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It was 6 am of the mumbai moarning.Everything was cool and full of rainy clouds.KD's brother was playing at the beach with his plane.he used to come there every day and used to spent a lot of time alone.he liked to hang out rather than staying at home.he was bussy while playing a plane and then it landed near a girl's feet.She took it in her hand and started walking towards him."I like your plane" she said to him with a smile."Thank you"he replied with a smile.She saw around him,no one was there."what are you doing here,where are you parents ?" "They don't know i am here,my brother was supposed to bring me."And he didn't ?" she asked with a sad smile."He died,month ago" he said with sadness.She saw that and decided to cheer him up."Hey,what if we send him a message ?" she asked."What will we say?" he said with full of joy."hmm,it's your message".she said to him.He kept thinking for a while and said"I remember you" write this message.She took a pen and started writing on the one side of the plane."That's all you want to write ?" she asked him and he nodded.After writing the message,she took the plane in her hand and threw it in the air and he started to flying it by a remote.They both stayed together waching that plane going high in the air for many hours.After this,she gave him hug and promised that she will come here everyday no matter what.While she was walking towards her car she heard his voice."Hey,what's this Chiklet word ?"She got shocked for a while and started running towards him."See,you have written this on the other side of the plane" he said and gave plane to her.She took it from him.She was speechless after reading that.She didn't know what to do cry or smile.Every single pain she felt after his death,it was fadding from her face.She was crying and smiling at the same time."Me too little brother and you too chicklet" this message was written on that plane.It was KD's replay to their message from the heaven.She saw towards the sky with her beautifull eyes and drops of rain started falling on them...

This is my last OS may be.so plz comment and like as much as you want.thnx:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I decided,this will ma last OS becoz of lack of response:(
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Posted: 13 years ago
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your OS was really nice and hey don't get dissappointed you will get comments very soon your OS is really amazing !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -BurningDesire-

your OS was really nice and hey don't get dissappointed you will get comments very soon your OS is really amazing !!

really ? Thnx:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yeah it is :)) you're welcome :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was blissful ...
awesome beautifully written ...

and dont b sad if u dont get responce...the forum is really inactive ...u will start getting more comments as the silent readers will come up ...and no ways its not ur last OS come on abhi to buht kuch likhna baaki hai..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey awesome oS...loved it
please dont stop writting...there are less members on the forum thats why there is less response
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww liked it:)) please do continue :))
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wat a beautiful OS!! Please write more i'll pm some of my friends to read your OS's please dont quite!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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You killed KD again!! Khushi!! 😡

Why you becoming a tragedy queen now!!

It was a beautiful OS... But I'd love it more if you write some with him being alive and kicking you know... Just so that everytime we read of him hell freezes over! 😉

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And don't get dejected by the lack of response. It will come across. Giving up is a silly option.

When we don't give up with our loved ones dying, then rejection or not being appreciated is just a little hiccup in the speech. (Sorry I'm too glum, I've lost two loved ones this week.)
Edited by CoffeeAddict - 13 years ago

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