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Guys I had this idea in my mind for so long but never let it out. So I jotted it down literally typed it. This is after the heer ranjha play when Arnav sees Shyam and Khushi together and after that he finds Khushi alone sitting in the garden where the competition was held.

Please don't leave me

Arnav saw Khushi sitting on a bench in the garden. He was very angry at her for cheating on him, for again being with that Shyam. He went towards her and held her from her upper arms and shouted o her.

Arnav-; What do you think of yourself Khushi Kumari Gupta?? Why cant you stop your cheap middle class tricks even for a while. Why do you always hurt me? Answer me damnit. Why are you silent now?

Khushi managed to look at him and then was that Arnav saw, a bit of white froth like thing was coming out of Khushi's mouth.

Khushi-; Aaa...rnavji... sn..aakkee b..ii.tt me..

Arnav forgot all his anger, picked Khushi in his arms and ran towards his SUV.

Arnav-; Khushi keep talking to me... don't close your eyes. Try to keep awake.

Khushi-; Arnavji... bef..o..ree I die I ... wan..ted to tell you that ji..jaji ...is aa cheat. Hhee is.. no..tt good for di... {She told him everything about Shyam in deap breaths.}

At that time Arnav felt the world crashing at his feet. How much he had misunderstood Khushi.

Arnav-; shh... don't worry Khushi. I will not let anyone hurt you or Khushi.

They reached the hospital. Arnav took her in his arms and rushed inside.

Arnav-; Where's the doctor?? Call him fast damnit.

Khushi was taken into immediate care at that time.

After a few hours-;

Doctor-; Mr.Raizada relax. Your wife is fine now but she's still unconscious .

Arnav-; Can i meet her??

Doctor-; yeah but please see to it that the patient does not has any kind of stress.

Arnav went in and saw Khushi. His Khushi. There she was lying in pain just because of him. If he would not have misunderstood her, nothing like that would have happened.

Arnav went and sat near Khushi. He took her hand in his and kissed it.

Arnav-; Khushi I am sooo sorry. I should not have misunderstood you at that time. I thought you and Shyam were having some kind of affair. But how wrong I was. Please Khushi mujhe maaf kardo please.

Arnav thinking Khushi was still unconscious told her the truth of their wedding. Little did he know that Khushi was listening to all this.

It hurt Khushi to know that Arnav misunderstood her but now she was happy to know that she had Arnav with her.

Khushi-; Arnavji...

Arnav-; Khushi thank god you are awake, I am so sorry for shouting at you.

Khushi-; shh.. arnavji don't worry I heard it all. Dont worry humne aapko maaf kiya.

After a few days KHUSHI RETURNED HOME AND WAS SURPRISED TO SEE THEIR ROOM ALL DECORATED WITH RED ROSES. After they were alone in the room Arnav went towards Khushi, got down on his kness and asked-;

Arnav-; Khushi Kumari Gupta will you marry me?

Khushi had tears of joy in her eyes and nodded her head in agreement.

I know it was small but i was just a kind of idea or you can say something. But do tell me how it was.

Try my other works-;

Fun in the rain-; https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/3140943/os-fun-in-the-rain

OS THE CUTE SURPRISE-; https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/3131975/the-cute-surprise

SS I AM SORRY!! -; https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/59642213�


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Posted: 13 years ago
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really fantastic...
loved it❤️...superb!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Cute one.. Love it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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such a sweet os.
Thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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by god that was beautifully written..loved it..👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i luved d thought it was very nyc!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww very cute, loved it please do continue. Thank god nothing happened to Khushi. Thank you for the pm, please do update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wowlovely..d strtin was a bit..:(😭bt perfect endin..proposal..😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww sooo sweeet dear...loved it n thnx 4da pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fabulous! I loved it alot! You did a great job!

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