swaron os ~~Return to Paradise~~

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Tania

@--Tanzz--

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

hey,it was really awesum!!!luvd d way u described sharon's feelings..ur descriptive senses r damn gud.it was a gr8 relief dat it ended happily..tnx 4 ur pm...continue shaping masterpieces!!!..huggs;)

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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Thanks a lot guys for liking a random story...
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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: AmritaluvSwaRon
Beautifully written...loved it n happy that ur continuing. Thnx for PM update soon 😊

i am happy that you liked it...thanks😊

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Wow..just wow, i loved this OS to the core.

Sharon's pain after loosing the baby so beautifully shown.

The ending, i was pleasantly surprised, there is always hope and i am glad they are going to renew the promises they made to each other.

And Happy friendship day to you too :)

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Sreya Roy

@sreya19roy

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Awesomeee OS Himani...simply outstanding..

The way u have described sharon's pain was unbelievable...amazing job once again Himani...keep it up 👍🏼

PS. Update ur FF fast...I'm waiting for it 😊

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