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Posted: 13 years ago
This was damn nice shonu !!!!

Nd welcome back !!!!

Pls PM me cuz there's some error in Lyke button so i cannot click on that !!! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome :)

Omg! Kria...why did she do that?

And rey left?? :O

Awww..Vicky! :)

Update soon.
dancersqueen thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
tina ...update karo...ur demand is completed...
dancersqueen thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey tina...jaldi se update karo...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi hi hi. . . .
Demand completd. . .
So we want update. . .
N dnt 4get to pm me wen u update nxt. . . .
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Posted: 13 years ago
Well.. I read all the 35 parts in 1 day...
Its really amazing...
Luved it...
Plz pm me.. I hav sent u request... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey tina really sorry for commenting late.

This was superb..
What did i just read Kria commited sucide but y????

And Rey is he mad or what when He didnt know much he loved her and now he is nt ecven gonn alisten to her.Gosh.Feel like putting some sense into him,..

Thanks for pkm..

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Posted: 13 years ago
How can Rey b so rude with his luv, wid his Kria?
She needs him d most n i'm sure Vicky wil bring him back in her life.
Update fast n i really wish everything gets fine well wid u.
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Posted: 13 years ago

CHAPTER 36

thnk u so much evry1 4 ur cmnts n likes..4 those who asked me y did kriya commit suicide,ryt nw i cn only tell u tat bcoz she ws so much frustrated ov her lyf..medicine z tuff n then her personal lyf probs forced her 2!!bt ll xplain it in sme epis later..ryt nw just enjoy the story as its progressing!!hope u like it thou thr r sme sad epis b4 the original DHAMAKA epi in wich rey n kriya ll b united!

Kriya got discharged 4m the hospital aftr 2 weeks..she ws feeling much better.bt she ws missing rey a lot.y wsnt he wid her when she needed him the most???she tried calling him many tymes bt thr ws no response..nobody has yet told her abt the blast her personal lyf has got..she wont b able 2 take it,tats wot they all thot so they mutually decided its among the best interest ov kriya nt 2 hav her face 2 face wid the reality yet:nt until she recovers completely..vick on the othr hand ws making countless tries 2 bring the situation back 2 normal.. he went 2 rey many a times 2 explain him tat kriya z nt responsible 4 the miseries tat their family went thru cx ov pinky.it ws pinky s fault bt rey ws adamant on his decision nt 2 4give kriya 4 his sister s plight.

V:bro!plx understand..she loves u more than any1 in the wrld..she z gng thru the most difficult phase ov her lyf.her probs havnt ended yet n here u tryng 2 create another 1 4 her..she doesn't evn knw who u r yet??i ve seen the love,the pain n the distress in her eyes 4 u.since the tym she regained consciousness her eyes hav been searching 4 u.plx dnt do this 2 her

R:wot abt pinky vick??wot abt our sis damnit!! Hw cn I 4get tat what she did 2 her??i cant 4giv her..

V:bro!i give u my wrd.i saw the whole incident.pinky tried 2 push kriya n she ws tryng 2 save herself..bro plx..

R:vick!plx leave me alone..

So vick went away..he knew tat rey had made his decision n he wont bck off..so he dcded 2 go abt the othr way 2 deal this prob..he picked up his phone n dialed a no

V:hi!vicky here.i wanna meet u in 10 mins..hotel _

Voice:''

V:ok c u!bye!!

2 months passed n yet thr ws no news of eagle..kriya tried in evry way n nw she ws getting acoustomed 2 her new lyf widout eagle.she ws havng a feeling ov being totally worthless.she ws shattered 4m inside bt has learnt 2 stay calm.nw she knew he wont ever come bck 2 her n she has 2 get gng wiout him.1 thng tat kept piercing her heart ws y did he left her alone?did she o anything wrong or wot??

K(self thot)may b he gotta knw abt shivam 4m him or sm1 else.mayb I ws appealing 2 him anymore.mayb he s got othr worthy ppl in his life..stop thnkng abt him kriya.he ws always a Casanova so he must hav found sme new girl..hw stupid ov me 2 love n trust him?i wish I had never met him.anyways wotevr it ws,he ws the most beautiful dream ov my lyf..i had 2 important men in ma lyf.i loved both 4m ma true heart.both had many thngs in common n both left me in the middle ov nowhr widout any valid rzn.mayb em ominous!!mayb love z nt meant 4 me!!

Karan had come bck 4m his mission n he ws regularly visiting kriya.yet he ws unaware tat kriya has started taking IV morphine 2 calm herself.she ws v nyc 2 her.he ws her only frnd left in the wrld whom she cn trust.vick ws a classmate,v nyc n sweet bt nt the true sense ov a frnd cx he always remined her ov her teddy,her reyaansh who ws once hers.both brothers had v similar features..sharon n swayam were a couple so they had v less tym 4 her.it ws only karan who sat by her side always n helped her wenevr she needed.she feared 1 day she might lose him.

It ws end-of-term nw n they wr gng bck 2 their homes.kriya ws v happy 2 meet her parents again.she farewelled all her frnds n went 2 her home..

Evry1 ws happy 2 c kriya bck.kriya also loved 2 b home thou tat brought bck all her childhood memories!!she went 2 all those places she used 2 go b4!nw it wsnt agonizing 4 her.she used 2 enjoy it under the effect of morphine.thou karan ws sensing smthng strange in her on their hrs long skype video chat,the shine in her eyes ws fading bt he concluded 4m the past events its cx ov her loneliness so he decided 2 end it compltely..

so he took a leave 4m duty n went straight 2 her home.he ws an orphan so he has 2 talk abt marriage all by himself..kriya s parents were very happy 2 hav such a wonderful proposal 4 their daughter.karan ws a perfect n complete match 4 kriya in all ways n he loved her also..they accepted the offer in the 1st go.nw only asking kriya ws left..she had gone out 4 a walk.wen she came bck,she ws surprized 2 c karan thr..she ran n hugged karan tightly..this shocked her parents,means they were gng out already..

k:oh karan!wot a nyc surprize!!i loved it!!

ka:u knw i love giving surprizes sweety!!
k:n i love ur surprizes(wid a wide smile on her face)
kriya s mother took her 2 another room n told her abt karan s proposal.she ws shocked..
k:no mom!!i cnt do tat
mom:wot??r u kidding me??u wr gng out.werent u??
k:no mom!nt at all!!who said so??
mom:it ws obvious dear!!
k:he z such a gud frnd mom!bt nthng else.n i dunn wanna marry tat early
mom:its nt early kriya!u r 22 nw n its the ryt tym
k:mom i ve 2 complete ma studies
mom:studies cn b complted aftr marriage dear!!
k:bt mom!!
mom:no but vut!!giv it a thot kriya.nobody z gonna love u like tat!!
they came out..
mom:karan!u gonna stay here wid us as long as u r here
ka:no aunty!thnks i ll stay in my mess
mom:we r ur own family.isnt it??
ka:yes it z
mom:then dnt say no
ka:ok as u say
mom:kriya show him his room
k:ok mom
n he went 2 show him his room.harilaal took all his luggage thr.he sat n kriya ws abt 2 leave wen he clled her 4m behind
ka:hey kriya!!wots wrong dear??
k:karan cn we talk abt this later??
ka:ok
n she went bck 2 her room..she ws so distrbed n kept thnkng wot lyf z heading 4?she never thot she cud b anyy1 s else aftr teddy bt nw she belonged 2 1 man,another man tat ws eagle..the love ov her lyf who left her widout any apparent rzn n nw karan,nt again.she dint wanna giv life another chance 2 ditch her 1ce again

so she took a shot ov morphine n called karan..seeing the caller id karan icked up the phone

ka:hi kriya!did u 4get em in ur home??u cud hav come n meet me!!

k:karan cn we meet smwhr??alone

ka:ya anytym babe!!

k:ok meet me outside in the lawn aftr 5 mins

ka:as u say maam!!

n kriya cut the call.karan got ready quickly n reached the garden.kriya ws already thr..

ka:ya babes!wots up?

K:y karan y??y u wanna b a part ov this??even aftr knowing my truth,my past everythng..

Ka:kriya I knw everythng bt I also knw u!u were never wrong.only the circumstances were wrong n I wanna make evrythng right!!

K:u knw karan!nothng wud b ryt.whoever comes in my lyf comes 2 leave me n I dunn wanna lose myself n my best frnd again!!

Ka:u wont need 2!i prms I wont let u!!

K:evry1 promises in the beginning.later they go.em omnious.dunn try 2 ruin ur lyf wid me

Ka:it wont b ruined kriya trust me.i d b the happiest person in the wrld.i ll never let any problem touch ur lyf.i ll always make u smile.i ll treat u like a princess..plz marry me

K:u knw I cn never love u

Ka:I just need u n ur love ll come

K:no karan I only loved him.wont love any1 ever again

Ka(smiling)I knw n I cn adjust wid tat

K:y r u dng this??y r u so nyc karan??

Ka:cx I love u kriya..n I cnt c u sad

Both hugged each other tight.aftr coming home kriya gav her consent 4 the marriage.evry1 ws so happy..sharon ws dancing wid joy.finally she cn c her sis happy like before.finally her bad days ll b over..

Swayam told this 2 vicky who ws having mixed feelings.he ws happy 4 kriya bt sad tat she cudnt b his bhabhi wich ws his dream since childhood..

V(wid teary eyes)thank god finally kriya got the right man!m v happy 4 her

Sw:ya it z!n em sorry vick..i knw it ws ur dream 2 c her as ur bhabhi..

V:ya!it ws ma dream bt wotevr bro did wid her z nt acceptable or forgiveable..i wish she remains happy n 4gets bro!!

sw:yeah!lets hope so!

n he hung up!meanwhile rey ws mentally disturbed n cudnt concentrate on anythng.he ws thnkng hw his lyf carved up ways 4 him?he ws a happy man sme tym ago wid love,peace,harmony evrythng a man cn ask 4 n in a split of seconds his evrythng went away 4m his hands like grains of sand..his love turned outta b a traitor who deceived him long ago n snatched the peace n happiness of his family!!his thots were interrupted by vicky!
v:hey bro!hz u dng??
r:ya vick!em gud.u tell??wanna try another round 4 kriya??she doesnt deserve it vick!!
v:no bro!this tym u r wrong.em nt here 2 take her side cx its 2 late nw.just came here 2 spend smtym wid ma brother..
r:late?y?wot happend??
v:nthng ov ur interest!!anyways leave it!!so hz IAF btw??n hw did ur last mission go??
r:it ws cool.loved it
(cut the crap,cmng 2 kriya s home)
the preparations 4 the engangement were on full swing.many beautiful traditional dresses were being selected 4 kriya n matching jewellery ws brought.it ws the 1st marriage ceremony 4 the ghais n they wanted 2 make it special!!
PRECAP:
kriya n karan s engangement preparations
rey comes 2 knw ov the truth
part 37
Edited by tinatartari - 13 years ago

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