WU: Khatre Mein CID Officer - II (28th July, 2012)

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Ravi

@Jurassic_Shark

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Debasree

@debasree04

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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanx Ravi for the update !!! 👏
Lovely emoticons 😃

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sherdilali

@sherdilali

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

thanks for such a nice update👍🏼

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cargopants

@cargopants

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

@DEMONSTAR

thanks for this awesome update 😃 ⭐️
very nice use of EMOs 👏

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

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Posted: 13 years ago

Honestly after seeing these Lovely Emocations, I m forcing to read the WU... Fabulous and Thank You DEMONSTAR...👏👏

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice update...but how come you are using Abhijeet and Abhi sir and Daya and Daya sir in different places...you are usually consistent.

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Ravi

@Jurassic_Shark

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: visrom
Nice update...but how come you are using Abhijeet and Abhi sir and Daya and Daya sir in different places...you are usually consistent.

I usually refer to him both as Abhijeet and Abhi sir. Will try to keep an eye on this, alright. 😊

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

No...that's ok...I wasn't complaining. 😊

Having read your story just a couple of days back, the after-effects were still on my mind. 😆

Also, where you have narrated the flashback, some parts are italicized, some are not...you seemed to have done it in a hurry or were distracted.

Edited by visrom - 13 years ago

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GIRL_SHERLOCK

@GIRL_SHERLOCK

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

Thanx for the Update !! 😊

Cool Smileys !! 😎

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Ravi

@Jurassic_Shark

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: visrom
Also, where you have narrated the flashback, some parts are italicized, some are not...you seemed to have done it in a hurry or were distracted.

Nope, that was intentional because I thought it would be convenient for the reader to have the trailer portion distinct from the present events. I tried using a different colour, but it felt a little odd so just italicized them.