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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
Awosome fuzzy, plz update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
Good going .. loved how you portrayed Khushi .. especially, how she was still trying to cover up for Arnav, so much like the Khushi I love 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Pls continue soon!.
Want to kno what buaji does...pls pm me!

ThANKS!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2


Buaji answers the phone, it was naniji... She had called to ask how she was feeling...


Buaji took a deep breath and said... I am dying. Please can all of you come here to my house immediately...


Khushi and Arnav are looking at her in awe, buaji disconnects the phone and glares at Arnav and said... go and bring them all here NOW...




Then buaji turns her face towards Khushi, seeing her cry, she pulls her towards her and hugs her, then she says I will fix everything for you, don't cry, you don't have to suffer anymore... Arnav seeing Khushi cry reached for her to comfort her, Buaji sees his hand coming towards Khushi, glares at him which stops him in mid air... as if telling him don't you dare. He clenches his hand, never felt so helpless in his life...leaves.




After 30 minutes the door bell rings at buajis house, she opens the door, the whole family is standing there except Arnav... Mami ji sees that buaji looked fine, there was nothing wrong with her and started her yapping, why are we here, why did you call us all here? Your daughters and you only know how to ruin our lives, buy one, get one free daughter in laws we have in the house...




Buaji s temper had reached its boiling point and she blasted, BUS...enough... I have had enough of you and your nonsense, waving her finger at her, not a word against my daughters, I m still alive and I will not hear a word against them... I will break your finger if you so much as point at them...




Nani ji comes to the rescue she settles them all down and they all sit...


Nani ji turns and sees Khushi standing at the far end of the room, tears streaming down her face, she makes a move towards her, Khushi bitya, why are you crying?...


Buaji intervenes and stops her, says you can not touch her for now... Please sit and tells Payal to go comfort Khushi...




Payal runs and hugs her... Buaji sits down and takes a deep breath and looks directly in nani ji s eyes and says, I respect you a lot and you are our senior, and I am Sorry I had to call you here, becoz what I have to tell you could not wait...


Buaji continues...now you all know about Shyam and his reality...


Anjali looks at Buaji but does not react... Buaji continues, do you know why and how Arnav married Khushi? There are 2 versions of this story, one is Khushi's and one is Arnav's... Buaji tells them Khushi's version first in which Khushi protects Arnav and she was nearly done and the door opened and Arnav walked in...




Buaji looked at him and said, how was the wild goose chase, I already knew your nani was on the way here and sent you away so I could have a head start...


Arnav looks around the room and his eyes settle on Khushi, who was still crying, and the whole family was in a shock... Buaji offers him to sit down and says, now I want you to tell everyone, what you told me, about how and why you married Khushi...

Arnav goes and sits by Anjali, she holds his hand and tells Arnav...you don't need to...but Buaji intervenes, Anjali bitya, this time is mine,... I will not let anyone interfere and her eyes goes directly to mamiji...no one interrupts, as if warning mamiji...




Arnav starts talking and tells them everything,

FB, Payal's wedding, black mailing, sindoor and mangal sutar... Then Arnav continued that at nite I made her sleep and Khushi interrupts...please don't make it worse than it already is...just stop it.

Buaji turns and glares at Khushi and tells Payal to take her inside... But Khushi did not budge, there was a silence in the room, a silence so thick, it could be cut by a knife...



Buaji wipes her tears and gets up, everyone is too shocked to speak... Anjali is busy playing with her bangles as if she didnt hear anything...


Buaji puts her hands together in front of nani ji and says, please leave, from today we dont have any relationship with your family...I dont know what will I tell their parents...im glad they are not home today...how will her babu ji take all this...




Nani ji comes forward and holds her hands and says, Madhumati ji, please dont say that... Buaji moves back...




Naniji says, Arnav and Khushi are still married, Buaji says NO, the contract is over...


Nani ji looking at Arnav...was a contract signed?

Before Arnav could answer, Buaji intervened and looked at Arnav n said... contract or no contract, your grandson will have no problem getting a new one signed by my daughter... The marriage is over, as far as I am concerned... They could hear Khushi sobbing... Arnav comes towards Buaji and says Khushi is my wife, in his ASR tone, I have a right on her, I will take her away...




Buaji glares at him and says, you have no right on her anymore... You can leave and dont ever come back...Arnav looks helplessly at nani ji...


Nani tells the rest of the family to go n sit in the car...She didnt want to make the matters worst than they all ready were...She looks at Buaji and says...plz think about it all and I ll come in the morning n we can talk about it n come to a conclusion...But Buaji was adamant n says... Im sorry...its all over...Payal is also not going to ur house...cause I dont know how shes being treated there... If Akash wants her back...he has to come n speak to me first...




Naniji looked towards the 2 girls and then at Arnav n takes his hand and walks out...Arnav was reluctant to go...but he had no choice but to go...




RH... Everyone is silent and tensed... Naniji turned towards Arnav n said...What did u do? How could u? Did I raised u to do this???




Anjali was mum...deep in thoughts... Arnav was mum too...




Mamji...Oh im glad both the girls are where they should be...now I can get my Aksah to marry who I want him to marry...


Nanji glares at her n says...Be quiet manorma... do u even understand the seriousness of this situation...




Arnav was very worried... He didnt know what to do...He thought everything was under his control n now it looked as if everything had slipped off from his hands...He couldnt live without Khushi...no no...how will I breath... He saw his Di going up and followed her...




Anjali went and sat on the bed and Arnav sat beside her n said...Di plz do something...i cant live without khuhsi...i cant breath...i cant think of living my life without her...i love her very much...




Anjali...Just like I love Shyam...




Arnav sat up straight...What did u say DI??




Anjali...pretending as if she hadnt said anything...n said What chotey?? Im tired now...plz go I need to sleep...




Arnav couldnt believe his ears his Di was comparing her khushi with that shyam...He didnt say anything n just left...He went to Nani jis room and sat by her and said...What will we do??

Nanji... dont worry...You and I will both go to GH in the morning n try to fix it all...




Naniji sighed n said...why did u not tell me anything,Chotey...how could u do something like this...U know I felt like dying when u confessed all this...i can not even comprehend how and what khushi went though all this time... You have really hurt her...n she still tried to protect u...Thats typical of Khuhsi bitya...She can never be happy if ppl around her r not happy...It will be easy to convince her...but buaji...It will be very hard to convince her...Whatever image she had of u...is all washed off...




Arnav...plz do something...i have to talk to khuhsi...once only...n I will convince her...just one meeting...alone... Nani ji nods...ill see what I can do...




Next part... Arnav trying to talk to khushi...will he be able to convince her to return to RH...will naniji be able to convince buaji to send khuhsi and payal back to RH?? What is going on in Anjalis head? Will she make a deal with Arnav???


Part 3



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Edited by Fazila~ - 12 years ago


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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
Wow fuzzy dear, it was really awosome.
Liked the buaji.
Plz update soon. 👏
Edited by vkp1989 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
Awesome part 1 and 2. Please update soon.

I wish they show this on the show - it will be super fun to watch this and someone please knock sense into Anjali's head about Shyam creep - buaji and babuji please!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
I should have known... Anjali the manipulator... 😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
i hope arnav struggles lot...n khushi deserve a break fm dat madhouse...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
Amazing writing as usual...thank u :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
Fuzzy, go to Starplus,kick the cvs and improve TRPs w your storyline...

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