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Posted: 13 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: GoDsLoVe

Hayeee rabba, naye thread ka ki haal ho gaya... mai update hi likh rahi hun, aaj pucka kar dungi, par please aaj morcha mat nikalo, kal nikal lena agar aaj update na ki to... pleaseee...



WHO U😲 waise confidence ke sath keh ri hai toh update milne ke asaar toh lag re hain moti par... teri chaalein kab badle uska bh bhrosa ni koi na...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: ..Chanakya...

Let me remix it


Yo Yo Honey Singh

Kya hua tera wada...

Ki ki huya tere wadde nu...

Where is d update...

Wo wo wo Kasam wo Irade nu...

Where is the Update...
We want the update..
Where where where is the Update..





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Ammi ur readers have got a great sense of humour🤣


ps : writer ki baaton mein aane ki koi zaroorat nai hai...aandolan jaari rakho jab tak update iss thread mein apna sthaan grehan nahin kar leti...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part-223 (as per your request, this part includes kids the most)

Angel: daddda..(armaan nodded) aap mumma kichy… kichy kalna (kissy karna)bad cheezi… (while shaking her finger,armaan's shocked and after a while picked angel in his arms)

A: acha daeda ko to pata hi nahi tha??? Aur aisha angel ko kisne kaha hai??

Angel: litu maami..

A: par angel to roj mumma daeda ki kissy karti hai to angel b bad cheezi karti hai???

Angel: litu maami.. kaaka kichy mumma-dadda, bala kaaka no kichy, bad cheezi… (ritu maami ne kaha tha ki bache mumma-daeda ko kissy kar sakte hai par bade kaake[elders] kiss nai kar sakte as it's a bad thing)

A: okkk… aur kya sikhaya aapki ritu aunty ne??

Angel: (showed him eyes and defending her maami) litu maami, aunty(she shaked her head)(ritu maami bolo, wo aunty nahi hai)

A: (laughed) okk baba sorry, aapki ritu maami ne aur kya bataya??

Angel: a,b,c,d… litu maami..bony bony jech papa.. (johny johny yes papa ritu maami ne sikhayi)

A: ye nahi, kissy ke bare mai… (angel puts hands on her mouth)

Angel: no kichy, (puts hand on armaan's eyes) gani cheezi ni dethe.. (gandi cheezi nai dekhte) eyej cose.. (eyes close)

A: ye bhi aapko ritu maami ne bataya???(angel blushed, armaan mumbled "iss ritu ki to mai band baja dunga, kya utt patang baatein sikhati hai meri beti ko" then caressing angel's hair) angel kissy karna gandi cheezi nahi hoti, jaise daeda angel ko kissy karte hai waise hi mumma ko bhi karte hai kyunki daeda angel ki tarah mumma se bhi pyaar karte hai na.. (angel nodded though she didn't understand the whole thing) aapki ritu maami gandi hai, unhe kuch bhi nahi pata, issliye aap unki baat mat suna karo.. (angel got angry)

Angel: litu maami paali, dada ganne… katti… (she jumped down from armaan's arm saying ritu maami pyaari hai, daeda gande hai, katti, armaan mumbled "beta armaan ho na ho ye chipkali tere bacho ko apni team mai shaamil karne ka plan kar rahi hai, narad muni bankar tere bacho ko tujhse dur kar rahi hai, angel ko to apna chamcha bana hi liya hai, iss se pehle wo aarish par koi hamla kare tu uski har koshish nakaam kar de, bata de ki tu tu hai aur tere aage sabka haath tang hai.." he thought a bit, in between riddhima comes out, aarish quickly rushed to her, riddhima picked him in his arms, aarish kissed her on cheeks)

Aru: gudmolning mumma..

R: gudmolning shona…

Aru: mumma je hum kaha aa gaye hai?? Hum ghumi ghumi kalne aaye hai??

R: ye rishu ka ghar hai, jab rishu chota tha na to wo yahi par rehta tha, hum ghumi karne aaye nahi hai babu, hum ghumi karke aaye hai waapis apne ghar par…

Aru: ab hum yahi par rahenge mumma???

R: hamesha.. aapko acha laga apna naya ghar??

Aru: (looked around, then makes a face and shaked his head, riddhima's smile got vanished, aarish smiled mischievously) acha nahi both(bahut) acha hai… (riddhima smiled and slapped him lovingly) pata hai mumma, aap jab ni the na(when AR were in bathroom) to rishu, angel ko darr b ni laga, ye ghal both pyaala hai.. (riddhima pinched his nose lovingly and nodded)

R: acha rishu, aapne daeda ko wish kiya??? (aarish instantly covers his mouth with his palms and looked at riddhima apologetically )

Aru: mumma aru bhul gaya, aru sorry hai..

R: koi baat ni shona, aap ab wish kar do.. (aarish nodded, and turned to get down from her mumma's lap, but again turned back, riddhima looked him questionably)

Aru: (kissing on riddhima's cheeks) mumma aru phil bhul gaya.. happy annivelshaly mumma, I lub you.. (riddhima smiled and kisses him back, aarish goes to armaan and try to pull him down)

A: kya hua dhaanu??

Aru: pehle goddi to uthao.. (slightly ordering him)

A: kyu??

Aru: kunki 2 gentalmen(gentlemen) ko equal khale hokal baat kalni chahiye..(armaan's eyes popped out and he looked at riddhima, she just smiled.. armaan picked him in his arms, aarish kissed him and in one breathe) gud molning daeda, happy annivelshaly n dhaanu lubs you inna saara (while opening his arms wide, before armaan could react, angel hitted her head a bit with her lil palms)

Angel: oh ooo.. aiche ni bish kalna tha, maami ne aul mum ne jaiche shikhaya tha baishe kalna tha, danchy ke shaath…

A: (looking at angel) princess konsa dance babu??

Angel: bohi.. bhai bo konsha danchi tha??? Channa (chanda) (then thought a bit, she slightly did steps as she forgot the lyrics)

Aru: angel je dance abi ni kalna, je danch to palty mai kalna hai..

Angel: to phil aapne abi dada ko kun bish kia?? Danchy bina bish ni kalte, mum aul maami che aapto daanti hodi aul angel cappy kalegi..(mumma aur maami se aapko daant padegi aur angel clap karegi)(saying so she showed him tongue) haina mum??? (she then looked at riddhima with excitement, riddhima tried to suppress her smile, riddhima wanted to tell them that party is not happening but)

A: angel aap daeda ki kon ho??

Angel: pinches..(princess, saying so she blushed)

A: to daeda ko wish karke dikhao??

Angel: (shaking her head) angel good girl, angel palty danchy..(angel party mai dance karegi)

A: par party to sham ko hai baby, tab tak daeda kaise wait karenge…(he made a baby face, angel turned her back as she didn't want to melt.. armaan looked at aarish with hope)

Aru: shorry daeda, agar ritu maami ka plomish toda to wo mujhe meri girlfriend..(he stopped and made an oops face as if his chori got caught, then looked at riddhima but she's looking at armaan thinking about party, aarish rejoiced in heart, then looked at armaan who gave an understanding look, then looked at angel with hope)

A: acha princess ko kiss se shaadi karni hai bade hokar??

Angel: mishtel almaa maik (mr. armaan malik)

A: yani ki mujhse?? (angel nodded) kyu??

Angel: kunki jich che aap paal kalte uche chadi klte(jiss se aap pyaar karte ho, shaadi bhi ussi se karte ho)

A: par mai to aapse shaadi nahi karunga..

Angel: (scared) kun???

A: princess agar mujhse pyaar karti to jo mai kehta wo karti par aap to meri bat nai maante…

Angel: phil ap mela kena kun ni manle??(phir aap mera kehna kyun nahi maan rahe??) aap paal ni kalte??? (armaan's amused)

A: mai bhi bahut karta hun angel se…par aap samajh kyu nahi rahe ki daeda se shaam tak wait nahi hoga…

Angel: pal ange choco(chocolate cake), shong, danchy, aul shabke bina bish ni..

A: sab.. aur kon kon hai?? (he asked excitedly, angel pointed upward, armaan looked upward and didn't find anything, he looked at angel but to his surprise angel's not in his arms, he's shocked and looked down, then between his legs but didn't find her, then felt a tap on his shoulder, he turned and found riddhima standing there with angel in her arms)

R: party shaam ko hogi ka kya matlab hai???

A: are tumhe nahi pata??(before he could say anything more, riddhima heard ritu and chirag's voice)

R: ritu chirag bhaiya??

A: are haan wohi to mai keh raha hun ki.. (before he could say anything, ri-ch entered in room)

Ri: riddhima apne bhai ko samjha na ki tune red color choose kia tha..

Ch: mai keh raha hun na green tha…. (both kept on fighting, finally riddhima screamed "shut up", both looked at her)

R: koi mujhe batayega ki kya ho raha hai ye sab….(finally trio told her everything, riddhima was kind of shocked but then realized that its not the time to react)

Ri: tu chinta mat kar, hamari paltan sab tayari kar rahi hai..

R: issi cheez ki chinta hai…mujhe dekhna hai sab… (saying so she moved out, armaan followed her) aap kaha jaa rahein hai??

A: jaha aap jaa rahi ho…

R: aap video game khelliye yaha par baithke, shaam se pehle aap niche nahi aa sakte…

A: abe oee, surprise gaya bhaad mai, mai akela nahi rehne waala..(before he could say anything more, he's already locked in room, armaan makes a face, then settled on bed, after a while he bangs on door tightly and almost cried like a kid) mai nahi, mai nahi, mujhe bahar nikalo, aise anniversary ke din koi apne pati ko akela chodta hai kya??? Yaad karo 10 pehle aaj ke din mere saath jeene-marne ki kasmein khayi thi aur aaj tumne mujhe iss tarah tanha chod diya…(but his pleads fell on deaf ears..)

On other side, riddhima was shocked when saw all the arrangements, ritu smiled proudly thinking riddhima'll appreciate her, but riddhima hits her head and glared at ritu, ritu smiled guiltily then mumbled "hitler kahi ki, smile karne ke to paise lagte hai iske, ek thankyou hi bol deti itni mehnat karne ke liye, par nahi bechari ke paas thankyou ki shortage nahi ho jaayegi, kanjus kahin ki…huhh", riddhima tapped her shoulder and said "mera naamkaran baad mai kar lena ritu, pehle jo aapne itne pyaar se aur itni mehnat se meri mehnat par paani daala hai usse thoda sahi kar dein..", ritu showed battisi and nodded…

Its 7o'clock in evening, armaan was sitting in room trying to concentrate in his favorite game but in vain, his face lightened when he heard some foot steps, riddhima entered in room, he quickly got up and tried to rush out, riddhima blocked his way..

R: kaha jaaa rahe ho??

A: kya matlab?? Party mai jaa raha hun..

R: abhi tum nahi jaa sakte..

A: kyu?? Mai to abhi jaunga aur agar ab tumne jayda tarr tarr ki to mai tumhe iss room mai lock karke chala jaunga… so beware…

R: (sweetly) tum apni riddhima ko lock karoge room mai??

A: aahh haa, jab issi riddhima ne apne armaan ko room mai lock kiya tha tab kaha gaya tha ye pyaar ye masumiyat??mai bechara chillata raha, gir gidata raha par tum….

R: par meri to majburi thi na…

A: aur meri tumse bhi badi majburi hai..

R: tumhari kya majburi hai?? (with a little taunt)

A: ye to ek baap ka dil hi jaanta hai, tum jaise sangdil log kaha samajh paayenge iss majboori ko, tum kaha samajh paoge ki mera dil kitna bechain hai apne aalubukhaaro ka dance dekhne ko…(riddhima makes a weird face and mumbled "unhi ke saath apni anniversary bhi bana lena, waise bhi beti ne to decide kar hi rakha hai beti se meri soutan ban ne ka, anniversary bhi advance mai hi mana lo mera kya jaata hai… bacho ki performance dekhne ke liye bechaini ho rahi hai aur jo biwi ne taiyari ki hai uski koi kadar hi nahi.. huhh", armaan came close to her and smelled deeply) kuch jalne ki smell aa rahi hai..(riddhima glared him) nahi mai to keh raha tha ki check kar lo niche khaana to nahi jal raha…(riddhima haldled him one suit)

R: taiyar hokar niche aa jao… (she turned to go but armaan holds her hand)

A: tum meri help nahi karogi??

R: hum to sangdil log hai, kaise aapki madad kar paayenge, rukiye aapke aalubukhaaro ko niche se bhejti hun, wo aapki help theek se kar denge… (before armaan could react riddhima pushed armaan in and again locked the door)

A: (makes a face and mumbled) mai bhi taiyar nahi hota, huhh, kar lo akele hi party, meri kissi ko koi parwah nahi hai..

R: shut up armaan aur jaldi se taiyar ho jao..(she rushed down and armaan sits on bed deciding not to attend the party, then after a while got up and gets ready, as soon as he entered in his room, he found door opened, he's surprised, he moved towards door, his irritation started vanishing as he stepped out of his room, it's all dark, don't know why his heart beats started raising a bit, he looked here and there searching for riddhima but didn't find her, near door a big arrow was made with colorfull and aromatic candles, pointing towards stairs…)

He moves on the flower path and reaches towards stairs and was surprised to see colorfull lights scattered on stairs, he with a smile placed his feet on step but screamed "aaahhh" as his foot got slipped, he closed his eyes tightly, with in a second he got flashback of his last 5 years and he wished with fear don't let the shadow of those days to fall on his future, and in next moment he's again surprised as he didn't feel pain anywhere,

he thought "itni saari stairs se niche gira aur abhi tak dard nahi hua, kahi mai seedha uppar to nahi pahunch gaya", before he could open his eyes he felt tickly all over his tummy, he laughed out loudly and finally opened his eyes and while laughing looked here and there, it's still dark, he realized he's floating downwards on lights bed, as he felt more tickly he placed his hands on lights but was again surprised when felt a rubber like thing on base

and then realized that air bag was suspended on stairs and lights were inside the air bag, he smiled widely, soon he's on ground floor, he thought "bas itni chotti si ride thi..", he looked longingly towards stairs which was still shimmering with colorfull lights looking like pearls, his eyes widened when all the lights went off and then gets on with green lights in first half writing "happy", yellow in middle writing "anniversary" and red in last writing "jaan", he gulped, before he could react he heard some "chuk chuk voice",

he kind of ignored it, but then heard a loud horn, he looked here and there while rubbing his ears and found an engine coming towards him, it stopped in front of armaan, it's a one sitter engine, at its back heart shape balloons were hanging and on seat one booke and a card was there, when he didn't sit in engine, its horn voice once again screeched in his ears and a voice is heard "kripya dhyaan de riddhimarmaan love nest station se love express rawaana hone waali hai, yaatrigan apna sthaan le..",

Armaan's not able to understand anything, he just followed the voice and settled in engine while hugging the booke and caressing the card… engine started and it slowly slowly started moving in between the balloons boundary following the track, and soon the engine started vanishing in the fog kind of thing, armaan thought that he's flying as the track was in wavy form, and soon he thought he entered in a new world, stars were so close to him, he could touch them if he wants to, moon's right above his head, it's as if following him,

there were small colorfull huts all around, followed by some dark jungle and finally his engine stopped in front of one decorated area, he kept on looking around, decorations were kind of weird, one side their was small swimming pool in which a couple was in each other arms and from their head water was coming out in different colors, other side their was hill which had trees covered with snow, everything's so colorfull, armaan made a confused face, his confusion grew more as he felt that he'd seen this world somewhere but didn't get where.. he's thinking when his heart thumped badly as suddenly in his ears one voice travelled… "pika pika…"

armaan took a minute to get balanced but then excitedly turned mumbling "pikachu" and was surprised to see his favorite pokemon (hope you all know who's pickachu) standing before him in real, though he's quiet big in size yet he's having all the similar traits as that of the small one, armaan unbelievingly picked him in his arms and kept on looking in his eyes, pikachu kept on mumbling "pika pika, armaan found the same innocence in his eyes as he used to find while watching pokemon on tv, suddenly clouds roared loudly, pikachu hugged armaan with his lil palms and mumbled "pika scared",

armaan hugged him tightly, armaan closed his eyes as something flashed in his eyes but immediately opened it and looked towards the source but didn't find anything except a baby pink colored cloth which vanished immediately.. pikachu jumped from his lap, armaan thought to follow him but again his heart thumped as he heard "hello dost..", armaan looked here and there but didn't find anyone, then he again heard "yaha waha nahi uppar dekho", as armaan looked up his heart stopped beating, he immediately falls on engine out of scarieness as he found one body floating in air right above his head, that body comes down upto armaan's level,

still floating in air and while looking in his eyes he body mumbled "kya hua dost apne best buddy se darr gaya, jiske jaise tu hamesha se udna chahta tha, jo bachpan se tera hero raha hai..", armaan looked at his blue dress and red cape at his back, armaan mumbled "superman" before he could say more, he screamed a bit as he felt pain on his hand, he looked down and mumbled "spiderman", hardly he completed he felt someone hitted him with a stick like thing, he turned and found bat ath the back of his seat, he confusingly mumbled "bat???" and heard "bat nahi batman" and found one body hanging in air with his head down and legs up, armaan looked at trio then pinched himself and realized its not a dream, he remained confused when heard some clap and found Pikachu clapping while looking at trio and excitedly mumbling "pika…", then armaam looked at the board that's above pikachu's head on which its written "welcome to the toons world.."

to be continued..

precap: intro of more cartoon characters, kids performance and their sweet banter, AR moments…

Note: aap sabne shayad party kissi aur tarah expect ki hogi but it was armaan's fantacy since childhood that he wants to live a life like a cartoon charater, so their anniversary party will be a toon party, stay tunned, will try to update before Sunday, wish light na dukhi kare…

Lots of love

Ankita

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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
res 😃 ------EDITED-------
Vaise tho mujhe laga aap 1st page pe 223rd part ke liye jo res chodke gayi thi vahan pe update karengi but shayd aap bhool gayi..😆..aur yahan pe update kar diya.. anyways update tho mila mujhe chaahe kahin bhi ho 😆
The conversation scene between angel, aru, armaan and riddhima was the most cutest convo ever. loved it. 😳
The cute antics of angel when she says "(showed him eyes and defending her maami) litu maami, aunty(she shaked her head)(ritu maami bolo, wo aunty nahi hai)" , "no kichy, (puts hand on armaan's eyes) gani cheezi ni dethe.. (gandi cheezi nai dekhte) eyej cose.. (eyes close)" and also other antics...loved it. 😳
There was a lil bit maturity and also lots of innocence seen when aru was conversing with his sis, mom and dad..loved it😳
hahaha... angel thinking that the only way to wish is by dancing in the party..lol... loved it too 😳
ehlooo shuru hogayi firse granny ki super duper hit party ideas 😆 😆 jo ki ab khaandaani ban rahi hai..😉 Haina Nehu momma 😆
Grannnyyy ye kyaaa 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 mai kitne acche se "chuk chuk, pika pika, superman, spiderman aur batman" ka maza le rahi thi aur aapne update ko yahin pe end kar diya 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭... did not love it.. chota update tha.. innneee din ke baad vala update inna chota sa 😭 😭 😭 😭
Overalll lovely update..
Meri farmayish sunlo : meko basket ball match chahiye AR ke beech including kids and chipkali etc etc... dikhadooo please.
Thanks for the update
Love-
Nishu 😃
Edited by hnisha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
Beete Kal se humko ..Seekhte janaa hai
Naye Kal ki kal kal se..Pal pal sazana hai

It was brilliant. Brilliantly written and full of a range of cuteness...😍

I love angel... main bhi tela angel☺️😆

dont tell me u are expecting a long comment frm me and that too on this update?? aaye haaye itni saari totli bhasha padh ke mera comment bhi totla aayega isliye rehan de...
next wali pe karungi acha wala comment... on a serious note i need to tring tring u to understand fully the whole cartooni idea🤔

see, m getting real on my emotions😆
Love you...
der se aati hai toh thoda bada likh ke aaya kar...aalsi...



Edited by Neha.K. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
😛Finally... Got update...

agar aap aaj nahi dati naa yaha pey ek strike shuru honeka plans horahi theeey..


nice update copntinue soon...

aap tho sunday sey pehle bola.. but sint mention which sunday and which month's sunday 😛😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
Finally u updated.....
Res!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey di de part was awesssooomeee..
luvd angel and armaan awww dey were so cuteee..
ommmgg luv riddhima's surprise 4 armaan..
cant wait 2 read more on de party...
plllsss try nd update de nxt prt sooonn
Edited by pari_044 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
amazing part dear
loved it a lot
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome part.
I loved it soo much.
The surprise is soo unexpected yet amazing.
Poor Armaan was locked up in his room.
Ridz worked so hard for the surprise.
Plz update the next part soonest.

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