virman FF You are my everything PART 7(pg 15) - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
very nice ff !! love the way u describe virmans feelings !! please pm me next parts !
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
really very nice update
Sweet moments b/w dem was just awesome
Liked it
Cont Soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Awesome Work I Cant Believe Its Ur First Tym That Too On VirMan Amazing Concept And Writing
I Love How Manvi Has Realised Her Love And How Manvi's Reaction Towards Virat Is Amazing Virat So Beautiful
Beautifully Written x
I Love It And Thanksz For The PM Dear
Update Soon And Please PM Me When U Do

Ps: If U Dont Mind Could U Please Keep An Index On The First page It Will Be Easier For Other People To Read What U Have Written So Far

Thanksz xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Vry nyc update...luvd it
Update soon nd thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Nice update... Loved how Manvi was expecting Virat's compliment..
Poor Virat.. he doesn't have the slightest of idea of what is going in his bandariya's head... Hope he finds out soon..
Nice update 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update I love how you give both sides POV awesome update continue soon and do pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice... Manvi wanting to luk pretty for virat was cute... Virat's reaction was awesome... Sad for him tat Manvi dint cum bac to her sherni mode... Well bt he managed to make her smile... Virat cant u see da luv in her eyes... Looking fwd for da party... Precap says its gonna be too interesting... Update part b soon... Thanx for pm:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Note:
I will post the update within 24 hours. I got caught up in my OS which is now an FF :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 2B

There is awkward silence in the car. It was too much for Virat. Lately he could not read her mind and that was irritating him. Like right now she was looking outside the window, occasionally she would glance his way and give him a small smile. Why is she acting like this? This is not the Manvi that I know. Did she find out about my feelings for her? No that can't be but why is she so distant from me! Manvi please tell me whats going on before I turn insane.

Manvi thinking to herself Manvi what are you doing? If you stay silent and awkward like this he will know that something is wrong. Remember you decided to be his partner only? Manvi you have to do this, he should never know about your feelings; for his own good.

Manvi decides to break the ice.

Manvi- "Partner are we there yet?"

Her attempt at small conversation surprises Virat. What now she is talking to me again? She sounds her normal self. He answers back saying "No but we are almost there."

This was getting too awkward so Manvi decides to tease him. "Aab itne dhire gadhi chalaoge toh hum kal pahuchenge." (if you drive so slow we will reach tomorrow.)

She never failed to surprise him. He could tell that she was trying to act normal but he had no idea why she was acting. Drama queen he thought. He decided to play along so he answered "Aab tum itni moti ho ki bechari meri gadhi tumhare bhar se thakke slow motion mein chal rahi hai." (Since you are so fat my poor car is tired so it moving in slow motion.)

Manvi was infuriated now. How dare he call her fat! She was anything but fat. "Tum tum tumhe pata bhi nahin hai ki ek ladki se kaise baat karni chahiye." (you you, you don't even know how to talk to a girl).

"Ladki kahan?" (girl, where?) said Virat looking around. He further added "tum apni baat kar rahi ho? Aare tum toh hee man ho ladki nahin" (you are talking about yourself? You are hee man not a girl!)

Now Manvi could not take it anymore.

Agitated she blurted out "tumhari himmat kaise hiu? Maine itne time lekar tumhare liye tayar ho ke ayi aur tum mujhe hee man bol rahe ho!" (how dare you? I took so much time to get ready, for you and you are calling me hee man!). uh oh she thought. Manvi apna mu bandh nahin karsakti? (Manvi can't you shut up?)

Virat could not help smiling at that. She dressed up for him!!! Now he understood why she was sad earlier, it was because he did not compliment her. Does it mean that she likes him too? I have to find out, Virat had a huge grin.

Yeh ullu ki tarah kyun hasraha hai. Kahin isse shuck toh nahin ho gaya? Okay it was time for damage control, " Woh woh I meant ke tumhare dost ki party mein jane ke liye mein tyaar hui (actually I meant that I got ready for your friend's party", said Manvi to negate her previous statement.

Yeah right thought Virat.

They arrived at the venue and Virat parked the car. He got out of his seat, walked around and opened Manvi's door. He extended his hand for her to take it. Now this was a test of Virat to try and decipher Manvi's feelings towards him. The "Manvi", the sherni would never take his hand; she hates accepting help but if she likes him then she will take his hand. Virat waited in anticipation.

Now Manvi was in a dilemma. She wanted to hold his hand but if she did he would be suspicious. It is just holding hands. What the hell , thought Manvi and she was about to put her hand in his when she heard someone call her name " Manvi."

"Manvi" exclaimed Shashank.

Guys do you think I should take the story forward quicker instead of analyzing their each expression? What do you think? Am i boring you? Let me know please.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Shashank???
Aww Virat Know Has A Doubt Turn This Doubt Into Yakeen That Manvi Loves Him Too Please
Virat Is So Cute
Wonder Who This Shashank Is. is He Guna Cause Some Jealousy Or A Kebab Mein Haddi???
Update Soon And PM Me Please
Thankszxxx

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