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Posted: 12 years ago
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Helloo Nakshians...🤗🤗🤗
I m writing my 1st Naksh SMPlicious OS😳
Read at ur own Risk😉
This OS is not only romantic but a little bit Emotional too😃
Now I should Stop my Bak Bak...😆
Okay 1,2,3...GO😳



Krishna-Radha play is over. The next day morning Naitik wants to spend some time with akshara. But she is very busy with her household work. Naitik keeps on calling her but she didnt come. Naitik gets ready for office.
Before going to office she calls for the akshara again. This time akshara comes.


Naitik: Main office k liye ready hun but jane se pehlay mjhe kuch meetha chahiye (Pointing towards his cheek)
Akshara: Naitik subha subha ye sb...😳
Naitik: mjhe kuch nhi sunna.
Akshara: dekhiye mjhe bht kam hai n duggu ko b feed krwana hai
Saying this akshara goes from there
Naitik gets angry

Naitik to himself: okay fine,main ap ko force nhi krun ga,ap apne kam kijiyeSaying this naitik goes office without having breakfast
In the evening:
Naitik comes from office. Akshara gives him glass of water but he didnt take it n go straight to his room without saying anything.
Akshara noticed that naitik is super angry with her
&
She knows how to make him happy
She thinks a plan
After Dinner Akshara goes to gayatri's room with duggu n says that duggu isnt sleeping. Gayatri takes duggu n makes him sleep in her lap. Gayatri asks akshara if she can keep duggu with her tonight.
(Akshara k mann mein ladooo phoota)
Akshara agrees n says call me if duggu disturb u.
Akshara kisses duggu n goes to her room & locks the door
Naitik: Akshara ap ne darwaza kyun band kr dia(actually he is my little munna,dont know much about this, dont worry, i will tech him each n every step, aj ki puri rat i m keeping an eye on them)😳😳😳 aur duggu kahan hai?
Naitik was still angry. Akshara didnt answer him as she was busy in imagining upcoming Naksh romance just like we Fans do
Naitik asked her again to which she replied that duggu will sleep tonight with ma

Naitik didnt look at her, so akshara take a rose n goes near him. Naitik didnt notice her. So she throws his one file on the floor(Like in Feb 2011, Naitik throws akshara's sarees)

Naksh convo:
Naitik: akshara ye kya kia ap ne? mjhe kam krna hai jaldi
Akshara: bad mein(throws another file)
Naitik: mjhe abi kam krna hai, ap ja kr so jayen
Akshara: bad mein(throws one more file)
Naitik: ye sb kya hai, ap hatiye yahan se(naitik said this angrily but akshara didnt care bcoz wo apne roothe yar ko manane ae😳😳😳)
Akshara: kaha na bad mein n throws all the files
Naitik was about to go but akshara pushes him on the bed(like naitik did in SMP of 9 nov,2009)
Then akshara sits on knees near naitik n gives him rose
& says: kya is khubsurat rat ko or khubsurat bnane k liye ap mere sath dance kren ge?

Naitik takes rose but he was still angry with akshara for what she did in the morning
Akshara plays the song on music player
The song "Tu tu hai wahi" plays
Akshara sings following lines

  • Tu tu hai wahi DIL❤️ ne jise apna kaha
(Akshara takes naitik's hand n keeps it on her heart❤️)
  • Tu ha jahan main hun wahan
(Akshara keeps her head on naitik's shoulder)
  • Ab to ye jeena tere bin hai saza
  • Aa mil jayen is trha,do lehrein jis trha
(Akshara tightly hugs naitik)
  • Phir hon na juda han yeh vaada raha
(Akshara tightly holds naitik's hands)
Naitik completely melts & sings the following lines:
  • Kisi mod pe b na yeh saath toote
(Naitik kisses on akshara's head & was about to kiss on cheek)
&
(Akshara runs away blushing)
  • Mere hath se tera daaman na choote
(Naitik holds akshara's pallu)
&
(start pulling her towards him)
Akshara sings following lines:
  • Kabhi khwab mein b tu mjhse na roothe
  • Mere pyar ki koi khushiyan na loote
(saying this Akshara had tears in her eyes)
Naitik sings following lines:
  • Tujhe main jahan ki nazar se chura loon
(Naitik wipes akshara's tears)
  • Kahin DIL❤️ k kone mein tujhko chupa loon
(Naitik points towards his heart❤️ showing that he will hide akshara in it)

Then song ends n naitik sees akshara with a naughty look

Akshara understands what naitik is gonna do next. But she has already decided to make naitik happy.(Matbal she will help naitik in each n every step)
Naitik kisses on akshara's forehead. Then on cheeks, then on eyes.
After this, akshara also kissed on naitik's cheeks, then she sees on naitik's lips with a passion in her eyes.
Naitik becomes surprised seeing this
Akshara brings her lips near naitik's lips n was about to kiss when naitik goes away from her. Akshara follows him n pushes him on the bed.Naitik takes akshara's hand n brings her near him on the bed. Then Naitik comes on top of akshara n kisses on her lips. Akshara also joins him. They get lost in their Kiss Of LOVE.


After that naitik starts kissing akshara here n there & akshara's hands were continuously moving on naitik's back.
After sometime, akshara comes on top & repeats each n every step
&
they continue doing this whole night
(bs bs... ab mjhko sharam aaing
main sharam k mare pani pani hoing like this emoticon)


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Keep visiting this page to read my dukh bari kahani of "Making of OS"😭
Edited by Aish-Naksh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sexy and hot agr real mei serial mei ho jaye wah kya ho ga reaction fans ka!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi aish nice one .
nk angry one is too nice and good one . next ak give duggu to g3 :) and her motivation is so cute
keep writing ...:-).
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ye SMPlicious toh tha..

emotional kaha tha?😕🤣


good work Aish.. loved it..😍
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Posted: 12 years ago
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mast OS ek dum romantic bahra jo show mein nai bas mere imagination mein pura hoga 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
😍 😍 wat an os . Its awesum . Maza aa gaya . Kya os tha .awww 😍

this is 4 u 🥳 🥳

juthi , tujhe kabse sharam ane lagi 😡 🤣
itne religious month mei tu kaise jhooth bol sakti hai 😲 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome yaar waiting for some more itne bikaari hogayae naksh smp ka totally enjoyed😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awes0me OS dear..
L0ved naksh romance alottt n TU TU HAI WAHI iz one of my favr8 song..
Very nycc
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice one aish 😳 tumne apni wish is os ke through puri kar li akshara initiating for the smp😉😳 keep writing more..

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