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As we all dont know, whether AniJal are going to get married or not. So, I thought of coming up with an OS on Marriage. The OS is Fictional, though want it to be true. 😳😳😳


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Finally, the baraat had arrived. Musicians were playing the band and the baraatis were dancing including Nikhilesh, binoy, Susheela, Phoram, and Shashwat. Sanyukta was sitting next to Aniket in the car, aniket had worn a golden coloured sherwani with a pagadi on his head, his heart was beating faster and was getting equally nervous. Susheela came near the car and said "baa, please come and dance with us, its so much fun" "Noo.. noo beta you kids enjoy" Sanyukta said. Susheela made a puppy face and again pleaded her MIL to join the other baraatis, Aniket said "Maa, please go .. bhabhi is insisting so much, please go and dance" "baa, see Aniket bhai also gave you the permission .. please come ... please" Susheela pleaded again , but this time Sanyukta couldnt deny nay further and agreed to join the other baraatis. So the entire Mazumdaar family was dancing around. Aniket kept looking up towards Tejals room, but couldnt get her sight at all, so he called her up.


Meanwhile, Tejal was all ready, she had worn a red lehenga - choli.. with a pallu on her head, the bridal make up enhanced her sweet features even more gracefully, she looked nothing less then a princess in that attire. Tejals phone rang and she blushed the name on the display "hello" she said softly receiving the call "Is the bride ready???"Aniket questioned "Hmm.. not really.. will take some more time.." "more time??!! planning to kill me or something" "could be" Tejal ans'd back to him and tehy both smiled, "Tejal, listen" "what??" "come to the window, I want to see you" "Noways, Aniket am not coming.. Dadi had said no seeing each other before getting married" "Tejal.. please .. listen to me.. come just once.. please.." Viabhavi enters Tejals room and snatches the phone from her hand and was about to say something, that when Aniket continued again "Tejal, if you dont come on the window.. then Il come up" "Really ??!!! Jiju... you'l up to meet Tejal???" Aniket was shocked and embarrassed to hear Viabhavi and Tejal blushed deep red. "Hmm... so saaliji.. its you and not Tejal..." "yes jiju.. its certainly at not Tejal" and Viabhavi giggles, and continues "jiju .. not fair .. you cant wait for awhile... let the marriage ceremony conclude... then Tejal will be all yours and you wont need to call her every now and then .. but till the marriage control jiju ..." and giggling she discontinues the call and both AniJal blush thinking about each other.


The Mazmudaars and the other baraatis are welcomed by the Vakhariyas and so is Aniket., after taking the blessings o the elders Aniket is amde to sit in the in the mandap and the pandit performs some rituals with him initially and then later tells "Lalitaben.. please get the bride, she is needed in the mandap" hearing this Aniket smiles inwardly and his heart starts beating a little faster. Viabhavi and Lalitaben get Tejal down and Aniket looks up, he is awestruck looking at Tejal in the red lehenga-choli and her eyes lowered to the ground, her cheeks becoming red in colour as they neared the mandap. Viabhavi and Lalitaben helped Tejal sitting the mandap next to Aniket, the pandit started performing the rituals with them and gave some chants to Aniket which he was to recite instead he slowly whispered "you're looking very pretty today" and continued to reciting the chants and Tejal just blushed even more deeper and harder.


The pandit said "let the brides maternal parents come in for the Kanyadaan" as Tejal didnt have
mother her Phaibaa and Gulabchand did her kanyadaan. Whilst doing this neither Gulabchand nor Lalita could hold back their tears, and the tears rolled their cheeks, after all Tejal was going to become parayi from them. seeing them cry Tejals eyes too brimmed with tears, but she didnt look up to her father neither Phaibaa, because if she would have done then she wouldnt have been able to control herself from weeping hard, so she kept her graze lowered.


The pandit said "make Tejal wear the mangalsutra" Aniket took the mangalsutra which was put on the plate and made Tejal wear it, she looked at him slowly and smiled, but lowered her graze with shyness and Aniket couldnt stop admiring her, then the pandit "put the sindoor in the brides maang" Aniket picked up the small sindoor box which was kept near the Holy agni and when he approached to fill her maang, she closed her eyes and a small smile spread n her lips, and her cheeks turned more red in colour, Aniket filled her maang with sindoor and Tejal slowly opened her eyes, he whispered "Mrs. Aniket Mazumdaar" and Tejal blushed even more harder. The pandit later continued with few more rituals with AniJal.


The pandit requested "the bride and groom shall stand to take saat phere" Aniket stood and held his out to Tejal, before anyone approached for teh help, seeing this Gulabs and Lalitas eyes brimmed with tears. Tejal initially looked at him, but she couldnt hold on to his graze any longer and lowered her graze, she slowly gave her hand in his and stood up. "Elder lady of the Mazumdaar family, please come and tie the ghaat bandhan of the bride and groom" said the pandit. Sanyukta signaled Susheela to tie the ghaat bandhan, after all she considered Aniket to be her last births son and she happily agreed to the bandhaan, "god bless you both" Susheela said and tied the ghat bandhan and as the pandit said AniJal took the saat phere around the Holy Agni.


And with this Miss. Tejal Gulabchand Wakhariya became Mrs. Tejal Aniket Mazumdaar







Hope, you guys liked it.
Let me know your reviews. Be it Good or Bad.
Thanks for liking, commenting and reading.
Please forgive me for any mistakes.



PS- Shilpa Dii, Id love if you come up with AniJal SR, your way 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it!

i loved the whole phone call scenario and i could imagine everything in my head :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashy924

loved it!


i loved the whole phone call scenario and i could imagine everything in my head :D




thanks ashi ... am glad yu liked the OS 😃😃
😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh!! Dhruti i'm so glad u r back with ur one-shots..
Loved it.. Beautiful.. The scenario created was awesome..

Next SR.. 😈
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏hey dhruti di
it is very gud
gr8 description
gr8 imagination
😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Debalina_Paul

Oh!! Dhruti i'm so glad u r back with ur one-shots..
Loved it.. Beautiful.. The scenario created was awesome..

Next SR.. 😈




thanks debu ... was wanting to write since a long time...
so finally got a good topic AniJal ki shaadi 😉😉😉


Thanks for liking the work dear 🤗


About Sr, have PM'd Shilpa dii ... hope she agrees ... I couldnt get the way she writes an SR 😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tani23

👏hey dhruti di

it is very gud
gr8 description
gr8 imagination
😊





heyaaa Tanni Partner ...
yu liked it??? Am super happy 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: riyashaan

it ws awesome..thnx fr pm



glad yu liked the OS 😃 and welks 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful to see and read ths OS. . very well done Dhruti 😊

i can see imagine this happening in the serial. . hope it comes true soon 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vinder90

wonderful to see and read ths OS. . very well done Dhruti 😊

i can see imagine this happening in the serial. . hope it comes true soon 😃




Thank yu .. Thank yu 😃😃😃😃😃
Hope, it comes true ... 😳😳😳😳

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