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Posted: 13 years ago

Writer Note

Thank u sooo much everyone for such an overwhelcoming responce and beautiful commrents🤗means a lot to me...
plz keep reading it😳
Maria...remember me in ur prayers🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Destined Love

"Ms.Nupur Bhushan don't know why but I was feeling today is my luck with me"

A pulse drummed in Nupur's temple as she fought with her shocked expression and found herself numb for a moment to react at his soft, hoarse voice that was a mixture of bit teasing and flirt. "How do you know it's me?" Nupur put in hastily, trying to stifle her shock as this mysterious man began pushing her perilously close to nervous hysteria. He could sense the eagerness in her voice and chuckled.

"Do you really want an explanation??A soft flirtiest husky voice again hit with her ear drums she gulped of air those weren't the words she'd been prepared to hear, For the first time, a glint of blush touched Nupur's cheeks and arrogant, angry dark eyes. The transformation was startling, softening the features of her face that lately looked as if it were emotionless. To curtail the stretching silence Mayank spoke again, "so i explain you"

"Uh!! Hun, No, I don't want any explanation" she startled recollecting her all senses back and her neck muscle's tense as she made an obvious effort to control her unstable breath. "Really I thought you would be curious to know the reason" he chuckled enjoying the shaking beat of her voice. "Why would I be curious to know the reason as I hardly know you"

Her anger shot up now and her temper was about to explode as his flirtiest, husky tone really affecting her, the way she never felt before and Mayank suppressed smile enjoying her nervousness.

"Anyways I called you because...'"She paused a bit needing a moment of silence to gather her thoughts, "I am waiting!!!"He broke the silence with his husky voice and Nupur trembled in anger, "Will you hear me or I cut the call?" she warned in a dire tone ,her voice was gruff, "ok I am sorry" he bit his lower lip controlling his urge to smile at her irritation tone and Nupur took a deep breath sensing the genuine apology..

"Actually I wanted to talk about your proposal'" she spoke nervously rather absently tucking a strand of hair into place behind her ear, Ohh God how much its difficult .I CANT'T do this' She closed her eyes for a moment..But Remember Nupur you've no other way except it.

"I accept---I accept your proposal" She hastily completed the sentence and intake deep breath calming down her nerves. She waited for some reaction from him or his teasing remark but he spoke in soft, simple tone.

"Thank you so much"

Though he wanted to say more but he didn't as He didn't want to unleash his newly born emotions, to uncomfort her into an early retreat.

"Bye" after a huge silence she whispered and without hearing his reply she disconnected the call and threw her mobile aside, a shudder ripped through her, Finally everyone won and I lost Her throat braided at the pending onslaught of tears,

"Why does this sudden change in your thinking? Why do you want me to marry? Who are you to take decision of my life?"Her anger shot up and she regarded her father coldly.

"Because you're Intractable, egoistic, piggish, ungracious, misbehaver and I don't think any person wants to marry a girl like you"

"It's my name which is your identity, without my name you are nothing Nupur, everyone bears your rude, misbehavior because you're daughter of 'Rajeev Bhushan'"he burst out.

Why are you crying Nupur? You've taken this decision by yourself and now you've to prove your father you can take decisions of your life, you don't need him She choked on the obstruction and willfully maintained her stiff composure and roughly removed her tears with her palm.

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"I promise you'll never regret your decision" he did promise to himself under his breath.

pt 8...pg 52

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here is next update,i hope you'll like it😳
Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
That ws lovely...
And im so glad that she accepted his proposal...looking forward to their married life now..lol
Cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting to read more :):)
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice updt maria
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
cute update
plz cont soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
I thought she excepted aftr thnking but she has said yes becz of her father... Hmm let's see wt is store for them ahead
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful update.loved it 2 d core.
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was Amazing update Maria
its amazingly written by you
i loved it
waiting for next part
do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update Maria
exceptionally beautifully written
loved it
continue soon

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