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Posted: 12 years ago


Thanks dear! 😃

Originally posted by: punam2712

MAAN HAD STARTED THE RUMOURS EARLIER, SO HE HAS NO ONE TO BLAME IF THEY SURFACE AGAIN

HE MAY HAVE LOVED HER, BUT GETTING HER IN THIS WAY WAS WRONG AND HE HAS TO PAY FOR IT
SHE MAY LOVE HIM NOW, BUT CANT FORGET THE PAST BETRAYAL
BUT WILL DESTROYING HIS COMPANY MAKE HER HAPPY AND FULFILL HER DESIRE FOR REVENGE
IT WILL JUST TEAR THEM APART

I FIND THEIR RELATION TOO COMPLICATED AND THEIR STORY TOO SAD



Thanks Punam 😃
Yes, their love is complicated. Mixture of guilt, anger and hurt.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: x_Mishti_x

fabulous update..

Maan is breaking down completely but no kind of punishment will justify his deeds..
Poor Geet.. even though she is set through to take her revenge.. she is hurting inside .. she feels his pain.. but history is repeating itself.. waiting to see what Geet does.. wonderful update



Thansk Mishti! 😃
yeah...even in revenge, geet is hurting herself...

Originally posted by: sona-rai

mindblowing update yar


Thanks Sona! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Cyberlife

Sanjana:

Brilliant update as always! Hats off to you for developing this story in such a way that the present mirrors the past so closely but in role reversal!!!!

History repeating itself in a twisted manner and they are both burning from its effects!

Every time I read your update, it fires me up to such a restless, anxious, anticipatory state that I have a hard time focusing on my normal routine till the next update arrives from your keyboard!!

When o, when will this dance of destruction that Geet has mounted will spend itself and the relationship start to move towards redemption, forgiveness, love... Till such time, I am consoling myself by reading and re-reading your other fabulous FF -- LIMITLESS.




Thanks hun😳
Glad you are enjoying this!
LOL maybe you could proof read limitless for me...and correct it 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: doublecross

your updates always leave me pining for more
the update was fantastic as usual
both are suffering
though geet maintains a calm demeanor yet nobody can deny the inner turmoil and whirlwind of emotions playing havoc within her everytime she is around MAAN
in her bid to punish Maan for his past deeds she herself is getting punished
Maan on the other side is suffering no less and experiencing a pain that cant be felt by no one but him for losing his beloved.
though his actions in the past were wrong yet everytime you read him or his POV in the update you feel his pain his agony, his despair and his helplessness.
i sympathize with him, rather pity him
will wait for more
continue soon
its getting interesting
especially the sneak peek you provide us with about their past it makes me hungry for more
and leave me wondering as to what had happened in the past that such a beautiful relation turned so bitter!



Awww thanks! 😳
Accurate interpretation...
And yes, don't worry I sympathise with Maan as well..Otherwise I wouldn't have written the story 😆


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tellyme

Read so many parts together...

Great going...

So she is planning to destroy him economically...

Revenge wil be over by this, his ego will be hurt but then what... will she be able to see him going week if she loves him...

As now she is in mood of revenge but once the revenge is done, once he falls down she will be free by the feel of him cheating on her as she has been done with her revenge...

And then there will only be love and a destryed Maan... How will she handle... I want to see that... I don't know if this is the story but my mind is going this way...

Also, she had asked him to free him... I think Maan should give her her freedom and if she loves him really she will be back... the problem here is Maan is holding tight on her... he should loosen, set her free and then if she comes back, she is all his. If he keeps doing this way, she will never be his...

Great story... loving it.



Thanks hun! 😃
Interesting take on the story...
Geet's POV is that she isn't happy with him and neither can she walk away without making him understand what he has done, the severity of his deed. Otherwise he will never understand.
Well, lets see what happens 😉



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hopehot

😲 so that's how things worked out!



LOL, yeah that's how things happened. 😆

Originally posted by: Luvforever

Hey sanju!!
I hope i cn cal u dat..?? Waise i jst reach to dis part & once again lyk oder 2 ffs of urs... it also bolwed me completely... Its amazing bt i thnk at d end geet wud understnd dat sumwhere she even luv him to even make her fall 4 him & to d edge he hd gone jst to get her luv though it doesnt justify his act bt stil i cant hate him becoz of d amnt of luv he have 4 her & same goes 4 geet... & i jst hope dey understnd it soon... Plzz cont soon waiting...:-):-)



Thanks hun! 😳 Lovely compliments...
And of course you can call me Sanju! 😃
Don't worry, I don't hate Maan either...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: princess163

Sanju,I suggest u grab coke n snacks before you start reading this comment-rant!!
*grabs a pillow and makes herself comfortable*

Hi Swati! *Waves*...Ready with my coke!
So,I have been meaning to read this one since i read limitless but khotta office leaves me with no time! I am not well,so had taken a day off n hence i read this in a go :-D
Awww...hope you are feeling better now!
To say i was hooked would be an understatement
I think i have said this earlier too but i reiterate the compliment; the best thing abt you writing for me is your rase of transitiin between the pazt n the presdnt. Very fewwriters have it n you are one of them.
Thanks hun...lovely compliment! 😳
Now,the story is diffefent n intrivui.b as well as absorbing due to the intensity of the emotions of the characters.
Maan n Geet'slove-limitless in the true sense:iys both the balm n the wound.
Thd story is at a very interdzting point. The e tremely strong willed Geet is on the brink of destroying him n in turn,herself. While there isnt a doubt abt hher capability to do it;is the flame of revenge;however all -consuming it seems,strong enough to ovdrpower the fire of love that burns hdr? I believe not!
Well...wait and see hun. sometimes there is no recovery...

Reading the last updated part i was 100% sure that Maan would give her up coz he thinks thats what she really wants but the bevinning of ur teaser has left me confused. But,i do continue to believe that his love for her is strongr than his obsession with her.

Well...obsession is a twisted emotion, while love can be empowering...So Maan has to decide..


Their love forces me to write something,i guess it will be Geet's POV,though i cant be sure till i write n after that u could guess!

Also,all this is thru phone so i m sure there are millions of typos. i apologise for them.


I am burnt,
Both by your love and IN your love.

I am dead,
Its you who killed me,yet its you who keep me alive somewhere.

I am broken
Shattered like glass that you have trampled by your ego,
Yet its the sea of humility of your love hidden in the ocean of your arrogance that cushions my wounds.

Your presence closeby is physical pain,
For all that i have lost
yet its the most soothing balm,for without you what could i gain
y
I want to destroy you
For all that you have done to me
Yet it will destroy me
For in doing all that,you made me your own somewhere


I will lose you
But how does it matter,
For i have already lost myself within you.


I tell you i want to walk away
In my heart i add,
Without you i will simply throw my self away.

Wow...that was lovely...😳
Really captures their relationship! 👏



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vid_hurry

Just caught up. Superb story. Seems like we'll soon get to know how geet decides on her vengence.

Continue soon plz ^^



Thanks hun! 😃
Yeah...you'll see what Geet is planning soon!

Originally posted by: Ramykrish

How long we should wait for some forgiveness from Geet Side?Maan seems to be so pathetic here!



Well...forgiveness cannot come easily...and yes, when it comes to Geet, Maan is helpless. There isn't much he can do.
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Posted: 12 years ago
ALMOST LOVERS



Chapter Thirty

Beginning of the end


I await for the flames,

To burn and perish,

I await my fate

I await for you,

The day you walk away,

So that you come back to me.

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"She…she means the world to me. So, I am asking you for her hand in marriage"

Maan spoke the words with such conviction that there was only silence at their wake. But he just stood there letting the words sink in.

"You only give pain…..you are a burden" The words that had he been told as a kid hit back at him, reminding him that he was made on a legacy of pain. His chacha's words echoed in his heart, never letting him forget that he was unworthy of happiness. Yet he couldn't give up Geet, let her get away but more importantly he needed to help her. After all it was his own actions that led to this.

"No" Geet's voice was soft, yet held iron in them, "I won't let you marry me just because of the scandal. I won't let you ruin yourself to protect me. Where is honour in hiding behind others?"

Maan opened his mouth to say that she was to be his making, not his ruin and that he would give up his life just for a moment to call her his.

But before he could speak it was Mohinder who spoke, "No Geet, this is the best option. Otherwise Handa Constructions will have to sack thousands of workers and stop many projects. This isn't just about us but about the people we support"

Geet felt the words as a visceral slap to her face. Sense of betrayal filled her, more potent as it was from the last person she had expected. She could understand what her father was trying to say, understood it importance but still it hurt.

Maan looked disgruntled by Mohinder's comment and instead turned to Geet, "Before you agree I want to talk to you."

Geet gave a small nod and led him into one of the smaller sitting rooms in the house, walking past her parents.

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Present

Maan stood, alone in his office. Again he was contemplating his situation and the mess that he had created with his own hands.

There were few people capable of destruction as he was, few who were able to spread such venom as he could.

"You are responsible for all this!" His Uncle screamed at him, "You little idiot" Maan then felt the sting of his slap across his face. "Worthless idiot!"

Maan had grown to believe that only those who took could achieve what they needed, you could never be passive. It had been a lesson he learnt from childhood, a lesson that pain had solidified till it became his way of behaving.

But Geet had changed that.

She had made him understand the beauty in giving everything to another person, to open ones soul to another till there was no barrier or distance. She made him understand how lovely yet daunting such vulnerability could be.

She made me understand love.

In his love for her, he had given her everything she could want; his wealth, his power and all that was his. He had given himself to her. But it hadn't been enough, he hadn't been enough for her.

Maan clenched his fingers and shut his eyes, trying to see the path he should take. In the end he knew there was only one thing he could truly do to save his honour.

"Sir!" Adi rushed into the room after a quick knock on the door, "Have you watched the news? Our share prices have gone down even more."

Maan frowned, feeling his world start to cave in, "Okay, call a meeting with the board of members"

"Umm….sir there is something else you should know" Adi tugged at his tie nervously, "The NCCA is trying to get in contact with us, regarding one of our projects"

"What!" Maan roared. An investigation from the NCCA was the last thing the company needed, "Which project are they worried about?"

"Sir…it's the….the project" Adi stammered, not needing to name the project.

Maan wanted to smash his office, destroy everything. But instead he managed to stay calm, "Okay, make it an emergency board meeting. I want everyone to be present"

As Adi walked out, Maan felt the pressures of his situation. He was losing control of his company and his relationship. Everything was drowning.

I wish we could go back to a simpler time, when this bitterness didn't exist between us. He thought helplessly, as his mind went back to beginning of their relationship.

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Past

As they sat next to each other, alone in the room, Geet felt the awkwardness of the moment. She didn't know how to break this silence but felt the need to.

Just as she opened her mouth to say something inane to break the silence but he beat her to it.

"Geet please hear me out" He turned towards her, looking straight at her. "I want to marry you. Not because of the scandal or because of the business. Just that I want to marry you and be with you"

While his words were potent, it was the look in his eyes that had her glued there. There was no way she could escape the intensity of those eyes.

"I don't want you to marry me because you have to" Maan urged, resisting the urge to pull her closer to him, "I want you to need me, the way I need you. Not for some obligation but still I will marry you regardless. For me, being with you is enough. I want to know what you want."

Geet clenched her fingers, fighting the urge to lean into him, to agree to the spell he cast around them.

"But, the decision has to be yours" Maan bowed his head down, fighting the need to say more, to lay his heart even more at her feet. This wasn't who he was, this desperate need of someone else and the way he just opened himself up for her.

He stood up, "Take your time Geet"

With that he started to walk away but Geet caught his hand and pulled him to sit down.

"Why do you want to marry me?" She asked him, mimicking him by staring right into his eyes, wanting to see the truth in them.

"Because I love you" He frowned as he said the words as he knew that she was cognizant about his feelings for her.

"Love is great" She smiled at him, "But I've been in love before and it made me understand what is more important than love. Trust, honesty and more importantly, friendship. I can offer you all of these but will it be enough for you?"

Maan couldn't believe that she was actually considering his proposal and felt a lightness in his heart that had never been there before, it was elation.

"Will it be enough" He repeated, "It would be more than I deserve"

"Well, then…what are you waiting for" Geet smiled, a hint of sadness but also pleasure, "Propose properly!"

Kneeling down, he took her hand, "Marry me Geet Handa." He didn't say anything else, for everything that needed to be said had already been spoken and everything he felt was in his grasp.

"Yes, I will" She squeezed his hand, sealing their fate.

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Present

Maan sat straight and proud as he watched the board members take their seats. As always, the CEO of Khurana Corporation could never falter or show weakness.

However there was some obvious anxiety amongst the other members, clearly worried about what was happening but not brave enough to directly ask the questions.

"Good to see all of you here" Maan spoke out, "This situation has gotten out of hand and we need all the major stakeholders here to create a plan on how to move forward."

"Not all members are here, darling" Geet's voice was sweet as it was sharp as she strolled into the room. "You cannot forget the main shareholder of this company."

There was shifting in the seats, as everyone felt the tension but Maan had eyes for Geet only.

What is she doing here?

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AUTHOR's NOTE:

Thanks as always for the lovely comments and compliments!

As you can see, the stage is set for Geet to take action...
And get more insight into their relationship with the next update...

PLEASE DO COMMENT and press the LIKE button!!

Nothing motivates me as much as reading your comments!😃



-SanjanA

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Posted: 12 years ago

WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW

I am the first...

Its been a time since i have become the fiest to comment...

Awesome update...

Feeling bad for Maan and Geet...

Maan loved her so much and

Geet is destroying everything in view of revenge...

Edited by craziekudi - 12 years ago

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