A poem: Bazaar mein hua neelaam, ek haseen khwaab - Page 3

i don't have words to express!!!!!!

Originally posted by: sarah_kelly

i don't have words to express!!!!!!

Tamashaa dekh rahen hain, namard yahan tamaam,

Ruswa ho rahi Draupadi, Sita ho rahi badnaam;

Jab miloge apne khuda se, Kya doge jawaab?

Ki ho raha tha neelam, koi haseen khwaab?

loved these lines!!!!!!!

Thanks Gayu🤗
That u took time to let me know which lines you liked have expressed a lot sweets😃

I was a bit wary at using deity names but since i used them as metaphor for the women i guess i saved my skin.

OMG, this was aweosme👏! Cant explain how I fell after reading it, im speechless ,u r really a gifted writer!

Originally posted by: chitra_rao

OMG, this was aweosme👏! Cant explain how I fell after reading it, im speechless ,u r really a gifted writer!

The last two lines brought tears in my eyes. loved it

Jab miloge apne khuda se, Kya doge jawaab?

Ki ho raha tha neelam, koi haseen khwaab?

Thanks Chitra 🤗
For letting me know that it touched you... 😃

Originally posted by: siddhi209

Omg wow. Mashallah you are a very talented writer. This one touched my heart. Amazing how words can be so powerful, almost had me in tears. Beautiful 👏

Thanks Siddhi 🤗

As my words touched Ur heart... so did Ur comment dear 😃

Originally posted by: tweetie19

Sneha, you're an amazing writer...the words touched my heart...hats off to u...

Glad to know that it had the desired effect on u tweetie19 🤗

tweetie19...Is that what they call u here dear or they address u with Ur name?

👏 Amazing ⭐️ Unfortunately, true. Beautifully put down in words. Loved it. As beautiful , truthful and perfect as it can be...Keep it up 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Monu_Deewani

👏 Amazing ⭐️ Unfortunately, true. Beautifully put down in words. Loved it. As beautiful , truthful and perfect as it can be...Keep it up 👍🏼

Thanks Shaili dear 🤗

For taking the time to read and comment...

Sadly...Its just the tip of the iceberg... so many horrendous acts of domestic violence go unnoticed or rather underwraps