Arhi FF: Kalarikkal House-2 [Thread 3 link posted] - Page 47

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Posted: 12 years ago

Lost in translation, I feel disappointed I am unable to understand the song in its completeness, my loss. I am unsure about this update; it's neither a peak nor a valley more like a plateau. I am talking about emotional geography here, Arnav is slowly understanding the dynamics of Kashi's life be it Nalan's presence or her grief. The more he gets to know her the more he understands who she is and why she is this way. His reaction to her expression of grief earned him a few points; it takes a strong man to turn his back on an adversary's grief.

The Arnav-Kashi interactions are interesting and so are Arnav-Nalan, Nalan is like that dedicated lieutenant in Kashi's army who keeps an eye on the enemy always. He is drawn to Arnav due to sheer curiosity and never lets him forget where his loyalties lie.

Observation – I disagree with Arnav, Kashi may walk hurriedly like she is ticking off a to-do list in her mind that does not mean she is a bad dancer. I take Lata Mangeshkar's example the lady's voice grates on your nerves when she speaks and the same lady when she sings the voice transforms. A lesson Arnav, everything is not as it appears, one has to look longer and deeper to understand the subject in totality.

I took the liberty of adding one of my favorite songs from an old Mani Ratnam movie Thalapathi 1991, this song's link and its meaning are given below.

thalapathi-yamunai aatrile eera

English Translation
In Yamuna river, in the humid air,
To dance with Krishna
As dream flowers, to watch the path,
Young Radha wilts.
Night has passed, day has passed,
The king is not with her
The young girl's unblinking eyes
Search here and there
Krishna isn't in the cow-hearding grounds
To love is a sweet-lovely-torture-trouble
Poor Radha…

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Posted: 12 years ago
welcome back D..:)

His expression brightened when he saw the boy.

so did mine , so did mine:))
Edited by ninand - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
What should I say dear..since I read ur first post..I m ur fan...especially u r very good at forming an atmosphere and though the language, the setting , the legends r all new to me but still I cannot help but found myself engulfed into a range of emotions which u stir in me. The nostalgia, the pain, the grief, the memories, the beliefs r so tangible..n I love u 4 this.👏

I ve a request: u told us that its going to be short but I m hoping otherwise. Continue it darling n don't stop. This is one of those 2 FFs, whose update is all I m looking for when I log into IF. Hope u consider. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update! and welcome back!!
I'm glad you have a great time! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalyaani

Lost in translation, I feel disappointed I am unable to understand the song in its completeness, my loss.



I can't translate word by word..
Its Radha's POV actually.Krishna is not with her right now. She is suffering the agony of separation and pining for him...without understanding her pain Krishna is busy enjoying with other gopikas.
Radha is compared to a golden star here. She is beautiful,her love is true,yet Krishna seeks the company of other beautiful ladies. She wants to know the reason...
This is the gist of the song. Hope this helped.
The song you've posted is equally good. There also Radha is pining for Krishna and she's waiting for him...but there is no mention of him seeking the company of other Gopis.


Edited by tanya_vi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tanya_vi



I can't translate word by word .Its Radha's POV actually.Krishna is not with her right now. She is suffering the agony of separation...without understanding her pain Krishna is busy enjoying with other gopikas.
Radha is compared to a golden star here. She is beautiful,her love is true,yet Krishna still seeks the company of other beautiful ladies. She wants to know the reason...
This is the gist of the song. Hope this helped.
The song you've posted is equally good. There also Radha is pining for Krishna,but is not worried about him seeking the company of other women over her.


Thank you so much, awfully sweet of you to do this...I appreciate the song a lot more now. I heard it a few times to follow the dance and the expressions. This gives it a whole new dimension for me. Thanks again.

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Posted: 12 years ago
"Unnittan?"
ah...dat reminds me of d rimpoche kid in d mohanlal film ' yodha '...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yayyy you are back...I Missed YOU!!!

Beautiful...the dance sequence was so mesmerizing...I loved it!!!
I feel Arnav respects her grief, her pain, as he has gone through all of it too...much in the same way...
As he observed the dance was far from elegant, but desperate and painful...and so rightfully described by you...wow it moved me!!!
nalan's mother works so hard to give him the living...respecting mothers all the more!

Loved the update...
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
Devi, you may be in North Carolina or wherever else, but your writing transports me to Kerala, love.
You weave your words so beautifully that I can actually picture the house, the surroundings and the people, having visited Kerala a couple of times and stayed in a hotel room that was reconstructed from an old wooden homestead. The architecture was absolutely stunning, with even the door hinges and bolts made of wood. We were told that the wooden hinges and bolts wouldn't squeak like metal ones did, allowing young lovers to sneak out for a secret tryst in the middle of the night, Your description of Kalarikkal House reminded me of that.

Add Arnav and Kashi's story to this setting and you have a heady mix. I'm thoroughly enjoying this tale and have bookmarked the page and stalk it twice a day for updates!!

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