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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome i had read all part in one go its too good but muje lagta hai ki agar maan is tarah se behave karega to geet jya kbhi bhi usse pyar kar payegi i hope sab kuch thik ho jaye
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Posted: 13 years ago
fabulous story dear:)

its really awesome:)

loved it:)

thanks for pm dear:)

plzz do pm me next updates also...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb dear, loved it. continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
I read all parts
Geet love dev ..thats why maan touchs make her disgust..
dadi is mein reason behind maaneet marriage...
why she scard for maan...
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
just now read all parts.nice story.continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
kahan ja rahe hai inke relation...love n hate ...both r dere...love frm maan's side n hate frm geet...she is his wife...can love him na...

awesome n lovely update...


loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n also fr d pm...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago

thanx for d pm dear

m a bit busy wid my new college

so will read it later

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update. feel sad for Geet. wating for update. but do not like them to be separate.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow it's an awesome ff... Loved it... Waiting...
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Maan stopped and turned to her... shocked...''i need some time to think , i'm sure we'll figure something out dadima'' and left from there...

Maan went straight to sam's flat...she was 'busy' with someone that time...when she saw that maan came(from door hole)she freaked out and the sent the other guy out by window.

She then pulled maan from door to her bedroom.

After a futile making out session She realised something wrong...after nagging maan for the hundreadth time he told her the problem...sam was shocked to hear her plan failing...she got mad with rage...''that old bitch...''

Maan glared her...she immidiately straightened herself saying ,''...no no...i was talking about that girl not dadima...''

''no time for cursing...have to make a plan...and it's gotta be fast...as well as effective...''maan said irritated.

He started sipping the whiskey...silently...lost

After a long pause...sam asked ,''Do u love me maan...?''

Maan said irritated, ''Stop this emotional constipation sam...I'm not in mood...and this not a joke''

Sam :'' If u do then marry her ...make dadima happy...''she put up a fake hurt face.

Maan:(sarcassm) marry that mute girl innocent as a kid...''

Sam : ''Dadima will be happy... Mammi ji ki atma ko shanti milegi...dadima wont force u for anything after that ...and that KID...'' she said the last part with hatred...

Maan looked at her curiously...sam said smriking...''u have to marry her...but that doesnt mean that u have to bear this marrage forever maan...come on...dadima ki baat maano...marry her...then aapni dil ki baat...meri baat maano...divorce her...as simple as that''

Maan looked at her getting her point...''not bad...'' They kissed...and...(mujhe gheen aa rahi hai)

Next morning.

Maan came to her room in the morning...''Mujhe aapki ye proposal manzoor hai ''

Dadima looked at her shocked,''w...w...what !!??? ''

''..My answer is yes dadima...i am ready to marry that girl...BUT i have one condition...''

'what is it beta?'dadima asked fearfully

''after this marriage u will not interfere in my life...u have done enough damage...i am agreeing just to make sure u never force me to do anything afterwards...I still can't bear the fact that u r blackmailing me to marry a disable...So, i want to make sure that u agree to this condition...if u deny then start thinking about ur suicide plan...''saying this he rushed from there...

Daadima still couldnt beleive the fact that maan agreed...he really said yes!!!...OMG...!!!

dadima sat on the bed...relived...and extremely happy... the hardest part is over...and there is still one tiny thing to do ,

Making geet agree to this proposal !!!!


She went to the backyard garden and started watering the plans with pipe...she was lost in her thoughts...

...mrs.kumar told that geet doesnt know about Dev's feeling...that means...this is my chance...i have to do something to make maan and geet closer...and i have to do it fast...before it's too late...

''...Thank god maan is super handsome...warna it would be very tough...any girl can fall flat on him...i really hope that geet falls for him too...i have to make my path clean...i have to make maan understand that geet is a good girl...but how can he change his descition overnight???...kahi maan kuch plan to nehi kar rahe ???..No ...No...i can not let this happen...i have to talk to him...''

Daadima went to maan's room...''I want to talk to u...about geet''

''shoot...''

''Maan...ye mazaak nehi hai jo aap humse aise baat...''

''mazaak to aapne banaya...mere life ka...khair...say quickly and leave.''

SD controlled his anger and said,''before marraige i want u two to spend time with each other...it will help u two to...''

''stop this nonsense...she is mute...how the hell we're gonna communicate...''

Daadima turned to leave...but she was stopped by maan''...ok...send her here...''

''...maan bete...wo...wo...''

'' Now what have u done...?''

''kuch nehi...just a request...plz maan'' she said with all her efforts to show herself as a helpless old woman...which worked.

''kya hain,,?'' He asked irritated.

''plz talk to her nicely maan...dont shout at her...plz...''

''talk...''maan said sarcasticly.

SD said happily...''OK...!!! Then i will bring her here then tum dono ki dhum dham se shadi...''

''...I dont want any media coverage...we'll just marry in a leagal way...thats it...end of this topic.''

''...but i wanted...'' SD said meakly

''Everything is happening according to ur bloody 'WANT' daadima...now go and send her in...''maan said in a cold tone...

''What do u mean by send her in...maan she is not with me...i am going there to bring her here...she is going to stay here for a week...usse dekho...baat karo...then make ur descision...''she said seriously.

Maan looked at her carefully...

Daadima sensed that he was paying attention...so she took a deep breath and sat beside him...

''I gave u the ultimetum just to make u agree to meet her...i am not that childish maan,...i care for u and ur future thats why i was pressurising u...geet is an innocent girl...and to me she is priceless...she doesn't even know that i've chosen her for u ...when i saw her for the first time i knew that whoever will marry her will be worlds most lucky and happy person...i'm ur daadi...i love u...and i really want u to be happy...thats why i want u to marry her...but if sameera means that much to u then i dont have anything to say...Ur my grandson...i thought ki mujhe tum per haq hai thats why i said this to u...baaki tumhare maarzi...thank u for ur time maan...''


Saying this she turned away and kept walking to the door...praying helplessly ''...plz plz plz maan mujhe roko...response damn it...''

''...Daadima...''maan said in a low tone...

Daadima stopped...she was jumping mentally...but she composed herself...putting up a sad face and turned to him...''haan bolo maan...''

''...I want to meet her...i respect u and only thats why i'm doing this...i'm gonna observe her for this week...if i like her then i will marry her but if i dont like her...then u cant force me to marry her...is that clear...?''Maan said calmly.

''ok...as u wish...''saying this she left from there and closed the door.

Maan signed in relif...so sam's plan is canceled...all i have to do is to meet her and reject her...thats it.

Meanwhile...SD came to her room and closed the door.

She called mrs. Kumaar and said,''i want those legal papers ready...do it with perfection...after i take geet home tell everyone that she went to delhi for an audition...it will take a week to come back...if dev and his family demand datails then show them those details with Geet's signeture...i'll be there in 3 hours to take take geet with me...''

She cut the call and called Ramesh...''Ramesh...gaari nikalo i'm going to the orphanage...''

Cutting the called she signed in relif...''...jo karna chahte ho karlo maan...jitni bhi attitude dikhana chahte ho dikhalo...cause i know...once u will see geet u will be totally latto over her...and for geet...mera pota bhi bachelor of the year hai...it will be very difficult for u to ignore his charm...''

In short...it will impossible for them to ingone each other.


In study


Maan called someone...'' I have a job for u...XYZ orphanage...Her name is Geet...i want all information about her...everything...and i mean every single details...in an hour...or else...''

''...ye...ye...yes s...s...sir...right a...a...away...''

Keeping the phone aside maan smirks,''Lets see what u've got there miss Geet...''




Precap:More about geet and Dev's relation..maan and geet's first meeting...

plz plz plz like and comment...


Edited by Temporary99 - 12 years ago

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