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It's a imagination....story....

..................PART=1.................................... .........

One day,Mr.Ballwant Wallia took his wife Amrit wallia to hospital ,to admit her for child labour in a serious condition cause she..fell down on the floor n..got fainted...

DR.sm1:Mr. Wallia ur wife is in critical condition,we hv to do the operation,we cant take any risks,normal delivery is impossible..so...

MR.WALLIA: sweating,nervous,wht r u saying,whts wrong ...will my child n my AMRIT will be ok?

DR.:If i do the operation everything will be fine....

BABE:plz dont delay do the operation...

MR.WALLIA:But babe i dont hv tht money in my hand ,dr. told me it will be normal...n..i..hvnt take the loan...DR. bill...hospital bill..

BABE: u r thinking about how u will arange money think about AMRIT..N..child..

MR.WALLIA:DR.do the operation...i..will manage the money...

MR.WALLIA went to office brk his fund..n..bring...half the money....

DR. went inside operation theator do the operation succesfully...but....among the twin 1 was too weak.....he got two daughters....the weak ,she may need to stay in incubator,WALLIA didnt know wht to do......

DR.:MR. wallia u hv deposit money in the acount...

MR.WALLIA: ya half...

DR.:hf would do nothing....now 1 of ur child is weak ...n..in...incubator...ok i will think of smthing...now go ...n...see...ur...child...n....wife....i wil talk to u later...

MR. WALLIA:[B4 ENTERING THE CABIN SAID TO BABE] let not AMRIT no anything now.....

thy entered room

AMRIT is not in conscous....nurse came in ..n...lay...the strong baby inside....babe n MR. WALLIA took her n thy were so happy to see her...thn nurse came inside n told MR.WALLIA tht DR. wants to see him...

entering dr.s cabin...

DR.:well ur weak child is not out of danger....come with me....

DR. took MR.WALLIA to a room where two others baby were there too...her lungs is not yet developed.....tht much..she need...xtra protection....thn nurse came by runing saying DR., MRS.WALLIA is in critical stage she is floating in blood......DR. n.....MR.WALLIA.. went hurrily...

DR.:nurse prepare for operation.....we need blood......hurry..

NURSE:DR. she is O positive ...but hospital is out of stock....cause there is a major train accident happened..........lots of victim r out there we cant afford blood for thm....

DR.:mr. wallia ANY 1 in ur family hv O +ve..group..

MR.WALLIA :no dr.the 1 my freind had already given blood for operation...now...no 1 plz do smthing save her plz...

DR.: i hv anther patient whose husband hv O +ve blood.....come...

stranger saved MRS.WALLIAS life.....but tragedy happened he lost his only daughter after birth....he was crying madly....DR. said anything serious could happen....if his wife know this.....

MR.WALLIA hearing this.....became sad...n....go near him...

stranger:MR.WALLIA...plz....tell me wht can i do...dr. told me she need now a child as her own or...i will lost her too....where i will get a child....crying

MR.WALLIA .......was in silent trying to make stranger calm.....suddenly ...

strangetr:u hv two daughter i hv heard 1 is too ill too servive...give her to me i will do her care i hv no money problem.....i will cure her..plz.....

MR. WALLIA angrily saying wht r u saying its not possible....

DR: mr.wallia.. ur daughter is critical she need a liitle operation .....or u will lost her....

mr. wallia dont know wht to do....here is his sick daughter serviving...n...tht stranger who hv saved his wifes life now in trouble .....he need a child.....my chid?....no its not possible...but how will i arrange the money ..DR. hv done enough he hv half my bills...n...now....wht can i do....

DR.:wht r u doing theres no time to think she is in a critical condition...hurry.....

MR.WALLIA:DO the operation ...mr.....take my weak child....save her....

DR. hv done the operation....operation is ok...baby is out of danger....but....she would..need...xtra...care in hospital for another month......

MR.WALLIA Hvnt said anything to AMRIT...BABE knows she also had nothing to say.....THY gave her a sad bye.n...stranger promised th he will take proper care...of her...n...if he wants to see her thy could at anytime...AMRIT knows she had only 1 daughter...

The stranger wife took her knowing as her own child...

the child WALLIA family hv is JASSI..N tht other family got is...RHEA....

...so u hv liked it or not?? Do comment....n u can poceed too....

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ALICE thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
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IF u like it there will be a 2nd part/......n....another.....way of 1st part........
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Posted: 20 years ago
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oh wow alice....thats really nice..we have lots of talented writers here at IF......

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