Fate-Mate Thread # THREE (3) Chapter 29 - Page 2

His mission of getting himself detached from her.

His mission to keep her away from him.

His mission to avoid her.

His mission to ignore her.

His mission to forget her.

His mission to not think about her.

His mission''..

How just one phone call had totally interrupted his mission.

Naturally aranv, its your concern towards her, yes she means a lot to you, infact a lot more than you know. you can never ever be successful in your mission no matter whether you are with her or without her in life, coz woh ab tumhare har rooh mein bus chuka hai.

Part E

KC another awesome update, i had tears in my eyes while i read their phone conversation the away arnav was talking to her the way he tried to avoid her, the way he tried to be rude, i am again loss of words, i cant explain the turmoil. it was so emotional, i was so fantastic.

ASR: Hi!

Khushi: Thank god you picked up the phone.

ASR: What happened?

Khushi: Nothing, someone bumped into me, I dropped my phone and it fell apart. Anyway, where are you?

ASR: Why?

Khushi: What?

ASR: Why?

Khushi: What? What do you mean why?

ASR: Why do you want to know where I am?

Khushi: Oh, I was just asking. Sorry''

KC i loved these lines. i could clearly visualise Arnav's expression on this. This guy has so much depth.

Another fantastic portrayel of Khushi's emotions, her hidden feelings

Khushi: I am so sorry, my phone died, I haven't had a chance to charge it all day. I was at work then I went to college, then the practice, then when I came home I was too busy getting ready, then I came here and totally forgot to charge it.

ASR: Why are you explaining me all that?

She was quiet. She didn't know why she was explaining him anything. It's not like he cared. Why would he care if her phone died? Why would he care if their conversation was disrupted because her phone died? Why would he care why she didn't charge her phone all day?

For some reason, she didn't like that question of his. It didn't sound good.

KC is was again blown away with this emotion, loved it thoroughly, trust me i would have felt exactly if i was in khnushi's place may be thats the reason i connect with this FF so much. You write so simple yet how well you describe such minute yet very very important things in details.

Khushi: Nothing, why do you need an explanation? 👏 best line of the update. Such a simple line yet so much depth, so much pain in it.

Part F

Another very natural scene we often do during our courtship

Khushi: I should go now, everyone is looking for me. Priya will get mad if she finds me in the room talking''..I will go now, bye!

ASR: Bye!

They both waited for the other to hang up, but no one did. They just kept the phone still holding on their ear, without saying anything, without hanging up.

They just stayed like that listening to each other's silence.

Why? They didn't know''.

I loved the way you made arnav be so firm on his question, he was asking her with so much authority, i loved it, it sent me goose bumps, and this time i could very well foresee her expression, biting her lips, panting heavily, little confused, feeling 2-3 butterflies in her stomach.

Hey Khushi sweety, why are you so eager to talk to him? the whole time in the party either you are thinking about him, or you are talking to him, or you are charging your phone so that you can talk to him, or you are trying not to miss him (still thinking about him not to miss him) do you realize that? I guess no. well KC you are the only person who can make her realize no one else.

Lo ji karlo baat mendi lawate lagwate bhi aap inke barein mein hi soch rahe ho, aap mendi ka rang gehra hoga hi na aur ab to aap unhe chu bhi diya, chalo koi baat nahi, unka shirt thoda kharab kar diya par uske badle mein mendi ka rang aur gehra ho jayega jab woh aapko apni haathon se khilayega aur aapke liye woh akshar "A" dhond nikalega.

I can sense lot of problem now, will khushi confess that the letter "A" is not meant for ASR? or will she not? interesting. very interesting.

Well i have a little thing in my mind, will share it in pm, again no pressure if you dont feel like incorporating it.

Lovely update. Keep it up