*Mayur SS/OS Gallary#4* NTL on pg 151 - Page 52

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update
bt whos dat person calling nupur????

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice meeting...wondering who is dis mystery man...😕 waiting 4 ur nxt update...continue soon...thnx 4 d pm😃
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part 1
congo 4 ur new ss
nic start
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part 2
awesome bt y nupur did all this???
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part 3
omg mayu find nupur..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Writer Note

Thank u sooo much everyone for such an overwhelming response and beautiful comments🤗means a lot to me...
Please keep reading it😳
Maria...remember me in your prayer
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Posted: 13 years ago

Dil Ibadaat

"Mayank its hurt"She winced as his fingers dug into her arms. "What about that hurt you've given me?" His lips were pale with suppressed rage, and a vein pulsed at his temple as he spoke these words,she looked at him through her lashes and tears poured out behind the lids.

"Tell me why did you betray me" Mayank burst out, Nupur interrupted him,unknowingly sowing seeds of rage. "I've---nothing to say"

"What did you say you've nothing to say?you played with my emotions,my life,my love and now you're saying you've nothing to say"anger shot up in his eyes and he clenched his teeth shaking her shoulders and she groaned in pain,holding onto to her tears with great effort she clamped her teeth together and said nothing but lifted her gaze at him to find love in his those dark-eyes and couldn't see anything except hurt,anger , "don't look at me like this Nupur because the thing you are trying to find has been lost somewhere at the day you left me"he deliberately dipped his fingers in her flesh to give her pain but the hurt she was seeing in his eyes was more that she was bearing. "i am your offender,give me punish but not to yourself,move on in your life Mayank and forget me ,I promise I'll never come in your way."

He'd expected an argument from her but wasn't expecting her to accept defeat so soon and it didn't give him a bit comfort he wanted her to plead for kindness, plead for forgiveness and here she was ready to get punished.

"Do you really want punish"he leaned forward roughly caressing her cheek with her thumb and Nupur saw Mayank stiffen, angry look at her she knew how much he loved her how could she expect to him to forget her, her words had hurt him. He leaned over her lips rubbing them with his fingertips and she breathed deeply closing her eyes she was ready to be getting punished, clutching her body to his, He placed his lips over her for long punishing kiss and his fingers dug into her skin,forcing his hands to pull her closer,he struggled seemed to hurt her and the kiss more painful, Nupur saw something hurt and terrifying rage in his eyes as his hands tightened on her arms. "Mayank please.."she gasped tearfully against his lips, She tried to move back, a scream rising in her throat, but his lips crushed hers,biting and nibbling her lips with his kiss and her scream faded in her throat,His arms tightened around her and he deepened the kiss,his lips moving on hers with hungry ardor,rage, insistently shaping and fitting her lips to his own.she groaned in pain as he nibbled her lower lip and a cramp hit her she closed her eyes in pain and her hands moved towards her abdomen, "Maya...'"her words faded away against his lips and she tried to tear away her mouth free, and pushed him away with all her strength. "Mayank" she winced in pain as another cramp hit her."Nupur"he quickly moved away. She whimpered and wrapped her arms around her abdomen.. " Nupur what happened??"he cupped her face in his hands and concern had taken the place of anger, "Mayank please'take me to hospital" She tried to blink away her tears as she gazed up at him,she gasped in pain.."okay"He picked her up in his arms and opened the door,everyone was seeing them but he didn't care about anyone at that moment he just knew he loved Nupur and he couldn't see her in pain. He ran to the other side of the car, opened the door, and reached through to shift her into the passenger seat,after shifting her carefully on the seat,As he pulled back towards hospital he gave a glance to her,her eyes were closed and her face got pale due to pain,he forwarded his hand and kept it on her hands, "relax'we are on the way" she opened her eyes at his soft voice and Mayank quickly moved away his face. She knew he still loved her madly but didn't want to show.As they reached at hospital Mayank opened the door and again picked up in his arms and rushed inside the hospital.He didn't know what had happened to her suddenly,she was absolutely fine when he'd entered in her cabin.

Finally after half an hour Doctor came out and he walked towards her.

"How is Nupur now?"he completed the words hastily , "she is fine now, Thank God you took her hospital on time,otherwise we couldn't do anything"

"What do you want to say??"Mayank gave her confuse look.

"As you know Mr.Mayank your wife is pregnant and you both could lose your child so be careful in future,she is very weak,take care of her,we've given her injection she is sleeping now,I have just checked the scan report,the baby is absolutely fine"she smiled giving him piece of news and went back towards the other room and Mayank world had been frozen at that moment.he couldn't believe what he just heared, Nupur was pregnant,his lips curled into a grin and tears shimmered in his eye"She is pregnant,she is carrying my baby"he murmured under his breath and tears made their way towards his cheeks, "I am father of an unborn baby"

"Oh God Thanks for saving my baby"he mumbled holding his face in his hands and let his tears flow,tears of happiness,tears of getting the most precious gift from God.

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"we are going back to Mumbai"Mayank announced as they came out of the hospital, "get in the car,i've cancelled all the meetings for now..."

"but i can't go back with you"she knew she'd hit the wrong spot but she couldn't take the risk of his life and Mayank swung back to look at her, "you've to go with me Nupur,you 're carrying my baby and i can't take the risk of your health.i've been losing everything and now i don't want to lose my baby"He regarded her with rage saying last words and her heart clench in her fist..how could she forget now he doesn't love her,he just care about his child.a lump formed in her throat and a flood of new fresh tears slipped down on her cheeks.

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here is next update,i hope you'll like it😳

Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
THat was superb update dear...it was exceptionally written.i so loved the way Mayank showed his anger hurt through the kiss..
loved it
please do continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fantastic update Maria
Oh Than God Mayur baby is safe
i glad ayank is taking right decision,i hope everything get settled between them,continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update
please tell me who is that person threatining nupur
i will kill that person

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