MUMBAI TO MORENA TO MUMBAI MJHT SS (UPDT)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Background-
Samrat has come back from jail after being proved innocent. He is falling for Gunjan, who is reserved about her feelings. Owing to a misunderstanding, Sajan are unable to communicate with each other. Meanwhile Mayank and Nupur have a fight when Mayank discovers Dia-Uday-Benji in his house, having discovered about the Mayur love. The Morena sisters have decided to leave for Morena with broken hearts.
My story starts here-
(Yes, my version of Morena track!)
Dia, Benji and Uday accost Mayank on the college ground.
Dia- Mayank! Kya hua? Uss raat humaarein jaanei ki baad kya kuch hua tum dono ke beech?
Mayank- No comments.
Benji- Toh Nupur chali kyon gayi?
Mayank- Nautanki, aur kya.. (Mayank starts walking off)
Uday- Mayank! Woh sach mein Morena gayi hai, waapus nahi aayengi!
Mayank- Mujhe kuch farak nahi padta. (His back towards the gang)
Dia- Mayank, aisa kya hua ki Nupur ko jaana para?
Mayank- Kuch logon ki bolti bandh nahi rahe saktei hain. Mere trust toot diya.
Benji- Trust? Dude, kaunsa trust?
(Mayank whirled around)
Mayank- Tum sabko kya parva hai iss mamla mein? Khush ho na ki Nupur humaarein baarein mein sab kuch batayi. Accha hua! (He looked away angrily)
Dia-Uday-Benji- WHAT!?
Uday- Mayank dude, Nupur humko kya batayi?
Benji- Hum bas guess kiya, sab kuch dekha hain!
(Mayank, exasperated, looked away and started walking away)
Uday- Didz. Sach mein Mayank Nupur ko pyaar nahi kartei hain!
(Mayank stopped and whirled around angrily)
Dia- That's right Mayank. Nupur hummein kuch nahi bataayi. Hum sab del]kha aur guess kiya.
(Mayank's expressions freezed and he looked shocked)
Benji- Hmph.
(Mayank came forward)
Mayank- Kya? Nupur tum sabko kuch nai batayi?
Dia-Benji- Nahi...
Mayank- Toh tumhe kaise pata chala ki...
Uday- Maine woh library wala kiss aur woh farmhouse ki hug dekhliya!
Benji- Uss group huddle ki waqt tumhara aankhon ki baat aur gol-gol ki baatein, aur woh akele ek kamra mein baat karna...
Dia- Uss ointment uss empty classroom mein... Woh sab hummein dekhliya. Play ki waqt wahi phool jo tumne Nupur ko diya..., Mayank. Hum yeh sab guess kiya. Toh hummein zarbadsti Nupur ko haan bolwaayi. Lekin woh hummein mana kar diya tha.
(Mayank looked shell shocked. He grew pale and blank.)
(Samrat came to the college gang t
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Shafy_Kaira_MN thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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if you are making this ss..

please do pm me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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in the process of updating
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Posted: 13 years ago
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will continue if several Likes and feedbacks pour in
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved the first part.
do cont soon
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nice job👏
do cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice part dear.
Send me pm when u next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it yaar!!!!!! do pm me!

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