ArHi SS: Forbidden Territory Thd 2 EPILOGUE Pg 110

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Posted: 13 years ago

#491

Originally posted by: cymateli
SO HERE I GO THEN
"RES FOR THE COMMENT" 🥳

Cyma... You are the end of my Patience...😲 Even I don't make people wait so much for the update that you make me wait for your comment...😆
Starting with ur first paragraph.. again no khushi's POV 😔 chalo koi nai I still love it 🤗 Awww... Thanx...😳

I am absolutely in love with the title of the chapter ❤️ I had the song on my mind for three days after reading the title 😛
Yeah I love the song too and was somehow perfect for Arnav's current state...😛

well i read the update soo many times.. It was really a very fun update 😃

Thanx...🤗

hmm so now i start with the actual update:

Poor Arnav.. he is soo depressed and guilty 😔 ughh Forbidden Territory.. no use of thinking abt it now Arnav.. u have already crossed it 🤢 dont feel soo low babua.. everything will be sorted out and khushi wont go anywhere away from u.. shradds wont let tht happen 😉 haina shradds?? 😉 😆 He dint marry caus he couldnt find tht twinkle in anyone's eyes.. aww ☺️ Arnav is really a sweatheart ❤️
Hmm you can always apologise Arnav.. atleast to khushi u can

Oh!!!! You trust me too much don't you...

Now tht The Great Arnav Singh Raizada is ready to apologise.. khushi is being a difficult girl😔 but but if her relation with abhi is serious then I can understand.. any girl would try to avoid getting in unwanted situations.. but but I am still biased and I want khushi to give a chance o Arnav 😳

Haan Haan Jahan baat ASR ki hoti hai to ladkiyan biased to ho hi jaati hain... Bechara Abhi...😭 You don't even know him...

Hahaha jealousy always becomes beneficial for our Arhi 😛 Abhi should be glad he is not in front of Arnav warna tou baap re baap 🤣🤣

Haan bechara Abhi bina wajah pit jaata iss liye maine usse UK mein hi rakha hai...😉

hmm soo Anjali knws there is some problem..

So Arnav cant stop thinking about khushi haan?? well ofcourse he can not 😉 hmm so he is trying to figure out what is going on in khushi's mind abt this... but then he thinks hell with it.. I am ASR and ofcourse I wont let things go soo easily.. I will fight for my love.. yes ofcourse i will.. GO ARNAV 👍🏼

Yeah Go ARNAV... But...

loved this dialogue:
"I'm crazy about you Khushi and I'll be damned if I let you go just like that. I'm gonna fight sweetheart, even with you if it comes down to it."

Thanx...😳

Hmm so u finally found her.. no escaping khushi now.. haha loved him flirting with her..
"Mmm... You always take care of my preferences, don't you?" He said inhaling her scent. "You know me so well." He slipped his hands around her waist, hugging her from behind.

loved the conversation ahead aswell ❤️ Arnav very very naughty 🤣 hmm khushi he wont let u go easily now.. join anjali for lunch and he just knws what to do.. he will join both of you.. he is getting his plate and not only will have lunch with u guys but he will make sure he sits just next too you and as close as possible 😉 🤣 aur karo avoid 😆

Woh to full on shuru ho gaya... Bechari Khushi...😆 Avoid kare bhi to kaise...

hmm Anjali ofcourse Khushi should join Arnav for the party.. brilliant way to help Anrav.. Anjali this is for you 🤗
hmm so Arnav doesnt want to let of the chance and works from home.. u knw khushi very well.. she wont leave any chance to avoid you 😛
khushi in Red and tht too a sarree.. bas now u are dead meat khushi.. how can Arnav resist u now?? no ways 😈
hmm so u stamped on his foot and tht too with heels 😔 and u think this will stop him.. again no ways.. hmm so u have confessed openly tht u dont give a damn about her engagement great great 👍🏼

Ya red makes him even more deewana... more fun to come...😳

Anjali wrong timing 😲 u saw it all❓ 😲 chalo Arnav the party bahana goes.. khushi no more joining you 😭 and here enters shyam.. he's positive tou phir all's well 😃

Ya Anjali got the shock of her life...😲 Poor pregnant Lady...😒

PS: I am sure khushi has feelings for him.. she just wasnt sure if Arnav would love her and so she dint want to disappoint shyam and anjali and agreed to marry abhi 😭

No comments... No ways I'm not saying anything...😳

Brilliant update!! 👏
Thank You...🤗

AND U ARE ENDING IT!!

Awww... so cute but don't cry baby... muah...

But u informed pehle se it will be a short one!! It is indeed one of the best SS i have read..please do give an epilogue 😊 well only If u think its needed😊.. love ya SHRADDS 🤗❤️🤗

Thanks a lot dear... Epilogue will be only on public demand... So haven't decided yet... So you have given the first request, let's see how many more I get...😆

I AM FINALLY DONE!! 😆

Thanks for finally commenting... Love ya loads Cyma...❤️

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--aPMwithLove--

@--aPMwithLove--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#492

Originally posted by: Arshiluver01
Awesome! loved the flirty arnav. so naughty😳. I hope shyam clears out things soon. And did you say the next part is the last part? NOOO but please make it long. Cant wait for the next part.

Thanx... Shyam clears out thing??? You expecting from shyam??? 😲

Yeah last and okay I will make it long...😛

Thanx for commenting...

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cymateli

@cymateli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#493

Hmm shradds now u are scaring me 🤢 will arhi separate❓ u dont need to answer tht ofcourse caus i knw i will get the answer in the next one and u will for sure not kill the suspense but but 🥺 fingers crossed

PS: All ur jootas are welcome my way I seriously give u the permission to beat me up.. have to urgently do something with my laziness.. I dint want to mess up with the comment so wasnt posting it and today I am in such a good mood.. u knw the reason.. I read MPC and FT all over again so yea I could happily write the comment 😃

love ya more

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--aPMwithLove--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#494

Originally posted by: fatima2603
Anjali saw??! Uh-oh!

And arnav...what are you thinking?? Woo her...not force your feelings upon her!

And next part is the last part?? Nooo theres still so much left that is to happen!!

Yeah... Uh-oh...

Well spotted... he isnt wooing he is forcing... I think he should change strategy...

There is so much left to happen I agree and it will all happen in the last chap...😉😆

Thank you

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--aPMwithLove--

@--aPMwithLove--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#495

Originally posted by: cymateli
Hmm shradds now u are scaring me 🤢 will arhi separate❓ u dont need to answer tht ofcourse caus i knw i will get the answer in the next one and u will for sure not kill the suspense but but 🥺 fingers crossed
PS: All ur jootas are welcome my way I seriously give u the permission to beat me up.. have to urgently do something with my laziness.. I dint want to mess up with the comment so wasnt posting it and today I am in such a good mood.. u knw the reason.. I read MPC and FT all over again so yea I could happily write the comment 😃
love ya more

Lol you know I won't beat you dear... But you seriously have to do something about the Laziness... but you are not well so you are excused...🤗 Glad I could lift up ur mood...😃

And of course I'm not killing the suspense... You know so many people keep guessing so many things, I changed the climax three times to make it unpredictable... *Whew* Hope you all like what I write...😳

Love ya...

P.S. finally my PM account is no longer a newbie... Hopefully I wont have issues with PMs now...

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cymateli

@cymateli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#496

Originally posted by: --aPMwithLove--

Lol you know I won't beat you dear... But you seriously have to do something about the Laziness... but you are not well so you are excused...🤗 Glad I could lift up ur mood...😃

And of course I'm not killing the suspense... You know so many people keep guessing so many things, I changed the climax three times to make it unpredictable... *Whew* Hope you all like what I write...😳

Love ya...

P.S. finally my PM account is no longer a newbie... Hopefully I wont have issues with PMs now...

Aww.. thx 😃 umm the laziness will be very soon go away.. *shoo shoo laziness* parhai full on and IF side by side😉 😆 and well i always have a big smile after every updates of urs 😃

OMG changed it three times?? well we always love what u write.. atleast i always love it.. just chill..

i just scraped you abt the pm account and i saw ur reply here.. haha wat a coincidence!! 😃

Amna's idea abt replying to comments with this account is very clever 😛

InshaAllah u wont have any problems now 😊

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sam88

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Posted: 13 years ago

#497

2day is thurday 😊

waiting for update

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shraddska

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Posted: 13 years ago

#498

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cymateli

@cymateli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#499

RESERVED!!

And I am unressing 😳

Chapter Eight: Mujhse Shaadi Karogi???

The title couldn't have been any better.. u knw before i start reading the chap u make me fall in love with it.. the title's of all the chapters are sooo catchy 😃

And it is the last part!!

I knw I knw you had informed us tht it will be a short SS and also told us tht this will be the last part and indeed it is a brilliant as the last part but but i love this story and Its sad tht its ending 😭 but again its better u ended it on a good note rather than dragging it 😃 My sister is a genius 😉 I love ya

okay chalo chalo lets get to the awesome chapter:

Grr.. Arnav there was no point of attending the party if khushi wouldnt be accompanying u 😛 u knw u have to claim the forbidden territory as ur own like legally i mean 😉

And yes Arnav surely u are saved from Anjali one reason being she is pregnant and the other ur dear jiju 😉 😆

Well Di can be dealt with later.. ughh the forbidden territory.. your princess Diana.. I mean khushi is being difficult na?? 😭 But u knw it right on her part still still I am with you as always 😳.. Go Arnav.. give it one more try 😃

Hmm so while ur Di and jijaji are coochie-cooing U also go and TRY to "coochie-coo" with ur lady love 😆😉

Damn she is still in the red saree.. too hard to control right Arnav? 😉

My my Arnav.. I dont knw abt how khushi has soo much self-control but u drive me alll crazy

Being too naughty Arnie boy 😉

She was stirring the curry when he went and stood behind her, leaning closer to the crook of her neck, "Mmm... Smells good... Makes me hungry." He said huskily.

He saw her nostrils flare in frustration but she didn't say anything.

"Looks like you are still mad at me baby..." He said caressing her bare waist with both hands.

Ouch.. Khushi has lost her cool 😲 Again I dont blame her.. any girl would react like tht.. u knw u havent confessed to her properly and OMG did u just say tht Arnav:

I can't stay away from you. I want you."

Ab tou u are for sure gone.. did u really have to say it this way?? really Arnav?? Poor khushi

Hmm now u knw how khushi took ur words.. Arnav u really need to learn to think before u speak 😔 (But but we love u the way u are 🤗)

Chalo kar diya na poora kaam apne Anrav.. ab dekho pehle tou begair soche bol diya or phir baat ko aur kharab kar dia 🤢 Ab soche how to rectify ur mistake?? 😔

Hmm dinner together 😃 but but its the discussion of Abhi and khushi's marriage 😡 yea Abhi may be good but its only Arnav for Khushi and Khushi for Arnav 😃

Chalo this discussion finally put some brain cells of Arnav to action and there he goes.. yes yes thts what she wants.. A confession and a proposal..

Lol running around finding ur lady love haan?? 😉

And there u go.. too eager haan?? 😉

but finally u confessed.. shukar no more puzzles 😛

Oh I love it when u said it all out Arnav:

"Please, please, please marry me. I Love You. I really do and I think from the first time I saw you five years ago. I didn't realise it then or I would have never let you go. But I do realise it now but please don't punish me for that. Don't leave me. I know you don't love Abhi, you can't marry him. Please Khushi please, don't do this."

Yes yes Khushi Arnav loves you and you only 😆

"ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA!" She came forward and grabbed his collar with both hands.

"Khushi, wha..." His question was swallowed by Khushi's mouth over his and she thrust her tongue into his shocked open mouth kissing him like the world was about to end.

Arnav was too stunned to kiss back so she pulled back after a moment and frowned at him, "Kiss me back now, will you? I Love You too."

I knew it.. I knew it.. Khushi loves him 🤗🤗 dekha shradds I told you I trust you completely 🤗❤️🤗

Bas Ab Arnav can not control anymore.. ab tou haseena bhi maan gayi 😉 😆

But u need to wait Arnav.. wait for a looonngg time.. abhi dekho aagey aagey hota hai kya 😆

Indeed khushi will marry you but Abhi tou Anjali ka drama rehta hai 😡

And there u go.. she goes into labour.. iske aagey tou dont even ask...

Arrey Arnav ur Di will be fine.. chillax 😃 abhi tou she will give u tension 😒

Lol at this part 🤣🤣🤣

"I am really worried Saale Sahab. I had no idea about your sister's vocabulary. Where did she learn all those swear words? Some of them were new to even me."

Arnav laughed. "She went to an all girls convent, I had no idea about her vocabulary either."

Shyam shuddered. "Thank God it's over. I swear I'm not planning for a second child."

The three of them burst out laughing. "At least you didn't have to handle her mood swings Jijaji. Ask Khushi." Arnav said.

"I can imagine. You don't have to tell." Shyam shuddered again.

hmm so Shyam now be a good brother and get ur gudiya married to ur saale sahab soon 😆 and there goes Arnav all set to make khushi angry again 🤢 hmm u have no idea how thankful u will have to be to Abhi once u knw the whole thing ⭐️

ThankGod Shyam has brains here.. well I mean he used it in a positive way here.. warna tou mein Anjali ka murder kar deti.. I knw khushi is forbidden territory but yaar pura scene tou find karo Anji

Shukar Shyam made them get back home warna tou Anjali would have started again for sure 😡

Aww the lovey dovey part ❤️.. but but the last scene of the last part starts 😭

Hmm Arnav u truely are a sweetheart.. (I always say this dont I 😆.. well u are so cant do much I need to keep saying it)

Chalo now the Arnie boy will knw how the cute and innocent 17 year old girl fell in love with him and how much hurt she was thinking u had forgotten her 🥺 and hence decided to become someone else's but but destiny played its cards and Abhi played the Angel in their lives 🤗

hmm the past revealed and Abhi is sooo good .. thankyou thankyou thankyou Abhi 😃

lolz yes Arnav u really need to become a good listener 😉

Hmm soo the guttery part starts 😉

Arnav was lazily leaning back on the headboard and smirking with her pallu in his hand. "Well Miss Khushi Kumari Gupta, where do you think you are going? After torturing me with this Saree for the whole day, you think I'm going to let you go? By the way I love you but that doesn't mean there is no lust. And do you know what happens when there is...

Love + Lust + Red Saree + Arnav Singh Raizada?????"

She raised her eyebrows smirking back...

"Well you are about to know..." He tugged her pallu harder and she fell into his open arms.

"Ouch... We are not married yet. Remember I am still Forbidden Territory." She smirked at him.

In one swift movement, he was on top of her. "As if I cared, there is going to be illegal intrusion Miss Gupta."

He slowly started leaning on her but she wasn't in a mood to play, she wrapped her arms around him and pulled him on herself. "Make it fast Mr. Raizada, we have to be at the hospital early morning. We don't have all night."

Truely they are made for eachother.. both are sooo naughty 😉Oh we love Arhi 🤗❤️🤗

The chapter was dhamakedaar truly!!

I love you SHRADDS sooo much!!

Edited by cymateli - 13 years ago

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Amna.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#500

res 😳

--Eddited--

Woah! Cyma hasn't ediited yet and this means i am not late at all 😆

I am on time 😉

😊

Ahhh.. soo phinally you gave us the last part of FT 🥺
This was the most fav one among all SS's i read and the ones i've read!

Apne tareeke se bolun tw ik dam bindaas tha jii.. Part 1 to 8 sb mast raha

Arnav , Khushi, Shayam, Anjali and Abhilash. Sb ka character ik dam set raha sb apni jagah pe barabar k thay 😊

loved that chap jisme yu revealed thier pehli mulaqaat 😛 that fall .. Haeeeyyy
And woh ankh larane wali game... Ik dam mast tha ji 😊

Ummm... Last chap bhi kuch wesa hi mast tha 😉
Par shayad us'se ziada bindaas tha 😊

Anjali ne tou dimagh ghuma dia tha mera qasam se 😛 par shayam babua ne sab handle kar liya 😉 shukkaaarrr...
Thankyu God for blessing him wd some dimagh here.. 😃
Wese tw serial me b bht dimagh paya h is ne :/
Camera's fitted in RM!! Errr...!! 😡
*Control Amna Control!*

Abhilash haaeeeyyy tou kinna changa he ga wa mundeya 😃

Khushi ki khushi ka khayal rakha aur hamre arnav babua k bare me b socha 🤗

Khushi gai tw kya? 🤣 main hoon yahan mjhse setting kr lo 🤣 i am single and ready to b mingle.. Han han under 18 hoon par dnt worry next year May me 18 ki hojaun gi 🤣

Hey shradds 😃 meri Abhi se setting kr wa do na Addii 😆

Abb ye na bolna k i am soo choti 😛
MPC me khushi bhi 18 ki hi hai aur arnav 11 year older h 😛
Bari behen hone ka haq adaa karo Addi aur Abhi se setting krwa do 😆

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i loved how arhi got together in the end happy ending.. Jo k honi hi thi 😆

Sab bht bindas tha bas mujhay Abhilash k liye bad feel huwa 😔

Poor Abhi... 😛

Abb meri baat pe ghour krna thore Addii aur mer and abhi k baare me kuch sochna 🤣 🤣

I am sleeeppyyy & i'll leave and as said i've edited my comment 😊
I hope no more ' 😡 '

Ii Love You Shradds!! 🤗 🤗

Edited by Shona.Angel - 13 years ago