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Posted: 13 years ago

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DMG, AR PYAR FOREVER...

PART 8

Cafe in hotel
Ammy sees ridzi and viren together having cofee and laughing and talking
He gets angry and storms off to his room...
Ammy to himself:Hamesha aisa ho ta ha... Koi hamare beech ajata hain. Riddhima mere saath aisa kyun nahi baat karti. Aur vo viren vo to ussa isa dekhraha ta.

Ridzi:Hey .. Good morning. Tum jaag gayye?.
Ammy:Haan tum gayi kaha ti?
Ridzi: vo... na.. Vo receptionist ko bata rahee ti kain hum aaj leave kar rahe hain.
Ammy:Oh... To tum vo cafe main nahi ti.. USS VIREN KE SAATH.
Ridzi:Haan main vaha gayeti aur haan main viren ki saath ti. Tum ghussa kyun hora he ho sheru
Ammy:khud se pooncho. Tum ne jhoot kyun bhola
Ridzi: Kyunki main jaanti hu ke tu aise react karongai.
Ammy:I dont understand anymore... I just dont. Tum chahti kya ho... Aur I jus dont know ke main yaha kyun aaya. Tumhe to koi faraq nahi parta kai main hu ya na.
Ridzi:Armaan tum aise kyun bol rahe ho.
Ammy:Kyunki tumhd pata hain ke main tumse bohot pyar karta hu. Fir bhi tum viren ke saath sab kuch karti hu.
Ridzi:Vo sirf mera dost hain. Tum mujhpe shak kar rahe ho fir se.
Ammy: Nahi main tumpe shak nahi kar raha hu.
Ridzi: To yeh shak nahi hai to kya hai armaan.
Ammy: main jaanta hu ke tum merw saath kabhi nahi cheat kar sakti.
Ridzi: Tooo
Ammy: to mujhe aaj bhi uss viren pe trust nahu hain. Dar lagta hain ke vo hum dono ko alag na karde.
Ridzi: U know what Armaan, tum mujhe jeena hi nahi deta ho.
Ammy: What do u mean by that huh?
Ridzi: Yahin ke main tumhare saamne ek larka se baat bhi nahi kar sakti. Itnai overprotective kyun ho?
Ammy: kyunki...

Knock on door...

Receptionist:Sir, maam aap ka aeroplane time jaa raha hain.
Ridzi :Haan hum aaraha hai

In the aeroplane...
Ammy goez to sit next to ridzi but viren stops him

Viren: Sorry yaar. Vo yeh meri seat hain
Ammy: Ok ryt.
Ridzi feels a bit bad
Viren:Hey so we meet again. Kya hua,
Ridzi: Kuch nahi. Bas tired hu.
Viren: ridzi kua yeh tumhara pendant hain vo hum jub cafe main tain tab yeh ghir gaya ta.
Ridzi: Haan yeh mera hi hain. U do not know ke miss ko kitna doonde rahi ti.
Viren: main pehnado.
Ridzi: Urmm... Ok....
He moves ridhzi's hair and clips the pendant.
Ridzi: Thanks.
Armaan had been watchin this happen and was very angry.

Ammy looked at ridzi and she was tryin to say sorry but he stopped looking n turned his face away...

Gupta residence
A knock on door. .
Anji: Guys I think ridzj is back
She opens door
Anji: Hi ridzi, I missed u so much
Ridzi: I missed u so much too di
Shanky: AB tum behno ka hogaya hai kya mujhe bhi apni beti se milne don
Ridzi: Papa, I missed u so much
Shanky: Jhoot
Padma: Haan armaan ta na.
Naani: to armaan beta bi hotel main room mangaya ta kya..
Ridzi... Haan vo uss ka akela room ta aur mera bhi. Dad , mom, main bohot takhi hui hu so main room.main tora araam karnai jati hu. Ok.
Padma: Teek hain beta.

Ridz goez to her room still thinkin why armaan was still angry at her.
Just coz she neva spent much time with him there.
Anji: Hey ridzi to batawo kaisa ta goa.
Ridzi: Bohot acha ta di. Sab paperwork project ke liya khatam hogaya.
Anji: huh.. Main uss ke baare main nahi baat karahi. Main to.tumhare aur armaan ki lovestory ke baare main puch rahee hu.
Ridzi: haa. Di hum nai bohot maza ki , beach pe etc. Di im tired mujhe sona hain.
Anji: alryt.
Ridzi goes to bed still unhappy and sad.

Malik residance
Ammy: I think maybe I was too hard on her. Ab to vo viren kebab main haddi to nahi banega. Hes out the way man.
Kal main basket ke saath saare problem solve karloonga. Yea.
Ab sau jawoo ammy. Kal jaldi jaag na hain. Pyar ke liya to kuch bhi... Love u basket

Sanjeevani...

armaan comez out from locker room. He sees ridzi and is about to go up to her but then sees viren talkin to riddhima while walking

Armaan to himself: yeh yaha kya karaha hain. Phir se riddhima ke peecha peecha aagaya. God...
Anji, atul, rahul,muskaan and nikki go up to viren and ridzi.
Nikki: hey ridzi how r u aur goa kaisa raha?
Ridzi: bohot acha. Anyway guys main tum sab ko.kisi se milwana chahati hu. This is viren.. Mera naya dost.
Armaan watches from afar aur bohot ghusa hoja ta hain. Aur vo vaha se chala jaa ta hain.

Everyone says hi to viren except nikki.

Muskaan: tumhara bf to yahi ta ridzi, ab kaha gaya? Bohot ghusa lag raha ta.
Rahul whispers: jalan ho rahi hongi. Ill go talk to him later.
Muskaan: Haan yahi karna.
Ridzi and ammy are both still sad..😭. Ridzi.is confused ke ammy aise kar kyun raha hain. And ammy ko nahi bata ke ridzi kyun virsn ke saath guum ti hain aur chahti kya hain...

Promo:
Nikki ne kyun viren ko hi nahi bhola
Kya raaz hain
Kya hoga AR ka relationship ko.
Kya Ar ka pyar hamesha forever hoga.😆

Hey guys...

Hope u liked part 8 of my ff

pls read, comment and press like

Next part is better than this...

ill ud soon

thx😛

love u all

SAMMARA 😊

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Sammara

@Sammaraxx

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

DMG, AR PYAR FOREVER

PART 9

Hey guys, I hope u enjoyed part 8. Ab enjoy part 9. Let ne know what u think. K guys. And dont forget to comment. Thx xxx

Sanjeevani...
Armaan still worrying. He is walking past the corrider when he feelz a tug and someone pulss him in the fire exit
Ammy: Riddhima... Tum..
Ridzi: Haan main. To
Ammy: tumne mujhe yaha kyun bhulaya
Ridzi: Armaan ab bohot hogaya. Mujhe samaj nahi aati ke hum kyun itna jagar rahe hain.
Ammy: God riddhima, tumhe koi andaaza nahi hain kya. Aaj bhi tum viren ke saath thi. Tumhe agar vo itna acha lagta hain, to tum uske,saath kyun nahi jaa ke pyar kar leti.
Ridzi: Kyunki main sirf tumhse pyar karti hu. Aur kisse se nahi.
Ammy: Haan, ryt aur iss liye jab plane main uss ne tumhe ek necklace diya to tum khushi se usse pehn li. Oh sorry he put it on for u.
Ridzi: armaan, uss ne mere liye koi necklace nahi laya ta. Vo meri ti jo ghir gaya ta.
Ammy: I dont care anymore.
Ridzi: par...
Ammy: Aaj bhi vo tumhare peeche peeche ayya sanjeevani main. U know theres a difference in between being just friends and being more
Ridzi: Tum kehna kya chahte
Ammy: yahi kai tum uss ke saath overfriendly ban rahe ho.
Ridzi: stop it armaan
Ammy: what stop it. Dont u get it. He flirts with u.
Ridzi: mujhe tumpe yakin nahi hota. Maine hi ghalti kar di tumse baay karni ki.
Ammy: jus go. I dont wana talk
Ridzi: FYN

Ridzi leaves leaving armaan tensed

Canteen...
Ridzi: tum nahi gayai abhi tak viren.
Viren: Haan vo actually tumhara kaam ho jaaye to cofee pena challe.
Ridzi: urmm... Ok kitna acha dost ho tum
Viren: teek hai. To ill pick u up bout 6. Tumhara mood bhu tab tak thik ho jayenga.
Ridzi: bye.

Ridzi to herself:* maine haan kyun kaha. Main hamesha kisse ko naa keh hi nahi sakti. I just hope armaan ko iss ke baare main kuch na pata challai. Aur main uss ke baare main kyun soch rahi hu. Ammy ke vaja se main naraz nahi ho jawoongi*

General ward:
Dr keerti: Dr armaan, dr riddhima.
Ammy: Yes maam
Ridzi: Ji dr keerti
Keerti: kya reports apkai patient ka ho chooka hain???

They both hand in seperate files
Keerti: Yeh kya 2 files.
Ridzi: vo maam mere aur Dr Armaan ki soch alag hain patient ki baare main.to shahyid isse liye Dr Armaan ne apni khud ki file ban wali.
Keerti: fyn. Mujhe deh do
They hand in both the files, riddhima goes off

Locker room
Ammy: Hey nikki, tum itni chup kyun dekhrahee ho aur vo bhi itni udhaas.
Nikki: nahi ammy, kuch nahi hua.
Ammy; nikki tum mere best friend ho aur main tumhe bachpan se jaanta hu, tum mujhse kuch nahi chupa sakti
Nikki: Main sirf yeh kahoongi kai ridzi ka kayal rakna.
Ammy:haan hamae fight hui hain. But tum fikr not main solve karlonga. Tum kyun roh rahi ti.
Nikki: vo... Vo... Tumhe pata hain... Vo viren jo ridzi ke saath aaya ta aaj.
Ammy: haan main uss ... Ko jaanta hu. Kyu. Kya hua.
Nikki: Ridzi ko kabhi mat uske saath akele mat chorna.
Ammy": But why
Nikki: yaad hain jab main college leave hui ti
Ammy: Haan yaad hain.
Nikki.: tab viren se main militi. Vo hamare college main nahi jaata ta. Par we used to ho out.
Ammy: Phir...
Nikki: phir pehle to vo bohot acha ra, ek dum perfect bf ta. Pan ek raat main usse nai mijhe phek diya. Kyunki jo vo jahta ja... Vo usse mil gaya.
Ammy: you mean he... Mujhe to sharam aati hain yeh kehne main. Saalle. Tum ne pehle kyun nahi bataya ke vo kaisa ta.
Nikki: mujhe hi nahi yakin ho rahee ti jab maine usse aaj dekha.
Vo bass larkiyon ko use karna jaanta hai. Dar hain, ke vo ridzi ke saath kuch ulta sidha na kar den
Ammy: Dont worry main aisa hona nahi dunga. Agar usse mai ridzi ke saath kuch bhi try kiya to ill break his legs.
Nikkis pager rings
Nikki: Sorry ive gota go. Duty bhula rahee hain.

After work
Viren arrives out of sanjeevani waiting for ridzi. Nikki sees him there and goes up to him
Nikki: viren please riddhima ke saath kuch ghalat mat karna vo bogot bholi hain. Vo sehen nahi kar payengi.
Viren: Jo hamare beech main hua ta vo hogaya. Its history and i 've changed too

Ridzi comez up
Viren: challe ridzi. Cafe chale
Ridzi: bye nikki
Nikki: par ridzi wait
Ridzi: kal baat karengai. Bye

Viren: kaha jayye madam
Ridzi: Round the corner ek cafe hain vaha pe jaare hain.
Viren: ok
Ridzi: urm tum kya order,karongai?
Viren: urm... 1 cheese cake slice aur ek cappucino. And tum
Ridzi: 1 choco cake slice and mocha.

They eat and head back to the car

Meanwhile in sanjeevani...
Nikki: Armaan yaha pe awwoon.
Ammy: kya hua
Niki: ridzi viren ke saathgaye hai coffe pe nai
Ammy; oh no challo. Lets check in the nearest cafe jo round the corner hi hain

They go check. Ridzi vaha pe nahi hoti hain.
Ammy: ab kya kare.
Nikki: I think yahi address hain viren ka. Agar vo vaha pe usse legaya ho to.
Ammy: oh no I hope riddhima teek hain
Nikki: dont worey. Challo
Meanwhile in car
Ridzi: viren hum kaha aaya hain
Viren: yeh mera ghar hain. Please come in
Ridzi: well... Urmm ok.

They go inside, chat for a while and vireb usse pura ghar gumata hain, until vo bedroom main ponch te hain

Ridzi: wow... Tumhare view bohot acha hain.
Viren: jaanta hu.

Viren goes forward and puls riddhima to him, and tries pulling the string on the back of ridzi's dress.
Ridzi: viren tum.. Tum kya karahe ho
He kisses her neck and clutchez her and take vo hil nahi paaye
Ridzi: ooucch.. Viren kya karahe ho. Please stop
Viren: main iss din ka bohot intezaar kar raha ta.

Ridzi tries to pull away but he grips her to him.
Ridzi: please mujge chordo. Please. Armaan help. someone...Help
Viren: tumhaara bf to yaha nahi hain.To ab kaun bachane aayengaa tumhe
Ridzi: ouch. Mujhe choro please

Promo..
Kya ammy time pe ponchayenga ridzi ko bachane
Ya...
Kya viren apni man mani kar payenga.
Read part 10 to find out.

Guys kaisa,ta.maina interesting part pe rok diya na. I hope u enjoyed it.
More romance will b comin soon.length tik tana. Thx for all ur comnents iss part main bhi coment kar na guys please. Next part more bettet hoga.

So please comment and like

Il ud part 10 soon
Love u lots
Sammara
XXX. :)

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Sammara

@Sammaraxx

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

DMG, AR Pyar Forever

PART 10

Hey guys. Ye hain part 10 that i have ud. Plz enjoy air comment. Ye bohot acha part hain. Aur main jaanti hu ke aap sab viren ko kitna na pasand karte hain..kitna cheap hain vo

so for Teenorchid (Farwa), SweetDesire ( Geet),CharmingKiller, KrazyKiller, Ar_ Lover, Crazy4KASH_AR, Tanvi_sexy, aur others who read too... this part is for you

so pls comment and enjoy the part..

Virens house

Ridzi: ouch... Viren mujhe choro.
Viren: nahi, aaj to nahi.. tumhara armaan bhi tumhe bachanai nahi aayenga.
Ridzi: im beggin u. Plz. Armaan... Somebody help.
Ammy rushes in

Viren: Dekho tumhara hero aagaya
Ridzi: Armaan... Please help me
Ammy: riddhima ko choro
Viren: Nahi choroonga.
Ammy: Thik hain . To maar kane ke liya tayaar ho jawoo.

Ammy goes forward and pulls riddhima away,from him. He punches viren
Ammy: Tumhare himmat kaise hui riddhima ko chooneki. Nikki thik keh rahee ti tumhare baare main..Kitna ghira hua cheap disgusting aadmi ho tum.. Aur bhi words hain tumhe describe karne ke liye
Viren tries to speak but ammy bashes him to the floor.
Here they have a fight. Punching... Kicking... Until...

Ridzi: armaan ab usse chordo please
Ammy: ridddhima ke liya chor raha hu. Aur ek aur baat police to tumhe zaroor paker lengi. Police officer come in
P.O: we are arresting u in attempt of...
The police says the speech and arrests viren

Ridz goes over and hugs armaan tightly
Ridzi: Mujhe laga ke tum nahi aate. Aur mujhe yeh bhi laga ke vjren mere saath apni maan mani kar lenga
Ammy: Shusshh. Mere hota hui to kya vo tumhe haath bhi nahi laga sakta. I LOVE U...
Ridzi: main jaante hu. Ab tum sahi te uss ke baare main... Please mujhe maaf kar lon. Im really really sorry

Ammy: Aise nahi... Tumhe mere liye kuch karna hoga
Ridzi: Kya...
Ammy: Vo to mein baad main bata woonga. Aur Basket tumhara dress ka zip khula hain. Main baand kar doon
Ridzi: Haan... Please

Ammy zips it up...
Next day...
Ridzi goes to sanjivani early to finish some reports.
Ammy goes to Rahuls house...

Rahul's house...
Ammy knocks on door
Ammy: come on man, open the door

Rahul: im comin wait man...

Rahul opens the door
Rahul: Kya hain
Ammy:Vo mujhe tumse ek zaroori baat karni hain
Rahul: abhi 6:30 subha main.
Ammy: Haan yaar bohot important hain.

Ammy comes in the house
Rahul: ssshhh.. bohot awaaz mat karoo plz
Ammy: kyun koi hain kya?
Rahul: vo... Urmm...
Ammy: ooohhh. Muskaaan. Vo yaha kya karaheeha.
Rahul: Actuallay...
Ammy: Rehne doo. I know kya ho raha ta. Iss liye tum chahte tain ke maun subha subha tumhe disturb naa karoo...

Rahul hits ammy with a cushion for a joke.
Rahul: ok. To kya baat karni ti
Ammy: vo.. Mujhe riddhima ko propose karna hain
Rahul: what aajj. Kya hu ke tum itni jaldi..
Ammy tells rahul what happened the day before

Rahul: Omg... That viren tried to...
Ammy: dont say dat word

Rahul: With ridzi

Ammy: haaan
Rahul: Tumhe dr shashank se baat karni hogi.
Ammy: I know. Aur tum mera saath awoonga.
Rahul; no I wont... Main to busy hu.
Ammy: Thik hain. To main sab ko keh doonga ke tum aur muski ... U kno.. Ding dong ... akele main tumne...
Rahul: no pls dont. Aur aisa kuch nahi hoga. Ill come

Gupta residence...
Knocks on door

Ammy; Come on ammy... you can do it

Rahul: haha pagal hain tu

DR .shashank opens the door
Shanky: Dr.armaan aur Dr Rahul app dono...
Ammy: Jee sir vo aap se kuch baat karni ti
Shanky: Haan. Come in. Behto.
Ammy:vo sir... Actually. I...i
Rahul: sir armaan riddzi ko propose karna chata hain..
Shanky: im sorry but no
Ammy: But sirr. Par...
Shanky: armaan mujhe kyun pooch rahee ho... are u proposing to me. no na.. Tum khud propose kar lena riddhima se. Main aur padma baat hi kar rahe tai ki tum dono ki shaadi kar leni chahye jald se jald
Ammy: Really sir...to aaj ek party hain. Kya basket... I mean riddhima aa sakti hain.
Shanky: Ofcourse

Sanjeevani...
Ridzi: Ammy tum kaha tai aur late kyun aaye
Ammy: Bas tori si kaam ta
Ridzi: kaise kaam
Ammy: bas aise hi. Anyway aaj ek party hain to tum awoongi na.
Ridzi: Haan par kis kushi main
Ammy: vo mujhe aur dadooo I mean rahul soch rahai te ki hum sab kitna kaam kartai hain. Hospital se ghar.. phir ghar to hospital... So Hum ko tora sa fun ki zaroorat hain and we deserve it too
Ridzi: GOod idea..Yaay cant wait.
Ammy: Oh... urmm...Riddhima vo laal vali dress pehen na.
Ridzi: ohh vo sauce wali laal... Ok... Cya

Party...
Ammy: guys sab kuch ready hain na. Rings. Balloonns. Petals
Atul:check
Rahul:check
Muski:check

Anji: Check BIL

Ammy: Whats BIL???

Anji: duh?? Brother In Law

Ammy: ohh.. ok SIL (sister in law)

Ammy: good ab yeh riddhima kaha gayi.
Nikki: look.vo vaha pe beti hain

Ammy: wooow. Basket tum to bohot sexy lag rahee ho.. especailly in sauce wala laal
Ridz blushes: thank you.
Ammy is about to hug ridzi, when he sees shanky
Ammy: sasurji yaha kya kar rahe hain
Ridzi: tum ne bhula ya ta na papa ko
Ammy: maine une kaha ke vo tumhe aane di. .. Kaha bata ta ke ab mere saare romance plans chopat ho jayenga.

Ridzi: Armaan challo na lets dance
Ammy: Ok basket.
They go to dance.



They danced for long. Then stoped.
Ammy: ek minute... Attention everyone. Basket yaha stage pe awoona
Ridzi: armaan ye tum kya kar rahee ho
Ammy: yaha. Ek larki hain jis ki vaja se majn pagal hoga ya ta. Kya batawoon. Hum basket ball court main mila ta 2 years ago. Iss din se hum dono saath hain. Har din main uss ke bina jee nahi sakta. Mere kabhon main sirf vo rehte hi aur mere dill main bhi. Iss liye...
He bends down on his knees
...
...
...
Ammy: riddhima .. Will u marry me.😃
He taks out a ring

Riddhima is very shocked and happy.
Ridzi:yes yes yes.😃
Petals fall.down on the couple as ammy pulls her into a hug.

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Everyone claps for them

Promo:
Kya ar unite hoga
Shaadi week..
Sangeet

Hey guys. Hope u enjoyed it. Par acha ta na. Could u bleve ki ammy ne ridzi ko.propose kia vo bhi uski dad ke saamne. Length acha tana. Next part main AR shaadi weak hogi. Matlab mehndi... Sangeet. Uss main bohot fun, masti, rommaanccee hoga...
Aur humhe bata hain ke larke to larkiyon ke sangeet main...
You will see.
Please read and please please comment
Ill ud part 11 soon.
Thank you guys for commenting.

THX😊

Love u all😊

Sammara xxx😊

Edited by Sammaraxx - 13 years ago

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