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Posted: 13 years ago
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HI GUYZ I HAD WROTE AN OS HOPE U LIKE IT I M NOT THST GOOD IN WRITING BUT I WANTED TO WRITE SO I WROTE IT HOPE U LIKE IT
THE TIME HAS CAME
Chandigarh

2 days before virman's wedding

(it was around 3 in the night )

Vadhera mansion at viraat' room he was trying to get some sleep but he was not able to sleep he was feeling restless he was feeling that something is going to be wrong but this was going on his mind from the day when he last meet doctor and there he got to know maanvi's condition doctor had given their answer now no one can save maanvi but still his heart being stuborn was not able to belive it. he sleep in anxiety now a days when he will get up he will not find her so therefore he didn't sleep because loosing her is his worst night mare

Viraat tried every possible ways to sleep but he was not,he just wanted to meet maanvi and hug her tight to save from their ruthless destiney but he can't as bride and groom can't meet before their wedding as it jinx even though he didn't belive in all this but he don't want to take risk when it comes to maanvi he controlled his feelings and told to herself ''viraat it's just matter for two days then that dedfutiya will be ur forever no one can snatch her from u not even the dead'' (he said the last words to ensure himself) (he was steated on his bed facing his back towards balcony)

''Do u really thing that?'' a angelic voice came from behind

(without wasting a single minute he turned around as he recoznised this voice yes this was the voice which had stolen his sleeps infact not only her voice but everything her eyes her beauty her simplicity her smile her innocence but wait s cecond what is she doing here at this hour of night what if someone find out then she would he in danger '''''''.but she was looking cute in whole white dress.that dress was justifying her innocense but how she managed to come in the door were locked wait did she climb from balcony omg this girl god please put some sense in her she need to take some rest after all its there wedding after 2 days he didn't want her to take stress and make her health even more worse but again who can compete with MAANVI CHAUDARY-THE GREAT merei HRISHIKESK KI SHERNI sherni se yaad aaya it has been 15 minutes she has been here but she didn't utter an single second omg what's wrong with her is she alright (viraat thought allthis) ''off course yup she is fine therefore she came climbing the balcony dumbo viraat maanvi says right ur the biggest chep'' viraat mummerd underhis breathe (while althis maanvi was just smiling) viraat fine something fishy his heart began to race when they were decreasing the distance between them but he don't want to spoil the moment ''after all SHERNI ROZ ROZ MERE LIYE BALCONY CLIMB KARKE THODI AAYEGI''so he ignored all his strange feelings they were only 2-3 feet distanced and looking in eachother eyes)

''viraat tumne mere question ka answer nahi kiya bolona kya tumhe sach mai aisa lagta hai?'' she said with not her usual way it was something different and weird but viraat was so lost in the moment he didn't sensed it

''Maanvi tum kya kehrahi ho I didn't get it mujhe kya kaise lagta hai'' he said it In all confused way

''yeh hi ke tum mujhe maut se bhi bacha loge'' she said in her same weird way now came back viraat in his sense

''maanvi yeh tum kaise baate kar rahi ho aur aadhi raat mai tum yaha yeh puchne aaye ho 2 din mai humari shaadi hai aur tum apni hi shaadi mai bhoot lagna chati ho'' he said it in teasing tone

''phele mere question ka answer karo viraat'' she said in serious tone

Now viraat thought thinks r getting all weird

''haan maanvi offcourse mein tumhare liye kuch bhi kar sakta hoon maut se bhi lard sakta hoon '' viraat said it was a promise less than a answer

''aur agar aisa nahi hua toh tum who fight haar gaye toh'' she said increasing distance between them

This sank viraat's heart he told in worried tone coming closer to her ''maaanvi plz don't say this ur my life main tumhe kuch nahi hone duga''

''aur agar aisa hua toh''she said said with emotionless expression still moving back

Now viraat was getting worried firstly what docters said about that and now at this hour of night maanvi came and she was acting all weird plus her questions

''viraat promise me agar aisa hua toh tum apni life mai kabhi nahi rukogaye aur aage bard jaauge par ha plz itna aggey bhi mat bad jaana ki mujhe bhul jaana who kya haina tum mera paehla aur aakri pyaar ho aur rahoge toh mujhe taklfihogi par plz tum apni life meri yaad mai waste mat karna promise karo '' she said on the edge of breaking a tear roll down from her life

This was a limit for viraat he can't bear it so he graabed her with shoulder and said ''aisa kuch nahi hoga maanvi'' he said with tears he walk towards his bed his back was facing her and tears were rolling from his eyes he said''maanvi mai tumhe bata nahi sakta ki tum meri kya ho tumhe mai kho naho sakta tumhe khona matlab khudko khuna aapni saaso ko khona apni dhadkan ko khona aur bina dhadkan ke kon zinda reh''''..''before he complete his sentence maanvi stop him by putting her palm on his mouth

When viraat touched her palm which was on his face it was cool like ice he got tensed before he could say anything he heard a knock on the door it was viren and his voice was shattered now this made viraat frightened he run towards his door and opened he saw viren all in tear

Viraat-kya hua bhai aapko'..aap ro kyu raha ho? (In worried tone)

Viren-bahi woh''''..woh''''''..maanvi

Viraat-acha maanvi who abhi yehi''''''..when he turn back to show viren maanvi he found no one just a cold wind passed from him which has maanvi's fragnance and opened the balcony door

Viren-bhai jaldi chal jeevika ka phone aaya tha who bahut ro rahi thi keh rahi thi ki'''''''''''...maanvi''''''''''maanvi saas nahi lerahi hai (he said in tears)

Now this was the time viraat shattered he thought all his world has been shattered they quickly run towards their guest house where chaudary's were leaving they came for virman's wedding

While they came in the guest doctor has been arrived everyone were gattered their including vadhera's jeevika seating numb clutching maanvi's hand

DOCTOR closing maanvi's eyes

Doctor- I m sorry she is no more

''Maanvi'' viraat yelled and then he never spoked anyword he closed himself in his world in maanvi's world he keep wrtting maanvi maanvi all over his room and still waiting for maanvi he belives that someday she will return but he forget that that day will never arrive many years passed but viraat didn't spoke any word vadhera's tried many ways they had done every possiable way but all gone In vain

HOPE U LIKE IT SORRY FOR MiSTAKES
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It's so sad :'(

Good story :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice piece of work...
very well written n beautiful potrayal of emotions...
but nw u owe us a happy one...😊
do pm me wen ya cum up wid more such works
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This was so sad!
Beautifully written
Awesome work!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow is all I can say beautifully written
It was so sad lovef it but now you have to write us all
A happy one
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Posted: 13 years ago
#6
aww sad..how can she die :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it .. it was an emotional one
Thz for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I m cryng gir...nd i hate u 4 dis
bt i luv u more bcoz of givng such a wondrful
story...its superb.bt i hope dis doesnt happns in d show
*fingers crossd*
do cum up wid more nd plz update yr other stories too*waiting*
Thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#9
nooo yaar plz dont do this,even in OS i cant see manu dieing.
I want to see virman happily married forever.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its really sad one, i felt cry...good work

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