Posted:
Hello lovely people!!!! :D Many of you dont know me...and well i dont really blame you since i am the forums "sort of" silent reader...only post once every blue moon haha. But let me still introduce myself...im meghna, but everyone calls me megs (so you guys do too please! lool)
I only have one fanfic which is still running on the fanfic forum...but i had this story in mind which i just had to pen down, and decided to write it based on EHMMBH since i LOVE this show to bits!! so decided to post here...its the first time i am writing for you all so dunno if it will be good as i am not a great writer and definitely am not as good as the writers on this forum!! but i gave it a shot...so am hoping sooo much that you like it :)
just my small little intro for this story...it is called "Now i am complete"...mostly on Virman but there is some Virika in it (if you guys like this one then my next one will be in virika!! promiseee!! lol)...and there are other characters in it like dabbu etc...also there are some new ones ;) also it is based in London...the rest is a mystery (not gna spoil it for you ;) lol) but on a serious not, if i tell you more then i have told you the entire story haha...
okayyy going to shut up now and post since i am probably boring you all right now lool...so heres part one of "Now i am complete"...hope you all like it!!!! *fingers crossed*
PART 1 - Anything for my sweety
Maanvi: Haan di, i have told dabbu...and he is at the store right now...now stop worrying, everything will go well...after all its yours and jijus day...nothing can go wrong (she smiled)
Maanvi spoke to her Jeevika di over the phone as she was baking muffins...jeevika's and virens 10th wedding anniversary was coming up soon...she was planning this very big celebration...and already started to worry that things will not go to plan...
Jeevika: you are coming right...
Maanvi: of course di, do you really think i will miss it!! i have taken the day off as well so will be with you the wholeee day!!! Now don't you worry everything will be fine...
Jeevika: good! Thank you mannu...acha tell me, why aren't you at work?...tu theek toh hai na...
Maanvi: haan di! Mein bilkul theek hoon...just took a day off today...making muffins (she said smiling)
Jeevika: for your sweety??
Maanvi: ofcourse...abhi ata hoga na toh uske liye surprise hai
Jeevika: aww okay...i will leave you to it...bye mannu baad mein baat karte hai...
Maanvi: haan okay di...byeee...love you...
She put the phone down and smiled...
Typical di she thought...she loved her older sister sooo much...and knew her inside out...she has been planning this celebration for the past month and wanted everything to be perfect...and maanvi was sure to make it perfect...not only for her di...but also for her jiju...although jeevika had made the arrangements...maanvi added a lil surprise into it showing the past 10 years of their lives after marriage, also her sweety had arranged a small surprise for them too and she could not wait and see the expression on her di's and jiju's face...maanvi smiled at the thought...
-----------------------------------------------
Meanwhile a child around the age of 7 sat on a chair waiting for his mama at the bank...he sat there bored swinging his legs back and forth...a man came and sat down next to the little boy...they both slightly smiled to each other...and continued waiting...slowly the little boy started to copy every action the boy made...the man noticed and smiled...which the little boy smile mischievously...and continued copying the actions...the man looked at the little boy...
Man: hello...
Boy: sorry, mummy says im not allowed to speak to strangers...
The man looked at the little boy and smiled...his eyes seemed to remind him of someone he knew...
Boy: my mama is calling me, i have to go, bye uncle...
The little boy swiftly left...and the man smiled watching him leave...
Man: strange kid...first calls me a stranger and then uncle...
And then a woman came to him...
Woman: bhai let's go...we need to go the store to get things for dinner...
The man nodded and then left...
Boy: can we go now dabbu mama???
Dabbu: haan abhay beta...we can leave now...we are just going to drop by the store to pick up a few things for mummy okay??
Abhay: okay dubbu mama, let gooo (he said as he held dabbu's hand)
And they left for the store...
-----------------------------------------------
Dabbu stood at the isle looking at the wine selections
Dabbu: hmmm...okay, i got her favourite...now which other ones did they want...(he said to himself)
He picked up a few other bottles from the shelf...
Dabbu: champagne!!! (he said aloud)
And he walked to the selections of champagne...he selected the perfect champagne for the anniversary celebration...
Dabbu: let go home now abhay...
But abhay wasn't with him...dabbu started to worry...
Dabbu: abhay...uh oh...di is going to kill me!!...abhay!!!
He started to search for abhay...worried that something had happened to him...
Abhay walked down isle after isle looking for dabbu...
Abhay: dabbu mama...(he said)...where is he...
Abhay started to get upset that he couldn't find his dabbu mama...as he continued to look for dabbu he bumped into a broad man...abhay looked at him as the man smiled at him...it was the same man from the bank...he knelt down to the slightly scared boy...abhay looked into his light brown eyes...
Man: hey kiddo...are you okay?? (he asked concerned)
Abhay: i can't find my dabbu mama...
Man: mama?? Your uncle??
Abhay nodded...
And just then a woman called out for the man...
Woman: bhai...
Man: one minute...and then we will go find your dabbu mama...okay...
He caressed the little boys face to reassure him...abhay nodded and smiled...and went to his sister...
Just then abhay saw dabbu and quickly ran to him...
Abhay: mama...
Dabbu: ahh abhay...thank God your okay...you scared me beta...
Dabbu hugged abhay tightly as he carried him...
Dabbu: let go home now...mummy should be waiting for you...
Abhay: okay dabbu mama...
The man finished taking to his sister and turned around to not see the little boy next to him...he looked around worried...
Man: where did he go??
He looked around and saw the little boy being hugged...
Man: he must have found his mama...(he smiled looking at him)
Just then he saw the little boy look at him and smile...the boy waved him goodbye as he left with his uncle...the man smiled and waved
Man: strange kid...
He continued smiling as he looked at the child leave...he reminded him of someone he knew...
-----------------------------------------------
Maanvi started to arrange her freshly baked muffins on a plate...she hoped that they were made very well...after all her sweety deserved the best and she wanted to surprise him...as she heard the doorbell ring she jumped with joy knowing her sweety was finally home...she covered the plate and quickly went to open the door to greet her sweety with a huge smile...
Voice: hello mummy!!
Maanvi stood at the door to see her sweety with her brother dabbu...
Maanvi: hello sweety...
She took the lil boy in her arms...and brought him to the house...
Maanvi: dabbu?? Did abhay trouble you at all??
He said to dabbu as he entered the house and placed all the shopping bags in the kitchen...
Abhay: no mummy...i didn't trouble dabbu mama at all...i was a good boy...right mama...
Abhay hugged his mother as he said so...
Dabbu: right beta...manvi di, he was a very good boy...
He gave abhay a small peck on the cheek...
Maanvi: achha...thats my good boy...and because of that i have a surprise for you...
Abhay: what is it mummy?? (he asked excited)
Maanvi showed his a plate full of his favourite muffins...
Abhay: MUFFINS!!!! (he said with a huge smile on his face) thank you mummy!!!
Maanvi: anything for my sweety!!
He immediately hugged maanvi...and took a muffin in his hand...
Abhay: im going to go and tell daddy...is that okay??
Maanvis large smile had turned into a small one...she looked at her son slightly smiling and nodded...and then she watched her son leave to go to another room...
Dabbu looked at his sister...
Dabbu: you okay?? (he put his hand on her shoulder comforting her)
Maanvi: hmm...im fine (she smiled)
-----------------------------------------------
Next day Maanvi was in her office, she was swamped with paper work all...
Maanvi: shouldn't have taken that day off mannu...look at the consequence...
She took a deep sigh and went for the next file...just then her friend and colleague Nikita came in...
Nikita: you okay???
Maanvi: haan yaar...mein theek hoon...lekin itna sara kaam kaha se ageya...
Nikita slightly laughed...
Nikita: mein hoon na...not to worry...i will help you out...
They worked together to finish the work quickly...and just then their boss Steve came...
Nikita and maanvi: hey steve...
They said in unison as he entered the office...
Steve: hey girls...all good...
Maanvi: yes boss!!! All is well (she smiled)
Steve: maanvi, im surprised to see you here right now, don't you have to go and pick up your son from school today??
Maanvi: yh, but thats at 4 o' clock...(she said confused)
Steve: look at the time darling...(he said smiling)
Maanvi looked at the time and her mouth turned into an O shape as her eyes popped out in horror...it was 3.45pm...how did time fly by to quickly??...how could she forget that she had to leave at 3.30 at least to pick up abhay...
Maanvi: sugar!!...
She stroked her hair in frustration, she hadn't finished her work...and nobody was free to pick up abhay from school...what should she do now??...she looked helpless...
Nikita: maanvi go, i will finish up over here...
Maanvi: you sure...
Nikita nodded and smiled...
Maanvi: you are a life saver niki...i love you and owe you big!!! (she grabbed her coat and hugged niki)
Nikita: love you too...now go...you only have 15 minutes...
Maanvi: bye boss!!! (she said as she ran passed him)
Steve: bye maanvi
Steve and nikita watched at leaver and began to laugh...
Maanvi ran out of the building only to realise that her car was still in for repair...
Maanvi: the car is at the mechanic...ab kya karu...(she said as she bit her nails anxiously)
She looked around for any alternatives...there were no empty cabs at sight and she would become even more late if she waited for the bus...
Maanvi: looks like you are going to have to run for it maanu...chal, you can do it...
And she started to run as fast as he can so she can get to abhay soon...talking to herself while she ran...
Maanvi: tu toh gayi aaj maanvi...first you are going to late...and second, your feet are going to be dead running in these 3 inch heels...but forget the pain...get to abhay first...my sweety darr rahan hoga...aur phir gussa karega...lekin koi baat nahi...
She continued to run...rushing to get to the school quickly...as she rushed she accidently hit a man who just came out of starbucks...as she bumped into him his entire coffee fell...she stopped and saw the coffee spill everywhere...her mouth turned into an O shape...
Maanvi: Ohh my God!! I am so so sooo sorry!! (she said feeling guilty)
She started to try and fix her mistake..
Maanvi: i am really sorry...i didn't see you coming out and then accidently ran into you...really sorry...let me get some tissues...
Maanvi continued to talk not letting the man say a word...he was just looking at her as she tried to clean the coffee spill...As maanvi went to get some tissues she managed to slip...she closed her eyes tightly expecting to fall any minute...she knew wearing her heels would hurt one way or another...but she thought she was used to them by now...she opened one of her eyes to see why she hadn't fallen...and she noticed that she tightly held the man's shirt...
Man: it's okay, i got you (he took hold of her hand) well technically you had me (he slightly smiled)
Maanvi stood up straight and went to apologise...
Maanvi: im sor...
Just then she paused and looked at the man shocked...she could remember those light brown eyes anywhere...
Maanvi: VIRAT!!!!
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
okaaayyy thats it for part 1.
like it?? hate it?? found it boring or interesting?? please do let me know how you felt...and if want me to continue...
really hoping that you all like it!!!
love megs xxx
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Index
PART 1 - Anything for my sweety - https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3131159&PID=62330108�
PART 2 - destiny has been pretty tough - https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3131159&PID=62470521�
___________________________________________________________________________
PM list
Madpaki
Lavsar
Viratmanvi
shona_virman
Krazzy4u786
mika17
shaimah
Saraa.7
screen22
uzmasable
pinky.padda
MTBT_12071316
sham24
lafiza
arjun2011
nishi12345
Fan Fictions
Kabhi Neem Neem Kabhi Shahad Shahad
Debate Mansion
