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Posted: 12 years ago


Part - 5
Manu n Geet still fighting like kids...
Gunj : bas karo tum dono abb'jab dekho fight karte rehte ho..chalo abb bahut masti mazak ho gai..Classes ka tym ho gaya hai
All goes to the classes'.Gunjan n Virat r studious..Whereas manu n sam having fun..Here Geet getting bored n was searching her mob to play for time pas..While searching it..She remember tat she left it in the car..
She asked manu to give her mob n manu asked wat happen to which geet replied her wid vil tell u later'manu hand over her mob.n again started to have fun wid sam'

Geet punched her number in manu mob n called' In Maan's car..a ringtone goin on "Tum Jo Aaye Zindagi Mein Baat Ban gai...Ishq Mazhab Ishq Meri Zaat Ban Gayi"

Maan Heard it was surprised from were the song came but ignored and got busy in talking with his GF'

He was so indulged in talking tat he didn't not notice the children who pasing the way'suddenly he saw n made an break 'by wich sum heavy thing fell on geet mob'n accepted the call'maan didn't hurt himself'

Maan was unaware of the geet call..n started to talk wid Alisha..

Ailsha: Tumne mera call kyu cut kar dia..?

Maan: was busy at that moment'

Alisha:ohhh so busy tat u forgot me to call from morning'

Maan: nothing lyk tat'okie'vil not do next tym'

Alisha: ok'Love u Maan'

(Here Geet continuously saying Hello ello to get response from other side..but stopped as soon as she heard the next line from Maan's Mouth)

Maan: Love u too Alisha

{Hearing this geet fumed wid anger (or I would say jealously *wink*) and cut the call}

Alisha and Maan Bid bye to each other n cut the call'Geet gave Manu mob n left the class'

Manu n Sam had an idea of her mood...n followed her...N reached a place where lots of flower are there...Its a place where u can find geet..If u cant find her any where else'Its Geet Fav place'She loves nature...So whenever she is upset angry or if her mood is off...he come to this place and spend some time here..Its geet fav place Garden'It's the best place in the college from geet's point of view'

Geet sat their angrily thinking the line which she heard from Maan's line'Sam n Manu came and sat beside her'

Manu: kya hue..?

Geet: Kuch nahi hue...

Manu: Don't lie'speak up the truth'she ordered her'

Geet said her about the call'n made an angry yet sum kind of jealous face'

Manu n Sam burst into laugh...n called the duo'who were indulged in studies'when gunjan n virat heard it'even they started laughing'

Geet: tum logo ko hassi aa rahi'go I vil not talk to u al'first of all I wanna kill that Alisha'Jab dekho Maan baby man baby karti rehti hai chipkali(lizard) kahi ki(geet use to call her chipkali only)

Virat: Lagta kahi se jalne ki smell aa rahi hai..kyu gunjan
gunjan:haan viru kahi se aa rahi...
Manu n sam: I LOVE U TOO ALISHA...:P:P

Geet: bas karo'tum sab..
Sam sachi mera phone hottie ke car main hi reh gaya hai.

Sam: Dekha maine toh pehle hi kaha tha..but meri yaha kon suntan hai'abb when he comes here to pick you'take it..

Geet: Okay'Manu give ur mob will try one more time'atleast dist tym hottie picks and TALKS WID ME'

Geet punched Maan number..maan picks up n says haan Manu bol..

Geet: hottie..i mean Maan jii its me geet

Maan smiled when he heard geet saying hottie..

Maan :haan geet jii boliye..

Geet : actually main apna mob apke car main bhul gayi thi so..thought to say u once abt it..

Maan: ohhk'when I cum to pick u 'u take it..

Geet:Okie bubye'Meet u soon

Maan..yeah'byee

Both cuts the all n smiles..

Virat: Ohhoo Maan jii'

Sam :Geet aaj toh pakka Long Drive wid Mere JIJU'Tab toh phone ki bhi zarurat nahi hai..Maan jo saath hoge'

Geet: U Both vil never change'

Geet started to blush very hard by the thought of maan alone n Long Drive'

Sum one is blushing here'said a loud by Manu

Geet: Chalo chalo bahut gaya tum logo ka...
Virat :HAAN Bahut ho gayaaa koi tomato jaise lal ho gaya hai*wink*

Geet: Chalo..Canteen chalte hai..muje bhook lagi hai..

All go to canteen'had fun n filled their stomach'

Manu gets call..and says jii bhejti hu and hum bhi aate hai..


Precap: May be Long Drive or some Maaneet moments..???? *wink* *wink*


Thank you all for ur likes n comments...realyy very happiieee me...
hopee i get more response from before update...
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Edited by vanshi_maaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb dear... bahut interesting hai...
but hate this alisha n MAAN saying that ILU to her... 😡
GEET know abt this alisha??? i wonder... when???
anyways waiting so eagerly... for MAANEET moments... 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb! superb! 😃
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part...
so geet knows abt alisha... dont worry princess maan tera hai n tera he rahega...
oye hotti bol diya maan ko phone par... wooo
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gud one..
loved geet's cute gussa..
but ds alisha s hell irritating..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
plz alisha ka pata jaldi se cut kar dena
geet calling maan hottie nd he like i 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome yaar love to see geet being J
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maan jiii Geet jiii 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 so funny to hear thisnice update👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous update love it awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesme update
lovd it dear
geet was jealous
manu n frnds teasing her..
Cnt sn
thanx for pm

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