arrest tied up in a chair wid a piece of cloth in his mouth only in his boxers nd 2-3 American heavy weight wrestler type cops howling over him just ready 2 pounce at him wid long stick like thing in der hand🤣 she shouted..."NOOO dis can't happen" wid dis she opened door, let him in nd convinced ever1 not 2 call for police as he is just a frnd frm India nd dey ver arguing on a personal matter so dey do not need 2 bother much...

As soon as dey ver inisde her apartment she said..."You can sleep in d hall, couch is all urs I'm very sleepy nd also I don't have any energy left, v vil talk later in morning"..wid dat she turned 2 her room nd banged d door not even wanting 2 watch his expressions..😕

In morning she woke up around 10:00 AM as it was Sunday nd she was having an off day..but she felt really awkward dat kunwar vil b in front of for whole day, How she vil b going 2 manage dat...
No doubt she was still furious 😡at him but being near him makes d things worse for her as she cudn't control herself she knew how vulnerable she is feeling for past week she wanted 2 talk 2 him let herself out but coz of her egoistic self she have put an angry face for him...
Yup, her anger was sumhow melted😊 after knowing abt his condition from everyone nd his unexpected visit last night made it more difficult for her... still she put a stern face😳 & came out of her room only 2 find all d house neat nd clean plus empty also she was all alone & her favorite breakfast pancakes wid maple syrup😃 was ready on d kitchen counter wid a note on top of refrigerator...it's written..."Shaks I am out for some strolling vil b back by afternoon as I woke up early so made breakfast, hav had mine, now ur's I have placed on counter..please do eat it up nd I am sorry really sorry..."
she was having mixed feelings, should she really give him a chance 2 explain?? 😕
she thought its good he is out fr sumtime so she can hav her time 2 think..after having breakfast she made her mind & spent a lazy sunday while watching T.V.

it was 3:00 pm she realized dat kunwar still not returned, now she started 2 get worried as dis is new place fr him, not only fr him she 2 doesn't exactly know d in & out abt NY so hw can she expect him 2 b knwon 2 dis place...😔
She tried his cell for first few times it did ring but nobody answered.. after fifth call it gave mechanical msg of switched off...
she panicked, 😲having all types of bad thoughts, tears ver welled up in her eyes...
she started praying 2 god 4 his well being..

around 6:30 pm after inquiring from security about him, she was standing outside her building looking for a cab, so dat she can start her mission..'Hunting down lost kunwar'

she was calling for cab's but it seems day everybody was busy wid passengers, right she was not in right state of her's on d verge of being mad,🤢 her hairs ver messy, she was wearing her old tracks & a loose T-shirt, face was tear strained & continuously tears ver flowing frm her eyes..😭

it was den she felt somebody tapping her shoulder, she turned around hugged🤗 d person in front of her so tightly dat he wasn't able 2 breathe, but somehow uttered..."Shakti wat happened y are u lyk dis?"
(cupping her cheek wid one hand nd wid other hand he shifted her hair strands behind)☺️
shakti sniffed & manage 2 say in a croaky voice: "tum kahan the kunwar, pata hai main kitna darr gayi thi jab tum itni der tak nahi aaye..." (she snuggled more into his chest burying herself into him just 2 feel his presence around her just 2 assure herself dat he is f9)

she looked up into his eyes searching fr answers but she found him smiling😊.. Dis irritated her nd by not getting any answer from him for more dan 5 minutes, she got highly infuriated😡 stomped on his feet & turned back 2 go away fr him, but ven she was abt 2 enter d gate of her building she heard sum voice in background, 😕she turned back 2 register wat it was, she got highly shocked on seeing d scene in front of her...😲

...(PS: it's all in flashback vil continue till next chapter)

so how was it good or bad?? let me know plzz nd fr dat do comment nd hit d like button...


PRECAP:

y shakti got amused ven she turned around,
sum more of der NY moments...
nd der confrontation abt y he read her diary nd after dat shakti back 2 india...





Edited by pallavi.14 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res😃
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hey it was awsumm update,,,,,,,,,,,luv it luv it luv it,,,,
poor amar😆😆,,,,,,,thnkx 4 pm waiting eagerly 4 nxt chappy😃

ps,, yayyy me fst 1 to cmt
Edited by kuhu_Arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update ...loved it
poor amar...hahahh but he deserves this punishment
waiting eagerly for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing part 👏...
Amar ne Shakti ki diary parhi 😉...
Bechare ke saath bohat bura hua 😆...
Amar NY pohanch gaya 👍🏼...
Shakti ne toh us se theek se baat bhi nahi ki 😒...
Waiting for next part...
Continue soon...
N thanks for the pm 😊.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update
thankx 4 d pm
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow what an update.
shakti ka gussa toh kuch zyada hi khatarnak hai
bechare kunwar😕
thanks for pm
it was an amazing update.

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