jai n bani fiction akshata ranveer part-2

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Posted: 19 years ago
#1

hi readers,

thanks for reading my fiction and responding to it so welll......

i think i will not waste time and get along to the second part of the sequence.....

precap:

then... he hesitates a little bit...and starts to say..." maiyen tumari sari bath sinli... mujhe aab sabkuch pata chal gaya hai...."

bani lifts her head... and stares at him....

part -2:

jai looks at bani ...they stare at each other for a while and then jai... starts to say....

" bani, mayine tum ko bahut taklef diya hai... mayine tumari bachpan ki sarii kushiya cheen leee hai.... maihee tumara gunegar hu".... his eyes start to water..... then he says..." bayeto bani... "..... they both sit in front of each other on the floor near to each other.....

" bani, tum rano, pia jab yaha ayhe the..to meiyn tum sab ko apne samne nahi dekh saktha tha.... gussa kartha tha.... lekin who meiyn apna kamzori chuparahatha... meiyn dar tha tha...ki mujse koi aur galti na ho...aur..mujhe koi baduva naa lage... aur...jo bhi mere pass bacha hai...who mujhe se china jaye....."

jai continues ..." meyin jab bhi tum sab logonko dektha tha...tho mujhe... use din huyi galati yad athi thi... aur tumare papa ki bat jo mere kano me gunj tha rehtha tha...."

bani interupts...."mr. walia....." with a strong stern voice....

but, jai continues..." bani, meiyn chahatha tha ki tum sab kush raho..lekin mujhe se duur.....lekin waqt ke saat bahut kuch badal jata hai....."..." bani, maiye yeh kehna chata hu.... ki.... meiyne jaan buch kar us din who accident nahi kiya tha.... lekin meiyne us keliye aaj bhi apne aap ko kasurvar mantha hu.... aur hamesha mantha rahunga....."



" bani, maiyne zindagime bahut sariyne utad chdav dekha hai.... lekin uske sath ek sapna bhi dekha hai... ki mera ek chota sa parivar ho... ek pyara sa parivar, jis me miyne apne bachon ke saat khel raha hu... baate kar raha hu........ lekin who mujhe kabhi nahi mela....... meiyne tab bhi akela tha...aur aaj bhi akela hu..... mere zindagi me... who hasin pal aya aur mere mehazuz karne se pehale hi chala bhi gaya...

..... lekin mujhe aaj patachala ki koi hai jo us pal ko aaj bhi mehasuz karthahai.....us pal ko bul nahi paraha hai... meiyn hamesha tum se dar tha tha...ki jab bani sach jan jayegi...tho who mujhe se door chala jaye gi.... is kash ma kash me... meiyne apne dil ki... bato ko...dil se bahar aanehi nahi diya...."



bani lift her head and looks at jai....as jai continues talking..... with tears falling from his eyes...

" meiyn jantha hu jo tum ne khoya hai...use meiyn lota tho nahi saktha....lekin aaj tumari batein sunne ke bad.... mujhe lagtha...hai...ki tum jo ab kar rahi ho..vo galat hai.... tum mujhe chahati thi.... aaj meiyn kehata hu..ki meiyn tume chahatha hu.... i love you bani....".....the moment freezes.....yes...yes ...jai has said it.... he has ..... bani is sitting there quitely listening to all that he is trying to say....

" aur.... yeh, hamara bacha yahi... ise hum dono ki zarurat hai.... ek achi parvarich ki zarurat hai... jo hum do no milke hi pura karsakthe hai....jo tum ne khoya who hum vapas nahi lasakthe... lekin... is bache ki parvarchi karke...meyin samjunga...ki... meiyn ne zindagi me kuch tho acha kiya.... aur bani, tum hi aachi tara samj sakthi ho ...ki bache ko ek maa aur baap dono ka saya kitna zaruuri hai....tum mujhe kabhi maff mat karna...lekin is bacheki... kuchiya...hum do no se judihai... us ke liye.... meiyn chahata hu...ki tum ghar vapas ajao.... meiyn chahata hu... ki is bache ko ....us ki hiseki saari kuchiya...mile...meiyn tume force nahi kar raha hu bani, lekin meiyn kahunga ki tum is baremeiyn zaroor sochna...."



after saying all this....jai who is now in all tears.... says to bani....

" i love you bani... aur meiyn chahata hu....ki tum hamesha kush raho...."

after this he wipes his tears and gets up and turns to go..... when he feels some one catching his hand.... and he looks back to see bani ..holding his hand... and looks at him.......



now...what do you think.... after all that jai said... what would bani say...would she go with mr.walia...or say that...all this doesnot mean anything to me....





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akshata_ranveer thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#2
please give your views about this fan fiction.... i would appreciate... if you just give some coments after reading it...

thanks
akshata.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwwwwwww man.. that was so beautiful mad me cry 😭 how could bani not go bac wit him.. he spoke his heart out ❤️ that was gr88888.. plz cont soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#4
ur an awesome writer!!

please do continue!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wowww....fantastic...pls continue soon.. 👏
just a request, can u post all your posts in one thread? cos it will be easy to follow... 😛 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#6
wow dats a real powerful scene there...great work..plz continue soon! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#7
i think bani will go to jai
they make a wonderful couple
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Posted: 19 years ago
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OHHHHHHHHH PLZZZZZZ DONT STOP HERE

PLZZZZZ CONT IT WAS TOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD

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Posted: 19 years ago
#9
thanks for all your support, i would get back to you with your new episode...please keep reading and post your comments please ...so that i come to know whether you liked it or not....

thanks
akshata

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