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Congrats on new thread
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congrats for the new thread and waiting eagerly for the update
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yehhh waiting
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PS:Add anuffpm for PM regarding Updates
--Anu

Part 17

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"Princess, the slave is here for your service today' your wish is my command" This brings smile and tears both in Geet's eyes'. She goes down and hugs him'. Then separates herself and in childish way wipes her tears

"Make me happy, make my pain go away' make me feel safe" he kept his hands on her lips to stop her from talking further but feel of his fingers on her lips send shivers down her spine and Maan feels somewhat same and immediately removes his hand.

Geet was on top of her world seeing Maan like this with her' this was more than she could dream about her Khadoos pati.

After getting fresh Maan came to geet after a while

"So what's your plan" Maan broke her thoughts'

"Plan kya ho sakta hai.. kabhi sapne me bhi nahi socha aisa bhi hoo sakta hai' then what will I plan for this day'"

"Geet!!! " Maan shaked his hand in front of her eyes

"Yes, no Plan" "Matlab?? " "matlan kya.. I want to stay at home"

"Geet, are you understanding what you are telling' I have special off for you today and you want us to stay at home'"

"Hogaya' now he is back to his self' slave my foot"

"Yes, we will stay at home" "GEE-EEET!!! " "This is how you treat your princess.. ho hee nahi sakta aapse yeh sab' my PC is only good"

Maan somewhere didn't like that but again he has to keep his promise and his cool.. he really needed to take her pain away'he calmed down

"Ok, listen' after this I will have no time to get off.. try to understand.. you always want to go out with me"

Geet was confused.. he was right but she also did not want to loose opportunity to have cozy time with him

"And what exactly will we do staying at home?? "

"We can do a lot in a room together' you are going to do whatever I say, right" she said with naughtiness in her eyes and teasing him. But his one sharp look on that was enough to tell her she should not go in that direction'

"I think you should stop reading these romantic novels'. It will help you have better control on your mind'"

"yeloo, yeh to kuch kerte nahi abb novel ka hee to shahara hai mujhe"

Geet had no option.. well she knew she will not get this opportunity, at least anywhere sooner

"We will go to see London and then shopping" "Geet in a day we can do either not both" Geet made her face and turned..

"Ok come, I will manage" she immediately turned to him with big smile.

While she got ready and they were about to go out Nakul knocked the door

"Sir, why don't you have breakfast, aapne bhi to 2 din se kuch nahi khaya theek se"

Geet looked at Maan horrified while Maan looked at Nakul as if he will strangle him with bare hands for blurting this out exactly in front of Geet.

Now Geet was not listening to him.. she forced him to have his breakfast first and then they will go anywhere' Maan had to listen to her today' he was giving killing looks to nakul.

Then at last they left.. ..

Geet did not want togo to any special place' she just wanted to roam around with him' she placed her arm within his arm.. Maan smiled knowing her and let her do what she wished'

It was bright sunny day and they just roamed around sight seeing the city London' Geet's happiness has no bounds.. she was out with Maan alone' she kept clung to him whole time and.. Maan ' however hard he tried, he could not get his eyes off her' she glowed like magic with happiness'

The inner happiness of just being with him, she was jumping, hugging him time to time.. pulling him from here to there'he just allowed her to do whatever she wishes'

Being her slave was not bad after all.

Maan felt she is a beautiful poem who have just come out from a book' she was Geet.

It was actually he feeling fresh after so many days'he felt like he was breathing a fresh air with her'Or else his life was immersed in analyzing world Money, students, books, research and so on'

He have no time for these things and today when he was out with her.. he was living a complete new life.. How far away she was from practicality of world' no worries she has of anything' just like a baby.

Then at lunch time Maan took her to some well reputed restaurant.. it was Monday, so mostly office people or high business class people where there..

Geet did not like the seriousness and pulled him out of there'. then she took him to an area where students gathered and how they took their food in groups and how fun they had'

She then took him to Mall. She wanted to buy some western dress but felt shy.. she kept looking at the shop' Maan saw her'

"Do you wanna go in'" "I have no idea of these dresses"

"I'll help you, come" and he selected some dresses for her and when she tried them and showed him Maan was completely bowled over' she looked out of world. Her beautiful structure shaped out so well.. so much yougness, so much youthness'shinning skin.

He really needed a strong heart and lot of self control to tell her what he was going to say but he had to he thought.

At night at home after they had dinner

"Geet, I want to talk something serious with you'"

"No, after such a nice day I don't want to hear anything serious"

"Geet, try to understand.. its important that to listen sincerely" she placed pillow on her head and pretended to sleep.

"Geet" he picked her up and made her sit . "I want to talk about our marriage"

"I know, I don't deserve you but still we are keeping this marriage.. now good night"

She again tried to sleep when Maan again pulled her up and made her sit

"LISTEN" he said loudly' Geet made faces and sat down but it was his next sentence that broke her sleepiness

"It's other way round, I don't deserve you" she kept looking at him for a while but then broke out into loud laughter'

Then she went infront of mirror and checked herself from and back'

"Am I that special?"

"Yes, you are special with beautiful dream and I am not a right person for you'I cannot fulfill your beautiful dreams Geet.. I have different priorities. You really deserve a real prince charming for yourself Geet, not a Dushta Danav like me"

Geet really have so many dreams but all her dreams were connected to him.. he in any form was her biggest dream.. but Geet did not know how to put her view very intelligently and she said'

"I liked Beauty and Beast more than Cindrella, when I was a kid.. Now Good night" and she went to sleep, leaving Maan helpless and not giving him chance to explain what he wanted to.

Next: PC to gaya

Edited by tellyme - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hoye hoye...aab what will the beast do to this beauty...?????
Edited by sarah_zaisha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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"I liked Beauty and Beast more than Cindrella, when I was a kid.. Now Good night"

fell in love wid d line..
explained in gist geet's entire mind set.. her innocence!!
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Maan is absolutly right...Geet deservs someone special...maybe he realizes that he want to be the one when an other man comes in Geet's life...i don't want him to hurt her...she deserves to be a princess and nothing less...

p.s really beautiful update...thx a lot
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update...
lats sentence by geet was just superb

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