moving on - arnav.khushi [One Shot]

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Licyabhingya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

loved the way u brought out the emotions... plz give an insight into the past as well to justify the sad separation...

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Sanchari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Edited !!

And you have to continue this cause I very well am getting the hints why she did that, so yeah?

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Maddy1270
a very poignant os; very well written! if arnav is the one who was unfaithful (at least that's the idea I got), why did her daughter feel that khushi had betrayed him in some way? [ok, just read the clarification given above, so now I know!]

Thank you so much! :D

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Originally posted by: yashi_arnav
Loved it. Emotions are portrayed very well...

Thank you so much! It means a lot :)

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Originally posted by: KaaminiJha
awesome content!
continue!
and Please PM me your future works.

Hey, thank you so much! And will surely PM you for future work :)

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Originally posted by: .BlueButterfly.
So sad.. beautiful OS

Thank you so much!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Licyabhingya
loved the way u brought out the emotions... plz give an insight into the past as well to justify the sad separation...

Thank you so much! Clarifications are given on page 2. Do check :)

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Originally posted by: arhilover55
very sad..beautifully written

Thank you so much!!

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Originally posted by: -Murphy369-
Edited !!

And you have to continue this cause I very well am getting the hints why she did that, so yeah?

Thank you and apologises but there will no continuation. If you want know an insight of the story, do check page 2 :)

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Originally posted by: serialmaniac
Did khushi die???

Well. it's for you to decide. I didn't want to give away the ending with literal words; hence left it for the readers to pick out the hints :P

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Originally posted by: -Murphy369-
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Oh! You have to continue this Zoha!! Pretty please with a cherry on the top. This was so good, and the words were so perfect !!

Excellent piece
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Thank you so much!! And like I said earlier, unfortunately, I won't be continuing this One Shot. I don't have an exact plan of the story so I don't want ruin the essence of the story by writing an abrupt ending :) I hope you understand. But if you want, I can write an One Shot from Arnav's Point Of View :) Do let me know if you would like that!

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Sexy Sobti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Loved it and do continue Zoah

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I-love-dmg

@I-love-dmg

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Wow... A really good OS. It's a different type of OS from you. Whilst I liked the way you have written it because I can totally feel the mood of the OS it just made me feel sad. This goes to show that your a fabulous writer who through her writing was able to make her reader emote :-) I read some comments on this OS & I don't believe you were being disrespectful towards Khushis character. Every writer brings there take to a story & with this OS I was able to see before you clarified the story what you meant. I liked the different take to your OS. Well done sweety. Can't wait for more OS. Love loads xxx