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Posted: 13 years ago
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yehi hai pyaaarr <3

''One fairer than my love?The all-seeing sun

Ne'er saw her match since first the world

begun''

''pyaar ethni mehangi hote hai??...mein nahi

samjhrahi hai...4 d 1st tyme...kuch tho hua hai

jo mera dil ki dhadkan rukte hai...mujhe

sapne dekhne ki majboor karte hai...yehi hai

pyaar??''

jab rey ne kriya ko pehli baar dekha ...uska

mann yehi poochte the...<3

REYANSH SINGHANIA




rich..handsome hunk...n ladly beta of d
singhania family...ve a huge crush on SHARON RAI PRAKASH..eventhought she is frm his fathers' rival family..bt dnt knw tat its jst a infactuation wen he meets KRIA GHAI PRAKASH...he fall in love wid her on 1st sight...<3.

KRIA GHAI PRAKASH



kria is frm the prakash family...she is bubbly n vivacious gal...dnt knw mch abt love till she meets rey...she loves him despite of rey's family enemity...sharon is her cousin sister!
SHARON RAI PRAKASH



she is also frm d prakash family...beautiful as well...she is kriya's cousin...n also in love wid SWAYAM SHEKHAWAT...doesnt knw tat rey has a huge crush on her.

SWAYAM SHEKHAWAT




he is frm d shekhawat family...rich n cute chocolate guy whos in luv wid sharon...also a frnd of kriya...

the story already started bt still...it ws nt d begginin...it begins wid rey in his room...suddenly his frnds like a surprise...⭐️

rey:hey guys...wat a surprise!
vicky:hey
nilesh:wassup dude?
rey:nthng dude..
vicky:are yar..tum bhi na...kya hua...vo tho batao..
nilesh:ya...wat happend?
rey:i like sme1
vicky:kya...whoaa...@last...kon hai bhai??
nilesh:par..tum ethna sad face kyun karaha ko??
rey:vo sharon hai!
nilesh & vicky:hai rabba...yeh tumhe kisko chuna hai bhai!!!!
rey:aah...i like her dude..u knw...hum dono ka families agar ess baat pata chal gai tho..world war 3 pakka..
vicky:vo sab tho sahi hai..par tumhe ethni depress mein hame nahi dekh sakti..
nilesh:ab tho party hai boss..
rey:tum sab kya bakwas kehrahe hai...dnt do nythng stupid okay?
nilesh:pyar mein sab stupid hota hai..
vicky:tu chup...ab tho hame yaha jaana hai...2 prakash family penthouse...aaj vo kriya haina...sharon ka cousin...usska b'day hai na??
rey:wat??...main>??..are agar kissi ne mujhe pehchaliya tho?
nilesh:kya hai bhai..pyaar maim thodi na hota hai??
vicky:haan haan chalo chalo...
rey:teek hai phir chalte hain

every1 left d room...bt in kriyas house....

kriya:mom..abhi ek engagement n all...i cnt do it..mujhe wakht chahiye..
kriyas mom:kriya beta...shivam,ek bada khadaan ka ladka hai...hes highly educated too...jst 2 yrs ki baad ki baat hai kriya..samjh lo
kriya:i'll thnk abt it mom
mom:okay beta...take ur tyme!
kriya:mom...sharon kaha hai?...mera b'day par vo kya late hai??
sharon:are yar...kaise bholongi meri pyaari si behan ka b'day...happy b'day!
kriya:agar nahi aaye tho..marthungi main tujhe...tanks alot!!!
sharon:tum abhi bhithayar nahi?...god..chalo chalo...maim karunga tera makeup..
kriya:aah...haan haan...jaldi!!

and rey,vicky n nilesh...got into deir costumes...
rey ws in a cool dress of violet baniyan n a white overcoat..


they all got into d penthouse ...dey were many...includin hot gals wich actually made vicky n nilesh happy!

vicky:am lovin it...☺️
nilesh:me2...😳
rey:hey..tumhe sharon ko dekhaa??

jst wen rey ask'd d question...den kriya came along down d stairs wid sharon...rey slowly opened his mouth as kriya ws cmin down d stairs...

she ws so beautiful as d moon...soo pure under tat nite...rey ws striked like a cycle striked a truck vfast...rey got his heart touched...he ws in like a dream...he couldnt get off her sight...he ws striked wid love...he reconizes his true love...he xperienced it...tears rolled slowly as in broken words of happiness...
rey:oooh...kriya
vicky:ya...sharon...wat??...kriya???
nilesh:😲
rey:ooo...kriya.
nilesh & vicky:kriya??
rey:aaah...its kriya no nt sharon...ooh...i dnt love her...its kriya...i lov vv love her...

rey told it wid such ecstatically tat he burst out wid jumpin...his frnds tried 2 handle rey so as 2 nt make a scene der...vicky n nilesh got rey in both of deir frm jumpin...rey being so happy tat he tried 2 push dem away n run wich in turn hit sme1 hard...who ws none other than KRIYA...she gets shocked wid his sudden attack...she slipped n fall on d floor hard...where rey stood as frozen wid d hit...he couldnt get her hands or even say a srry 2 her...he ws standin der like a statue...vicky n nilesh dnt knw wat 2 do...run or die here...

PRECAP

rey still standin as a statue wich cannot talk or move...hes still lukin @ our poor kriya whos hurt...whereas vicky n nilesh get nervous n scared wen kriyas father came 2 dis scene...n cmin near rey...

wat'll happen ??...if u love 2 ve a continuation...plzz give ur support as likes n cmments so tat i could write more...4 d update u cn add me in ur buddy list..😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
#2
Res

Unres...

Fab start...

Rey toh already flat...

Lol...

Precap is very interesting...

Update ASAP...

Do pm me...
Edited by Born2Dance - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#3
Awesome start..continue soon and do pm me plx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#4
nice start..please do continue!and update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#5
Awesome start...
Do continue...
N for sure pm me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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gud work
its concept was awesomeee
update soon eagerly waiting for it

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update...thanks 4 the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#8
Awesome 🥳
rey had a crush on sharon . . . . 😆
even better,,,, agar uske piche vahan na jata . . . To kriya ko kaise dekhta 😉
shivam se shaadi . . . . . Ewww 🤢
ab to rey hi usse knockout kar dega 😈
wat . . . . Kriya ko hi gira diya . . . . Ab to iski band bajegi 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome concept and a really good start...pls continue and pm me pls.!
Edited by arsha66607 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice start...do continue soon 😊

Pm me when u update next 😊

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