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Preeti

@preetihere

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Posted: 13 years ago

#201

Ha ha ha! Khushi has a full-blown crush on him i like the way u described her concern on the diabetes angle ...totally "sankadevi-ish" 😆 wish we had known how Khushi was before she learned the ugly truths and made her so sad!
Am happy she is handling herself well before "Mahi"...aaahhh finally a small word on Manu Manorama!
Didn't want her to get that solution to be away from Arnav..but u know better!😃

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thebubblespop12

@thebubblespop12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#202

Very interesting..
Thanks for the PM and update!!

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Dhanya

@samrudhi.r

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#203

Kalyani, i like the way story is progressing. You have a talent in thinking up stories and putting it beautifully. I like your storied basically for the complexities in the relationships between characters and how they are entwined with each other. This FF is my fav from ur collection.

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latekate

@latekate

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#204

So this is Manu?

This is getting interesting.

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: latekate
So this is Manu?

This is getting interesting.

You are the only one who noted this...😃

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khusiarnav

@khusiarnav

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#206

great update...

she is changing team now... working with biological father!!!

"It was clear as day, between the devil aka Arnav and the deep sea aka Mahi, she would choose the deep sea, at least she knew how to swim." - loved it!!

update soon!!

plzz pm me

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lovespell

@lovespell

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#207

WOW Nice Updates. I missed most of it. I was kinda busy past 2 weeks. In breaks I did read your updates but couldnot comment them.. Finally I took some time to do it. Very nice take on the story. Payal is too cute. Does she give up information llike that or does she realize the growing interest between the two to know each other more????😉

Arnav is now finally coming back so hoping to see some update on him in the next week. It's not that I am nagging. You did a beautiful job giving each character its own importance and I never felt to skip a paragraph because it is on less important characters(which I do in the real serial😉😉)

Khushi is too cute. She realized she has a crush on him. And the little peek in her past regarding Mattt is so cute and really hilarious.

WOW! Her father asked her to call him 'MAHI'. What The...😆😆😆. he realized she is uncomfortable near him. Now she is gonna work under legal department??? But you are gonna find a way to bring ARHI moments I am sure.

Now my time is up. See ya in the next much awaited updated.

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latekate

@latekate

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: ruchshah

ok...so Khushi is smitten by ASR...n has accepted that too...goood progress!!!
I am sure tough time's ahead for her..with arnav n mahi around... btw Who's Girish? did i forget? Anyways, Thanks for the PM...love the way the story's moving!!

relationship not yet known. but he has been mentioned earlier as well

Originally posted by: Kalyaani

Chapter Three

Both her brother and father were useless and irritating all those dreadful days, the only supporting shoulder she had was Girish's, god bless that guy for sticking it with her in the darkest phase of life.

and now again he makes an appearance

Originally posted by: Kalyaani

Chapter Thirteen

Khushi had read up everything about diabetes and consulted the endocrinologist whom her Bua visited. If Bua found it silly, she didn't care, such information was never useless, Bua too was diabetic, and she needed to know all this to take care of her after all. Girish had laughed at her and never failed to ask how "lover boy" was doing, each time they spoke, which was almost every other day. There was only one thing holding Khushi back, not that she intended to take this crush any further, the knowledge that Lavanya was his girlfriend. That bit of gossip she got from Suhani, who voiced her crush on ASR rather blatantly, she reminded her of Nandini, always sighing loudly whenever he was mentioned.

may be somebody very special in her life