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Posted: 13 years ago
its amazing
loved it
eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww!!! poor amar feeling bad 4 him bt we knw our shaks too
hayee NY sachi mai
loved it alot...plzzz update nxt part asap
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...
loved it...
thnx fr pm...
waiting for nxt part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesumm updates
luvd it
read last 3 parts now
dey were amamxing
awwiee neeti's baby boy
amar read shaks diary
kunwar in NY
hww cutee
update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
Very cute update ..!
Gud one !
Update d next part soon !
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanku everyone for ur likes nd comments 😊nd i am sorry i cudn't reply each nd everyone...
nd coming 2 next update if possible den i wud update by 2day midnight if not den by 2morrow afternoon... toh tab tak i wud love if u guys increase d number of pages or likes anything u wish...so get started wid it everyone😉...

Edited by pallavi.14 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update...
loved it... ❤️
Amar readed kriya's diary... 😉 😊
kriya is not talking with him... bechara rey.. 😆
pata nahi aur kya kya karna parega usse...
Kunwar reached NY to manofy kriya... aww... 😍
he is such a sweet heart... loved him ❤️
shakti not even talk to rey... 😔
when rey was not at home, kriya was so tensed about him... thats show how much she love him... kitna bhi gussa kyu nahi ho jaye, uske pyar se kabhi nahi jeet sakta usko gussa...
flawless part...
eagerly waiting for next
update soon
thnx for pm😊
Edited by GayatriJethani - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
here i cum wid next update but i am not happy only 19 likes bass 😭 maine toh buhat sare pm bheje the...
thanks to everyone fr ur likes nd comments it do really encourage me 2 keep on writing...


Chapter-10
recap:
but ven she was abt 2 enter d gate of her building she heard sum voices in background, 😕she turned back 2 register wat it was, she got highly shocked on seeing d scene in front of her...😲
...
It was amusing a song was playing on a portable music player, which was in d hands of security guard nd he was smiling😊 like a fool while glancing at shakti ven she turned towards Amar she found him perfectly lip-sing it moreover dancing 2 d tunes of song wid d 'firang' kids of her neighborhood as d background dancers...😲

(he came near her while dancing nd all d kids behind him doing d same action which he was doing wid pleading eyes he he sang... )

o meri jaan
le legi meri jaan
(he pretended through his hands as if strangling himself...)🤢
teri ada
teri ada
(nd den placed his right hand on his chin wid a smile on his face...)😊


jaan jala na

(he pointed to his heart nd den through his hands he signaled himself as a deweena by rolling his fingers as if he is mad fr her-twice)
tujhe pe deewana
jaan jala na
(she realized wat he was tiring 2 do nd turned around 2 leave bt he wid d gang of children came behind her running as a roadside majnu)

tujhe pe deewana

(he bent on his knees in front of her nd stretched🤗 his both hands on d either sides den turned back nd signaled all d kids 2 d same nd dey immediately did wat he asked dem 2 do)

main hoon fida
main hoon fida


gustakhi maaf kar de (she smiled😊 slightly but faced him back wid an angry 😡face.. he holded his ears nd started doing sit ups...)
ab to insaaf kar de (he did some of d bboying steps.. turned himself upside down nd twisted his legs in cross like position...)
apna dil saaf kar de (placed his right hand on his heart nd jerked himself twice...indicated 2 her 2 clear all d misunderstandings)🤔

kehna to maan le

(all d kids now came in back of him nd sat on der knees, while folding der hands in namskar position... he first folded his hands in front of her as if begging her but wid an attitude 😈 on her face she turned her back at him nd walked ahead he stretched his hands towards her while singing maan le...)😔

ho jaane bhi de
jo bhi hua
jaane bhi de
jaane bhi de
jo bhi hua
jaane bhi de
(he made sum small waves wid his hands on both sides first 2 right nd den 2 left...)

jaane bhi de
jo bhi hua
jaane bhi de
jaane bhi de
jo bhi hua
jaane bhi de
(all d kids nd even security guard came in front of her folded der hands nd pleaded her 2 let go nd forgive...she turned her head in other way tiring 2 hide her grin,😊

but kunwar saw it nd smirked😈 side ways understanding dat she had already forgiven him so he played along..)

gussa tera jhoota
jhooti moothi berukhi hai
jaanu main to jaanu
teri na mein aashiqui hai

gussa tera jhoota
jhooti moothi berukhi hai
jaanu main to jaanu
teri na mein aashiqui hai
(he jumped ahead of her nd nd walked side by side her moving his hands in front her face pointing 2 her nose he pinched it nd den pointed 2 himself dat he knw her dat its not 'no' its a 'yess' also by nodded his head in direction of 'NO' first den in d direction of 'Yes'...)

aye sanam na kar sitam (he pulled her by her waist towards him, she glared 😡at him nd was struggling 2 get out of his grip but he wid loving puppy❤️ eyes asked her not 2 do so..)
tujh ko khuda ka vasta (nd den pointed upwards 2 god as making her swear on god..)

hey ( but instead she pushed 💔him hard so dat he landed on floor first she was concerned bt as soon as he again started singing nd dancing she shrugged her shoulders nd walked a step ahead..)
gustakhi maaf kar de
ab to insaaf kar de
apna dil saaf kar de
kehna to maan le
(he was lying on d floor bent himself on her feet nd prayed her holding his hands in shashtang parnam type position... but she stepped on his back nd walked over him wid a naughty😛 grin on her face..)

ho jaane bhi de
jo bhi hua
jaane bhi de
jaane bhi de
jo bhi hua
jaane bhi de
(ven he felt her foot over his back nd den whole of her weight he stick his tongue out nd lied der wid his hands flat ahead...)🤢

jaane bhi de
jo bhi hua
jaane bhi de
jaane bhi de
jo bhi hua
jaane bhi de
(after she got down from his back he wid other kids did some worm like steps while lying on d floor by getting up nd down in air nd den landing back 2 d ground just like worm or a snake... she did watched all dis frm corner of her eyes bt preferred 2 tease him more so pretended dat she don't care.. now he gets irritated nd while getting up he grabbed d head of nearest kid standing 2 him nd shakes up getting frustrated🤓...she giggled seeing d dis but instantly covered it wid a stern face 😳)

(4 girl kids did sum samba steps 2 on left of her nd 2 right side of her while he came on back of her..)

tanha na kategi (nd danced saying 'no' from his hands)
zindgaani jaan le tu (nd den pointed his fingers at her back)

meri bhi zaroorat (den again on him )
tujh ko hogi maan le tu (she walked fast ahead den he shakes his right hand as in a confident mode dat u vil cumback 2 me for sure...)


(now he jumped frm back 2 face her but rather scared her😲, her eyes ver wide opened nd mouth was in 'O' shape)

tanha na kategi (he closed her mouth wid his hands...)
zindgaani jaan le tu
meri bhi zaroora
t (he again tried 2 convince her but she gave one of her sweet😊 smile tring 2 get aside but he caught her wrist.. nd brought her back 2 him in dis process her back was jammed 2 his chest nd her eyes closed 😳as he leaned forward 2wards her ear as if 2 whisper sumthing...)
tujh ko hogi maan le tu (but shocked her by shouting in her ears.. she got furious 😡nd hit his stomach wid her elbow nd stomped at his foot...)

mar ke bhi na chhodunga (he laid in front of her blocking her way nd pretended 2 b a dead man by acting as he is going 2 stab his heart wid a knife...)🤢
teri baahe tera raasta ( all d kids came 2 him as if stopping him fr doing dat but he pushed dem back, shakti saw all dis drama nd laughed 😆at his nataunki bent beside him nd took his hand in hers nodded her head in direction of 'no' nd den hugged🤗 him tightly he was smiling widely in d hug dat at last she agreed nd forgave him..)

gu gu gu
gustakhi maaf kar de
ab to insaaf kar de
apna dil saaf kar de
kehna to maan le
(everybody smiled seeing dem patching up nd all clapped👏 loudly..)

ho jaane bhi de
jo bhi hua
jaane bhi de
jaane bhi de
jo bhi hua
jaane bhi de

jaane bhi de
jo bhi hua
jaane bhi de
jaane bhi de
jo bhi hua
jaane bhi de
(both of dem got up his hands around her waist nd moved 2 her apartments she was moving forward but kunwar turned back nd gave thumbs up👍🏼 2 d kids nd security guard wid a wink..)😉

FLASHBACK ENDS-------

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NOW PRESENTLY SHAKTI IN PLANE

so finally I hav 2 forgave him nd who can remain angry wid Kunwar & especially ven he did all those cute things nd took all d pain 2 dance on d streets of NYC just 2 manaofy me nd once again proved me dat he loves me 2 d core...❤️

she remembered all those lovey dovey moments of dat evening dey spend together cuddling up wid each other making for d past week nd sharing abt der horrible experience during dat week... involuntarily a smile crept on her face ven she recalled dat evening she blushed ☺️profusely, her cheeks ver now in d deep color of red... 😊smilingly again she drifted back 2 flashback 2 dat evening...


FLASHBACK CONTINUOUS AGAIN-----

dey ver chatting wid a hot mug of coffee in der hands she said.."Toh dats y u became Mr.India since morning, aisa koi karta hai kya😡, do u hav slightest of idea how much sacred i was.. meri halat kya hui thi?? kaise kaise thoughts aa rahe the tumhe pata bhi hai, nd where d hell ver u maine toh puri bulding dhund li thi fir tum kahan par the??" (she asked him complaining like a kid wid watery eyes..)😕

he smiled at her took her hands in his..." ohh toh aapko tension ho rahi thi meri..(she nodded in approval) actually tumne har jagah dekha par terrace nahi dekha na tumne...(she had an expresion like 'oopss') actually yeh visit jitni unexpected tumhar liye hai usse kahin zayda mere liye hai.. maine toh soch tha ki shayad kisi na kisi din tum mera ek call utha logi jab tumhara gussa shant hojayega nd den i vil ask u for forgiveness but humare friends ko yeh manzor nahi tha dats y dey all planned sumthing wid creatives so palki made me shoot back 2 back in shift after a shift fr d whole 4 days even i didn't object 2 dat kyunki main khud apne aapko divert karn chahta tha i did'nt talked 2 anyone fr a week...

ven my part of scenes got completed palki nd other boys came 2 me my stuff was already packed in my car so dey practically kidnapped me nd dragged me 2 airport... palki, shantanu & archie made me board d flight to NYC nd here i am in front of u, 🤪

u knw i was literally shouting for help on d airport nd created nuisance but shantanu & archie picked me up shifted me in a trolly nd den palki took another trolly for my luggage pata nahi hosakta hai ki mumbai airport par ab tak mere naam ke 'no entry' ke posters bhi lag gaye honge... 🤣i swear if it was in my hands i wud surely kill 😡dat 2 morons whom u call as ur brothers dis plan was der's plan only, bt now i must thank dem also for sending me here fir jab main yahan aaayga tha toh pele socha ki hotel mein ruk jaaon but wallet dekha toh unn gadhon ne mere paise nikal liye the sirf cab ke paise chode thend itni raat ko konsa money transfer counter open hota hai... isliye left wid no option i had 2 cum 2 ur apartment den aaj subah sabse pehle maine money transfer karvaye nd den i thought if i'm here already den y shudn't i use dis time 2 sort d things out so i hatched up all d plan included everyone nd convinced dat khadus guard 2 give me terrace keys nd set d choreography fr ur nieghbors Angrez kids hell dat was d most difficult thing ... phewww"


shakti was rolling 😆on d floor laughing holding her stomach after hearing wat all kunwar hav gone through especially dat how shantanu, archie nd palki abducted him deported him here.. she cud clearly imagined him like baby throwing tantrums... nd he was pouting nd glaring 😡at her like he wud kill her next moment but instead of stopping she laughed more harder till she got stomach ache nd hav slight tears in her eyes... den she stopped controlled herself nd asked... "UUmmm kunwar woh.. woh..." 😕(but even she did't needed 2 complete her sentence he understood nd continued)

K: Actually shakti I know wat I did was wrong i shudn't hav read ur diary widout ur permission but main kya karta..

one day i was cleaning up room nd arranging ur cupboard den i found ur pendrive on d upper most shelf so i kept it on computer table but at dat time only krirti came aking for some help fr her project work, i helped her but ven she didn't found her pendrive 2 store details which v hav downloaded frm net i gave ur's pendrive 2 her.. ven she connected it wid PC it asked fr password she told me dis i took it back frm her nd den gave another pendrive of mine but after she left i out of curosity checked it but same it was asking fr pasword after trying fr 2 times i cracked it...😊( she wid expressions on her face... but how did u cracked d password😕, he chuckled nd answered her).. arrey baba it was nt difficult fr me see hum password unhi cheezo ko rakhte hai jinse hum ya toh sabse zayada pyar karte hai ya sabse zayda nafrat bt i knw u,

u can'nt hate nybody so i typed 58927...(she was shocked 😲yeh insan hai ki koi mindreader, her eyes ver popped out of d sockets) i knew tum seedha seedha mera name toh dalogi nahi isliye maine apne cell ka keypad khola usme se dekha ki mere name ke button par jo numbers hai woh insert kara nd tadda... unlock kardiya but ven it opened i was stunned 😲it had ur diary nd sum of our pics nd sum of our practice vedios at dat time i didn't opened ur diary folder nd kept dat pendrive back on d table...but dat ven i reached sets i got 2 knw dat d new character in d3 vil b going 2 wear ur's i mean kriya's new year white dress nd rey vil shout on her...

somehow i managed 2 complete d secne but i was😔 missing u like hell 2 dat extend even i started hallucinating u every where...😍 frustatedly jab main ghar aaya tab pata nahi neeti ko kya bhoot chada tha teri aur mukti ki sari performances dekhne ka, usne kitni baar toh humari couple perfromances repeat karke dekhi bas den i cudn't myself tere room gaya aur... I know tujhe weird lagega but kya karun teri pendrive, tere teddy bears un sab ko hug karke rone laga,😭 I didnt know for how long i cried but teri pendrive ko apne haath mein rakh kar lag raha tha ki u r near 2 me den i started reading ur diary from begining & dat actually helped me alot, It gave me strength 2 sustain fr dat period ven u ver not der wid me..

maine toh har woh cheez karne ki koshish kari jo tu apni family aur specially neeti ke liye karna chahti thi, i practically lived wid ur diary in those days, i use fell asleep while reading it nd hugging ur teddy...❤️

us diary se mujhe tere bare mein buhat si aisi baatein pata chali jo shayad tu mujhse kehna toh chahti thi but kabhi bol nahi payi, u r a one mysterious girl, My mysterious girl only mine...

tears ver rolling down his cheeks, she 2 was crying😭 but 2 calm him &herself she hugged him nd continuously moved her hands on his back just like a mother is soothing her son...

ven dey both stopped crying she moved back cupped his face & apologised...

"kunwar I am sorry main buhat buri hun, tum meri wajah se pareshaan the aur maine tumhe apne stupid ego mein aakar punish kiya ..I AM SORRY PLZZ mujhe maaf kardo..."😔

she was ranting al dis but kunwar cudn't see her like dis so just 2 stop her he kept his lips on hers on his dis action she stiffened at first, shivers ran down her spine den she slightly moved her lips in between his nd after dat it got deepend, der passion took over demselves both lost control over der concouisness, dey ver feeling dizzy ❤️at dat moment dey actually needed dis 2 calmn der inner selfs 2 curb der turmoils... but after few minutes ven dey ver out of der breaths dey came 2 reality nd passed eachother a sweet nd shy smile☺️ she placed her head on his chest 2 hid herself nd he wid his hands encircled her waist 2 support her... dey both spended next 3 days very happily, she also promised him dat dey both vil read her all d diaries 2gether ven she vil get back...

FLASH BACK ENDS...


so how was it??

for d first time i included a fullfledged song nd tried 2 explain sum dance steps nd der reactions, do tell me hw was it...I knw i am pathetic while explaining dance nd songs but plzz give ur feedback as dat part took a lot of time..

plzz do comment if comment is not possible dan do hit d like button plzz...

dis ff vil take may b 2 chapters more nd den an epilogue so yes, it is near 2 it end...


PRECAP: shakti back 2 India nd Amar's surprise (kuch zayda hi surprise deta hai aaj kal ke ladke toh kuch bhi nahi karte aisa...)😊




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Posted: 13 years ago
Mind Blowing update
loved it
the song sequence was amazing
awww kunwar's soo sweet
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update
luvd the song sequence
relle a cutee one 👍🏼
ur emoticons r awesumm
dey relle help in reading 😆
awiee kunwar soo cutee
me fultoo in arshaland
luvd it
update soon

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