A poem for you all....J&B

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Posted: 19 years ago
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heya....i wrote a poem....thought i would share with all!


Lost love

They weep
In each others silence
Surrounded by nothing at all
Letting their tears fall
Amongst the dust of nothing
Telling no one of their anguish
Yet saying all
Their bodies seethe in agony
Of seperation
Death awaits them at every turn

As they are......
Lost without love
Lost without one another....

copyright sudha (sweetu)




Well actually i wrote it for my fan fiction....but still i thought i would post it on a seperate post to get views about the poem and what you all think of it!
Would really appreciate it!!

those who have read my ff....well...you might realise why i wrote such a poem....because it goes with the ff!!

would appreciate ur comments...as i have no idea how good i am at poetry!!
THANK YOU!
sweetu

p.s. guess who this poem is for😉....for J&B...it goes with my ff yaar!


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Posted: 19 years ago
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AWESOME sudha!!!

lool...its for jai-bani (i think! 😆 )

luv ya jaanu!!!.....brilliant poem!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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aww my jaan.....absaloutely beautiful!!

👏

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow...that was soooo touchinnnn 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow hun....dats beautiful.......dedicated to jai and abni
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Posted: 19 years ago
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AWESOME poem, Sudha!!

You should be a poet!!

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Edited by amisra - 19 years ago

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