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Posted: 13 years ago
Finally again caught up wid this ff read the missed parts nd totally drown in it i am speechless hats off to u mona:-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
FINALLY SHE CONFESSED
WHAT A LOVELY PART AND LOVED THE MAANEET MOMENTS
WILL HE TELL HER WHY HE WENT AWAY
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome dear...keep up the good work...
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Posted: 13 years ago



šŸ˜ Waiting...šŸ˜
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part

maan was searching geet and our innocent geet didn't let him talk and be guilty uff...

so sweet of her

thnx to those goons šŸ˜†

maan saved geet naa...

oh precap... 😃

waiting for that

thnx for pm

i know am too late but can't help it

pm went down and down

still 50 pmz are pending šŸ˜†

cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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update dee.. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago



PART-16

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These three words made maan feel like his life returned to him which he lost back..those three word solaced his heart which was in so much pain…even he knows that she loves him but this confession soothed his ears..he was craving to hear those three words from her mouth..he felt like he won the world today…geet hugged him tight expressing her love for him,how much she missed him n she cant live without him..maan too hugged her back…he closed his eyes feeling the moment assuring himself that he really heard those soothing words….


Geet hugged him tightly...maan hugged her back and closed his eyes rejoicing the moment...


Maan too hugged her tight..it seemed to him that his world returned to him after ages…he hid his face in her neck n hugged her even more tight n said "I love u geet…I love u"geet smiled and tightened her arms around his neck..she is caressing maan's hair with her one palm n other holding his collar tight….





They stood in that position for few minutes..suddenly maan felt that geet's grip around his neck loosened n before she could touch the ground maan held her in his arms holding her by waist.."geet…geet…aankhein kholo geet..plz open ur eyes jaan"maan said patting her cheeks while a tear rolled down his cheek seeing his jaan in that state…he felt very helpless when she is not opening her eyes even after many pleadings…."geet plz jaan plz open ur eyes"maan continously pleading her while patting her cheeks n rubbing her palms but she is not opening her eyes…"geet plz kuch toh bolo…plz geet"maan is pleading her with almost chocked voice n then he remembers that his car is li'l far away from there where left it…he instantly carried her in his arms n moved towards the direction of his car while pleading her continuolsy to open her eyes….




Maan finally reached the place where he left his car n he placed geet on the back seat of his car..he took water bottle n spilled water on her face.."geet plz open ur eyes…plz"he pleaded her again caressing her cheek..his plead worked this time n she slowly blinked her eyes trying to open them…


music...


maan smiled at her in tears…"geet…"he called her lovingly caressing her nape…she opened her eyes blinking couple of times n she smiled back at him still with droopy eyes….maan instantly hugged her tight….

abhi mujh mein kahin,
baaki thodi si hai zindagi

Jagi dhadkan nayi

jaana zinda hoon mein toh abhi


Maan hugs her tight ensuring himself that his geet is safe in his arms….he caresses her scalp still hugging her tight while a lone tear escaped from his eyes as he was scared for a second seeing her unconscious….




Kuch aisa reham is lamhe mein hai
Ye lamha kahaan tha mera...

Geet who is still in her maan's protective embrace opened her eyes which were still droopy n smiled feeling contented being in his arms..she felt so happy n relived after a week which was like hell for her with out her maan…she was lifeless soul with out her maan n her soul got life again…she slowly snaked her arms around maan's neck n held him more tight……



Ab hai saamne, ise chhoo loon zara
Mar jaaun ya jee loon zara




Maan broke the hug n looked at her angelic face which is now pale due to weakness….her eyes are depicting pure love for him…he is caressing her cheeks n nape with both his palms as if assuring himself that his geet,his jaan is safe with him…

Geet held his hands which were on her face holding it lovingly smiled at him with tears



Khushiyan choom loon
Ya ro loon zara
Mar jaaun ya jee loon zara




A lone tear escaped from maan's eyes n geet wiped it immediately n nodded in no…




maan smiled n held her palm with which she wiped his tear n kissed it numerous times…..

Ho abhi mujh mein kahin,
baaki thodi si hai zindagi


Maan kissed her forehead while geet closed her eyes smiling…..




Ho.. dhoop mein jalte hue tann ko,
chhaya ped ki mil gayi
Roothe bachche ki hansi jaise,
phuslaane se phir khil gayi


Maan kissed her both eyes n then her forehead n then cheeks as if assuring himself that he got back his geet again..she is with him really…geet also caressed maan's cheek n kissed his chin…she is looking at him without even a blink while tears rolled down her cheeks…maan held her face lovingly n wiped her

tears….



Kuch aisa hi ab mehsoos dil ko ho raha hai
Barson ke puraane zakhmon pe marham laga sa hai
Kuch aisa reham is lamhe mein hai
Ye lamha kahaan tha mera



Maan again hugged her tight in his embrace healing his n her pain which they suffered in this li'l seperation..they so much missed each other n it was not less than a death for them to stay away from each other..today destiny united them again n they are trying to heal their wounds which caused due to their seperation in this hug……




Ab hai saamne, ise chhoo loon zara
Mar jaaun ya jee loon zara
Khushiyan choom loon
Ya ro loon zara
Mar jaaun ya jee loon zara




he so much missed her smile,he so much missed her magical eyes which are the mirrors of her heart in which he lost when he saw for the first time…he is with her now but will he able to hold her hand forever??even he don't know??he is not able to understand whether he should rejoice this moment becoz he got his geet back,he is with her or cry thinking about future…



both are still sitting in maan's car in each other's embrace….none spoke a word but just hugged each other more n more tight assuring that whatever they are feeling or experiencing now is not a dream..their love is with them……their moment was disturbed with maan's mobile ring….it's dev's call who just landed in india n he is searching for them along with pinky…….maan asks them to come to that particualr place where they are now…..



Maan saw that geet drifted to sleep in his arms…she is very weak firstof all as she didn't consume anything since two days n that incident which took place with her stressed her more..she felt peace in his arms n slept peacefully..maan sat caressing her hair n his other hand hugging her tight ……




Pinky n dev reached there in few minutes n shocked to see geet like that..even though dev saw her for the first time he have respect for her which he developed listening about her from maan…and now she is his bhabi officially he cares for her now…pinky panicked first but relieved after checking her as she is weak for not consuming food n nothing is serious…



Pinky:bhai she have to eat something warna her condition may become worse…


Maan nodded n carried geet to the car in his embrace…."handa palace"maan said to dev.."no bhai"pinky protested immediately…



Maan looked at her perplexed as he thought that atleast her dad might be worried for her.."no bhai no one is there to care for her there…mrs.pammi handa is busy in her so called party..she don't even know that geet is here in this state n iam sure she is not interested to know anything…dev bhai aap mere ghar chalo"said pinky for which maan n dev nodded….maan held geet in his embrace protectively all the while caressing her hairs…


Maan(st):isilye geet isiliye iam doing this..iam hiding my truth from u..i just want u out from that hell n stay with them who cares for u who loves u…apne maan ko maaf kardo geet I cant even tell u the truth atleast not so soon..u already left shattered with this small seperation n if u come to know about me…no I don't have courage to see u breaking down again but how long I can hide from u..god plz help me…..

He kissed her forehead again……


precap:

maan sealed her lips with his to stop her from speaking further..he slowly nibbled her lowe lip n then her upper lip...

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maan taking care of geet...

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love..

-mona😳😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
@zaara-dear we already completed past in part14 itself...now we are in present😃




@piya-dear she will know about maan soon..dont worry..abhi abhi mile hai na...but she'll come to know soon along with a twistšŸ˜‰

hope ur doubts are clearedšŸ˜• if still u have any doubts ask me😃

love..
-mona😳
Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago

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