Annies Book DEVIL'S DESIRE

MARVELLOUS

But Annie can u stand some criticism on my part?

My irresistible kidnapper should have been made into a book also. It was a beautiful story.

Some mistakes which I found with the book was poor editing and bad choice of font. The whole book looks like some badly done Indian text book. I think u should have been a little more involved in the font and the printing.

The word conscience is spelt as conscious all throughout the book.

In the Preface column u have spelt Gurmeet's name wrongly and GHSP as Geet hsp. Yaar you don't make so much mistakes in the forum as u have made here. The continuing dialogues of one character have space between the line which breaks up the flow.

Even then for a new writer this was great. Keep up the good work. Write more books. We are sure to buy them.

THANK YOU VERY MUCH.