maaneet ff # 2...CRAZY IN LOVE/LAST PART PAGE 57.. - Page 21

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Posted: 13 years ago
haayee...!! its kind of m loving it ff...!!!! this is the best thiing i had ever liked after LBL...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Read all the parts. I love the
way you write. BEAUTIFUL

Amazing update.

Maan telling his plan to frndz. Unka reaction mast that.
They were overacting. That part was gud.

Maaneet dam excited as they will share their b'day
For first time. They want to do sumthing special for
Other.

The kiss was hott n passionate. Loved Maaneet
Moments. Maan putting up a condition. Lol.
Geet blurting out the truth.

Now eagerly waiting for the party n engagement.

Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago

hi friends!!!!!!!!!! here u go next update...

PART 36


In morning after breakfast all leave for temple where family have a

special pooja for bright future of maaneet... after that maaneet take

blessing from elders... and leave to meet their friends..

Maaneet and gang decide to meet in mall and celebrate maaneet's

bday their..

In xyz mall

Gang were already present when maaneet reach all attack on both of

them girls on geet and boys on maan..typical friends style...after

hugging wishing maaneet they come in cafe to make further plans..


In cafe

Sam - so maan kya plan hain celebration ka??????

Maan (teasingly) - plan kya hoga tum logo mein aapni treat to le li ab

mein aur geet akele jayege celebrate karne aur kya???????

All make o shape face to maan and geet is mutely giggling seeing

their reaction.. because they knows maan already plan a surprise

party for geet and gang in noon itself but he want to tease them...she

remember their morning moments..

In morning


Geet come out from shower in her bathrobe all wet looking extremely

sexy, its her habit because she already lock main door so that no one

come inside but for her bad luck and maan's good luck their secrete

door she forget to lock... maan come from their to wish her again and

give her surprise too but he himself get such a sexy surprise when he

going to call her name he seen geet comeing out from bath looking

ever so beautiful hot and sexy... water drops dripping from her hair

some drops on her face...her milky slim legs... maan lost himself in

pure and freash beauty and start walking toward her geet not notice

maan present in her room she busy in drying her her hair. Maan

come close from back and put his palm on her shoulder . geet

started suddenly feel someone present in her room.. she open her

mouth to

scream but maan is quick enough to put his plam on her mouth and

with a jerk turn her to face him and hold tightly from waist from other

hand...

Geet get shock what maan doing in her room, and most important

from where he come inside...

Maan understand what geet might be thinking, he smirk looking into

her eyes which showing so many questions and shock..maan come

close to her earlobe and huskily

Maan (huskily)- mujhe nahi pata tha ye bday mere liye itne

surpriseing hoga...kal raat se surprises pe surprise hi mil rahe hain

mujhe...waise i don't mind it freankly speaking i love it..and bit her

earlobe...and remove his plam from her mouth..

Geet (moan)-maannn

Maan again look into her eyes... his eyes showing raw passion and

desire..

Geet - maan plz...

Maan - geet is plz ka mein kya matlab nikalo haan??? He is talking in

riddles...and making geet confuse..

Geet - maan plz leave me koi aajayega...

Maan(with naughty grin in his eyes) - geet koi kaise aayega door to

lock hain...

That time it strike geet again from where maan come???????????

Geet (innocently)- maan agar door lock hain to aap kaha se

aaye???????

Maan - geet maan ko aapni geet k pass aane se koi door nahi ruk

sakta...

Geet (she hit maan chest playfully on his flirt tone)- maan batayiye

na???

Maan - geet tum na bilkul jhali ho tune main door to lock kar liya par

what about that door??????? And point toward the other door..

Geet hit her head on her silly question - are mein to ye door lock

karna bhool hi gayi thi..

Maan- waise i love ur this bhool dekho mujhe ek aur birthday gift

mil gaya...he said naughtily

Geet blush and look down...

Maan hold her chin and make her look into his eyes

Maan (lovingly) - geet plz kabhi aapni najare mat churaya karo , jab

mein tumhari aankho mein aapne aapko dekhta hu na to lagta hain

mera koi aks hain wajood hain warna mein koi nahi..

Geet (lost in his eyes)- maan i love u...

Maan-i love u too geet...

Both lost in their world Mr.love bark disturb them... maan left geet and

Maan - u get ready aaj hum temple k baad mall jaa rahe hain.

Geet (questionally) - mall kyu maan?????

Maan (mock her ) - mall kyu ???????? is that a question geet are i

plan some surprise for us and our friends i want to spend this whole

day with u and our friends... bas isliye aur waise bhi i know evening

mein ye sab possible nahi hain as family might be plan something in

evening as surprise for us..

Geet - ok maan aap jayiye mein ready ho jati hu..

Maan (teasingly) - are mein kyu jao yahi mere samne ready ho jao..

Geet blush with his shameless comment...

Geet (push him out of door smiling shyly )- maan u become

shameless...

Maan (stop at door and see over his shoulder) - geet abhi to mein jaa

raha hu lekin ek baar mujhe official licence mil jaane do mein tumhe

nahi chodne wala...and wink on geet and leave...geet blush more...

Present

Dev(making baby face) - yaar this is not fair aisa thodi na hota hain

humein bhi treat chahiye...

Unison - yes we also want treat..

Geet start laughing madly seeing their baby faces...all look her is she

alien??

Pinki - oye geet tu aisi kyu has rahi hain?????????????

Geet (controlling her laughter)- are tum logo ke faces to dekho... are

maan is just joking...he already plan a party only for us..

Karan dev and adi attack on maan to bit him all laughing enjoying..

First they went for movie...a comedy one where they three siting in

couple maaneet , dev and sam and adipinki..and karan is busy in

admiring girls in theatre. Whole time maaneet busy in romancing...

After movie they went for lunch in restaurant..

Restaurant decorating in the way what geet like only candle light in

dark hall, with red and white roses... violin playing soft romantic

music... all memorise seeing beautiful decoration with geet...

Geet eyes get teary admiring maan's love , maan come and hug geet

from back..put his arms around her waist and hold her tightly... geet

turn with jerk and hug maan passionately, maan respond with equal

passion.. after sometime they loose hug..wipe her tears

Maan - geet lunch karle..

Geet only nod lost in maan all went to take lunch..again lunch is

romantic maaneet were busy talking through eyes..even caught by

friends and last get hell teased..

After lunch all went for shopping where maan buy somany things to

geet and vice versa...after shopping in evening

Karan - guys now what???????

Dev - why don't we went to maan's farmhouse , what say?????

All agreed and leave for farmhouse... maan know's it only drama their

is something planned or else why suddenly they want to go

farmhouse that to in night????

Maan(st) - do i look like bewakoof to them... ke mein itna na samjh

sako why they want to go farmhouse in night..

In farmhouse

Whole hall is drak no light when they all enter geet scared and hold

maan's arms tightly..

Suddenly lights on nad elder come sing birthday wishes maaneet

having pleasant smile on their faces, they touch elders feet

Dadu - maan geet go get ready tum dono ke liye ek aur surprise

hain..go guest bhi aate hi honge...

Maaneet come back after getting ready...whole hall filled with vip

guest along with press and media.. why not its big announcement

for business world the famous K n H industries partners going to

become relatives..

Darji and dadu went on stage to make announcement..

Dadu - ladies and gentlemen's may i have ur attention plz...all guest

turn toward them..

Dadu - aaj ka din humari family k liye bahut special day hain aaj

mere pote aur harjeet ki poti... ka janam din hain ye to aap sab jante

hain par iske sath sath aur bhi kuch special hain, maan geet beta

yaha aao..

Maaneet went on stage.. geet on dadu's side and maan on darji side...

Darji - yash aur mein humesha se humari dosti ko rishteydari mein

badal na chahte the...humara barso purana sapna aaj pura hone ja

raha hain..

Maaneet look surprised toward dadu and darji and then

eachother..their heart start beating faster...

Dadu - ji sahi samjha aap sabne humne aaj maaneet ki sagai karne ka

faisla liya hain..

Maaneet heart missed several beats...is it true they both were waiting

for what the moments from some many year is that really come...are

they really going to engage...

All family members come in the stage... mom and mummyji hold

shagun thals in their hands... maan and geet still lost in this sweet

shock..mom make them sit on the chairs... maan and geet lost their

words only thanks their elders from heart through heart for this

special surprise..both were feeling a known feeling...


hit me

Zindagi mein aaj lamhe khass aa gaye.. {{special moments have come in life}}

Aate aate dono ke dil pass aa gaye.. {{two hearts have come together}} -2

Mom and dad come forward and do aarti of maaneet..put tika on their forehead..

Tere kadmon pe hi rasta thehra hai mera...

{{my road has stopped at ur footsteps}}

meri aankhon ki toh manzil chehra hai tera..

{{ur face is my eye's destination}}

Tu hi tu hai, tu hi tu hai {{just you,only you are}}

Khawon ki dua.. {{the one of my dreams}}

Tu hi tu hai, tu hi tu hai {{just you,only you are}}

ik mera khuda {{my god}}

maaneet both were blushing and looking down... not able to believe...

Yeh dil seene mein tha par kabhi dhadka nhi tha...

{{ my heart have never beaten}}

Yeh teri aahat ise de gayi dhadkan...

{{now it beats for you}}

Ki udti hai yeh neende

{{ my sleep has flown away}}

ki wo ankhon pe hai karwat...

{{ he is always in my eyes}}

Hui mehsoos pehli baar yeh rimjhim...

{{feel the rain for the first time}}

Now mom put duppata on geet head's...

Tu hi tu hain, tu hi tu hain

{{just you,only you are}}

jeene ki ada..

{{the way to live}}

Tu hi tu hain tu hi tu hain

{{just you, only you are}}

sanson ki hawa..

{{my breath}}

Tu hi tu hai, tu hi tu hai

{{just you,only you are}}

Khawon ki dua..

{{the one of my dreams}}

Tu hi tu hai, tu hi tu hai

{{just you,only you are}}

ik mera khuda

{{my god}}

Now mummyji and papaji come forward and present maan shagun(dress watch chain..)

Sitare bhi wahi hai wahi aaj chand bhi hai...

{{the stars and the moon is the same}}

Magar aaj roshni hai kal se kuch zyada...

{{but it brighter today}}

Ki teri hi nazar ne dikhaye laakh rang hai..

{{ your eyes gave shown lacks of colours}}

Dadu and dai come and present geet a neck piece..and bless them,

Now darji and beeji come and present maan gifts..

Tere bin tha yeh mausam kal talak sada...

{{without you this season is plain}}

Tu hi tu hain, tu hi tu hain

{{just you,only you are}}

jeene ki ada..

{{the way to live}}

Tu hi tu hain tu hi tu hain

{{just you, only you are}}

sanson ki hawa..

{{my breath}}

Then they make them stand and do ring exchange.. both were shivering and sweating with faster beating heart.. both can feel each other over filled emotions...after ring ceremony cake come and they cut cake and feed each other...

Tu hi tu hai, tu hi tu hai

{{just you,only you are}}

Khawon ki dua..

{{the one of my dreams}}

Tu hi tu hai, tu hi tu hai

{{just you,only you are}}

ik mera khuda

{{my god}}

Both lost in each other eyes they read and understand what emotion is other one is going through...

Press and media taking pics of the event because its the very big

event...in whole party maaneet busy not get time for each other..

After in party finish they come back mansion...but in different cars

geet with mom dad and maan with darji and dadu..

Next - most awited...maan's plan in action...

ok ok i know i break my promise to give maan's plan so many time thats why i finish birthday in hurry so that i can gave maan's plan in next update and this time no changes..

i surely give u that...


thanks for ur likes and comments😊

plz ignore my spelling and grammar mistakes😃


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Insane Lover


Edited by rubykatariya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update maaneet friends r tooo good..always wid dem nd maan flirtung wid geet in her room yar kahi b shuru ho jate hai gret...dey really enjoyed deir day by doin masti...nd finally dey r engaged moved one step ahead in deir relationship...grat update next soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
haayee loved their romance dr lovely ud and lovely song too...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow lovely lovely update dear..my maaneet's birthday celebration was very very lovely scenes..my geet's birthday gift to my maan,morning romance was lovely..my maaneet surprise from they family wow superbb..my maaneet are in cloud nine..im so happy tat my maaneet got engaged,..i love te update so so so so much..waiting for my maan in action.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update...
maneet got a lovely shocking gift for their bday..
maneet's moments was so cute..
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Posted: 12 years ago
IT FINALLY ENGAGED WAITING FPR NEXT



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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved maaneet moments
sweet surprise for maaneet
loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
mind blowing that was wonderful surprise for parents for maaneet...
waiting for maan's plan

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