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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice ff!! thoghu most of d parts wr super small...i dont know why!!! bt it was lovely reading sch an evil character!!
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NOTE-

WILL UPDATE TOMORROW..
SORRY FOR DELAY..😭
BUT DEFO UPDATE TOMORROW,😃
HOPE PARDON FOR DELAY...😊
BUT ME NOT KEEPING WELL..
SO THATS WHY
Edited by ishanidhi08 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
UPDATE IN 20 MIN..
ANYONE THR??

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PART-9

In KC,

maan was restlessly roaming here and there, while employee was sweating and fearing from danger to come. Maan was hell angry, we went out to bash yash, but what he saw made him more furious, he saw geet and yash hugging..


maan- ahhh, how dare he, how can he, i will cut him into pieces, he touched my possession, he will pay big, he will pay big, i will make sure that he pays big..

he shouted and then started laughing

maan- i told you geet, you are mine, but i think you dont understand, now you will also pay, pay for making me restless.pay for waking this demon

he punched the number in his cell

maan- i want her location in 5 min, or count your number of days left to live.

after 5 min,

person(in fear)- she is in yash's house..

the call was cut, before he could tell , this house ids of her best friend meera and yash is her husband

he drive the car in full speed, breaking all the signal, no signal were made for maan singh khurana

he reached his house and glare the security to open the door, the door was open

he bashed in house, where meera was pouting as yash and geet was teasing her.

he saw a pregnant girl and then yash and geet, who stand so close to each other, his anger broke all the limits and madness can be seen in his eyes

he moved towards yash and geet and punched yash, so hard that he fall down

yash- geet run

geet and meera ' yasshhh

he hated his name from her mouth and gave her angry glare and drag her out,


she was struggling in his grip, tear made their way in her eye, but had no effect to him, he drag him to his car and drove away

geet- leave me, you devil, leave me...


maan ' shhh, one more world and you will face worst

geet- stop..

she found his hand on her hair and he pushed her unto herself and kissed her mercilessly, tear made ways in her eye

geet- leave me, please leave me...

but he wasn't in mood to leave her so soon, punishment was still left..

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next- punishment??..what?? guess...

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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Update !!

OMG Maan !! 😡 !!

Hes Such A Devil !! 😡 !!

Poor Geet !! 😔 !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
hu u r turning to be more and more writing Guru...different themes from u...omg Maan is really a devil ?...But ur ideal Maan is always sweet so what now ? 😲
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Posted: 13 years ago
haila yeh kya tha
what is the punishment ?
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loved the update...
waiting to know the next...
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omg!i hope he dont do anything to yash...
poor geet!maan's rage s binding him to c the truth..

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